Date: 08/30/12 07:09 am Title: Chapter 8
Lol. I love them together. I wonder if Nick's Dad or Kevin is Brian's real father....
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~Lenni~
Author's Response: Hmmmm interesting theory. Kevin's his cousin for sure. But good guess, Lenni! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/29/12 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
B'awwww Winnie the Pooh! The best thing to ever come out of my city, LOL. I really enjoyed this chapter with the two of them having Thanksgiving dinner. It was really sweet. And of course Nick would imagine which Disney princess were hot. I liked how you ended it with Nick reminding himself to ask Brian who his favourite princess was, haha. Cute one :)
Author's Response: I love Nick and Kevin's relationship in this story. Confession, I've never actually watched Winnie The Pooh. But the quote really seemed to fit. I think the princess stuff is something Nick would think about, cause he's such a guy. Thanks Steph :)
Date: 08/29/12 05:33 am Title: Chapter 7
"The one with a goat on his wall, lived the secret life of a womanizer. I was shocked. "
LMFAO.
Uh anyway the rest of this was good too! I liked the reveal that Brian took Howie's girlfriend without realizing, and sweet Howie wasn't so innocent and was being super vengeful. Also enjoyed Nick dressed up as Baby Spice, lol. I'm all caught up now! Great work on this so far, it's really good!
Author's Response: LOL that is probably one of my favorite lines of the story so far. I can see Howie acting all sweet and innocent and being a real bastard, he hides it so well. Nick dressed in womens clothes highly amuses me. Glad you enjoyed everything :) thanks Steph!
Date: 08/29/12 05:28 am Title: Chapter 6
LMAO at the part where Nick said he'd never be in some cheesy-ass boyband! Bahaha! But I was kinda sad at the part where he said he never picked up an instrument again. So no hope for the college boys becoming the BSB and touring the world? lol kidding. This whole chapter was really funny. I also liked how Nick was commenting on AJ's sexuality, and how he's like "look at him. He's wearing eyeliner." haha.
Author's Response: LOL I loved that line too! Blame Kevin for taking away his drums ;) I always thought AJ was bisexual so I decided to have Nick just comment, because it amused me so much. I love writing comedy. Thanks Steph!
Date: 08/29/12 05:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh Brian that hick not approving of the frat. I could definitely see that though, and even though it's AU and they've got quite different backstories, you're doing a good job of keeping that Frick and Frack relationship intact, which I love!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that. I love their bond that is forming in this story, and I wanted to give them opposite backgrounds here a little bit, but keeping their same personalities. It's hard to do that with AU. Thanks for the compliments Steph.
Date: 08/29/12 05:14 am Title: Chapter 4
I like the Disney quotes at the beginning of the chapters. You always choose ones that are so fitting! I really liked Nick and Brian bonding a little bit over pizza, that was cute. And also Nick's description of being hungover. Ugh, that's so the worst feeling in the world, haha. Also enjoyed the end bit where they were talking about the frat. Dun dun dun! haha. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I like the Disney quotes too. What I do is write the chapter first, then find one that kind of goes along with the theme of the chapter before I post them.
I have to agree, although I hardly get completely wasted, hangovers are definitely the worst. The frat stuff is fun, glad you like it. Thanks Steph :)
Date: 08/29/12 05:07 am Title: Chapter 3
Hahaha omg, this chapter was brilliant! It had a really good college kegger feeling to it where so many things were happening at once and it was hard for Nick to focus on just one. And the end part where he had to take a bath - haha! Love it.
Author's Response: Brilliant? Aw you're making me blush. To be perfectly honest I've never been to a real party...ever. I had to make everything up. The beer pong scene was hard because I've never played it, someone had to describe it for me. I loved writing the bath part too, Brian taking care of him was adorable :) thanks steph!
Date: 08/29/12 05:01 am Title: Chapter 2
Awww poor Nick. That must be hard for him, seeing everyone else have a relationship with his parents when his are gone. I did enjoy the part where he got Brian to say "There's a snake in my boot!" though, lol. Great work so far :)
Author's Response: Yep Nick is still having a hard time with what happened to his parents. I liked that part too, Brian really reminds me of Woody. Straight edged cowboy lol
Date: 08/29/12 04:58 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL Brian the super hick. And I enjoyed the Disney quote at the beginning as well as Nick comparing himself to Aladdin. Who wouldn't want to have a pet monkey? lmao.
Author's Response: Aladdin is one of my favorite Disney movies EVER. I bet Nick would want a pet monkey. I also love hick Brian, he is super fun. Thanks Steph!
Date: 08/27/12 11:29 am Title: Chapter 7
Totally loved this chapter. Nick dressed as 'Baby Spice'is an image that is stuck in my head. Lol! They are never gonna live that "performance" down. Im kind of mad that Howie is taking his issues with Brian out on Nick. Not fair at all! I'm still on the fence about these Pikas. They seem like all they're about is hazing the guys. Enjoying every moment of this story. Keep writing! :)
Date: 08/24/12 03:54 am Title: Chapter 7
I think Kevin's gonna have a damn shit fit - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 08/22/12 06:15 am Title: Chapter 6
So I am still loving this story. But I thought the Pika scavenger hunt was kind of weird. They didn't say why they had to do it. They are so mysterious. And I know that's the whole appeal of pledging at a frat but it's putting me on edge. I feel like the Pika have something up their sleeves, and it ain't a good something. I hope Brian and Nick know what they're getting themselves into. I don't want either of them to get into trouble with the Pika, Kevin would kill them. Howie is sort of a mystery too, I hope some more light is shined on his background soon. Literally, LOL'd when I read the bit about NKOTB :) Keep writing. Really enjoying seeing the different perspective on Nick.
Author's Response: How was it weird? Weird in a good way or weird in a bad way? Not sure what you mean. Is it something I can fix?
Thanks for the review. I have been enjoying this as well as it is something different.
Date: 08/22/12 02:07 am Title: Chapter 6
Agreed. Why must things be so daned complicated.
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~Lenni~
Author's Response: Exactly. Thanks for reading and reviewing Lenni :)
Date: 08/20/12 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Don't do it Carter. You fit in fine where you are at now. Jeez.
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~Lenni~
Author's Response: Just did. Thanks for reading, Lenni!
Date: 08/20/12 04:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Really? He mentions TMNT???? I'm going to have to look for that now. I'm a TMNT nut - lol. And of course, I absolutely love Disney.
And Carter, do NOT join the frat!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Yep he did mention that, and I also thought of you while including the ninja turtles stuff. I believe the video is in frickfrackgirl's channel....it is a funny video. Thanks for reading, Lenni!
