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Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/13 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 10

lol @ "This kitchen is closed, mister." 

I like Leighanne and Brian's relationship too. Although I get the feeling that he's slightly attracted to Annie! Hmmmm



Author's Response:

Maybe so... And I'm glad you're liking the little funny bits I tried to throw in here and there. 

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/13 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 9

Woohoo she is going!



Author's Response:

Yay, Annie!  lol

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/13 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm glad Leighanne is being nice to her, I thought she might be catty! That must've been hard for Annie to say...already read three chapters lol.

By the way I apologize that it seemed I had dropped from the challenge, although my time is tight I will not quit!



Author's Response:

I wanted to write Leighanne as a likeable character.  And like I said before, it's good to see you back!  I understand what it's like to be super busy.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/13 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 7

Well no wonder she's so hesitatant even if she really wants it. 



Author's Response:

Yes.  It's complicated for her.  I'm interested to see how you respond to the rest of her backstory later on.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/13 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

That would be the hard part of being a doctor; losing a patient. Hmmm but it looks like she might take Brian's proposal.



Author's Response:

She just might!  Good to see you back!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 10:52 pm Title: Epilogue

Well Emily, I have to say that I've loved this story from start to finish and can't believe I've come to the end so soon.

I do love a happy ending and I'm so glad this had one.  I'm also glad I got this story in the challenge. I haven't got anything but praise for this story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Steph!  Your response has been awesome!  Sequel coming soon, I hope!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 55

That chapter choked me up a little, the part where she was talking at Andrew's grave and said "meet Nick".  I'm a big softie lol.



Author's Response:

That's what I was going for!  Glad I got the intended response!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 53

Wow, what a bitch Lauren turned out to be!  Those last few chapters have been so packed with drama, which I love.



Author's Response:

That has no bearing on how I feel about her in real life.  I actually think she seems really good for Nick.  But sometimes someone has to be the sacrificial lamb, right?

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 51

Aw I really feel sorry for Nick as well, I know it's Annie who's suffering physically but no one ever really thinks about the father do they?



Author's Response:

It's true.  They don't.  Of course, there was more about that later.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 49

Thank god she's going to be OK, but I wonder if she even knew she was pregnant, probably not if she had irregular periods due to the missing ovary (I'm guessing).



Author's Response:

Good thinking!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 46

So she's going to call him and spend some time with him, I can't wait!



Author's Response:

Well, I guess by now you know that didn't go so good!  But at least he was there when it happened, right?  And it ended well....

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 43

That was perfect!



Author's Response:

Is this the sex scene?  I had such a time writing that!  Glad you thought it was "perfect."

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 42

It sure is burning up for the two of them ;) Woohoo!!

I really need to be leaving better reviews than this don't I? LOL.  Onto the next chapter...



Author's Response:

LOL.  I'm just glad you're into it! :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 41

I actually like Leighanne in this story, she's fun and I love her little distractions lol.

LOL I think Nick must've heard the 'fun with a Backstreet Boy' conversation too :)



Author's Response:

Haha!  I'd forgotten about Leighanne's "distractions" lol.  I wanted Leighanne to be a likeable character in this story.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/13 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 40

I can't imagine how hard that must be, to have people hanging around outside your house like that.  It would get so annoying.  Good idea about the 'For Sale' sign though lol.



Author's Response:

It would!  This is why I'm glad I'm not a celebrity.