Date: 10/28/12 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
"Guilt trip enthusiast" ahahahahahahahhahaha I love that line.
i loved how u played Kevin and howie in this chapter. Kevin being the oldest brother role and howie happy that he is second oldest. Old enough not to feel Kevin's wrath but not old enough to have to be the hard ass on the younger guys.
i like how nick gets the "oh shit, I'm in trouble look." Can't wait to read Kevin's explosion for this incident.
Loved the use of a flashback to early years!
Date: 10/17/12 05:06 am Title: Chapter 6
In his defence, he didn't know it was PCP.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response:
I'm getting there lol It's been hectic with uni I haven't found the time to transfer what I've written on paper to the computer! Sorry for the epic slowness
Date: 10/17/12 05:04 am Title: Chapter 5
Yes, he has to go. Nick's his best friend & little brother. He needs to be there.
~Lenni~
Author's Response:
Love me some Brian/Nick bromance
Date: 10/16/12 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay! A Kevin chapter! I love Kevin SO much lol And thanks for the sooky explaination. I can see Kevin worrying the way he was but at the same time forgetting that he hasnt' seen the rest of the guys in such a long time. It was nice that AJ went to pick him up at the airport. I love how easily he caved at the end there! LOL I would too. Kevin has this 'way' about him. I like to call him an intimidating teddy bear. That's how I picture him in my head. Great job! As always, looking forward to seeing what happens next! And yes, you should definitely add Running Up That Hill to your list. Two other great fics that are old school so you may have already read them, are Come Together by Cecilia and Documentaries by Izzy! LOL and don't feel bad. I can never remember anything. I used to call my fic Why i'd blah blah blah lmao
Author's Response:
I find Kevin to be so intimidating, particularly if you're up against him. Love the teddy bear image though haha I actually haven't read that many fics to be honest. The only couple ones I have read haven't been on this site. I can't remember the name but the story was fantastically funny and had all the bromance elements I crave too lol But I will definitely add those to my list. I'm thinking of adding a new post to the forum so others can help me find fics to read when I have more time. Thanks again for the review! I really appreciate it :)
Date: 10/16/12 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
Haha AJ wimped out around Kevin pretty quick and told him what Nick took. Now lets see how Nick tries to explain to Kevin why he took PCP. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Kevin seems so scary to me lol so I wouldn't have lasted any longer. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 10/09/12 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like how you blended humor in with the drama in this chapter. Poor Nick and his vomitting, yuck! And you introduced me to a new word, sooky. I love how rambly Nick's thoughts were as he fought to try to figure out what was going on and how he was mad and confused about the guys caring all of the sudden. I also agree with what you said about AJ in your last reply to me. I think he wants to be a badass too! It's nice to see Brian caring enough to get on a plane and go see that Nick's okay because i'm not sure if real life Brian would do that and that makes me sad. I enjoy picturing Brian this way. Can't wait to see what happens when Kevin shows up! It's really great to see a story like this on the most recent page. Besides Running up that Hill by Sakabelle, there aren't too many authors who write bromance anymore. (I used to all the time! lol)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I knew I would have some issues with the language difference lol I honestly did not think sook/y was Australian until I read this review and looked it up haha. It basically means cry baby, so 'you're such a sook' translates into 'you're such a crybaby'. I totally get what you're saying about Brian. I agree with you, I don't think in real life he would come down. Oh and I'll add 'Running up that Hill' to my list...I'm compiling a list of stories I'd like to read once uni is over for the year and I've been through your's too, just looking at the summaries and I'm really looking forward to reading 'Why I'd do it again' (I'm really bad at remembering names so sorry if that's not correct), 'Scattered Pictures', the 'Revelations' trilogy and a couple of others I've just blanked on. Thankss again for the lovely review!
Date: 10/09/12 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
Loved the new chapter! "Don't tell Kevin." Ahhh nick that option went out the door when u called Kevin. Can't wait to see that interaction soon.
lokking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Kevin/Nick is my favourite interaction so I can't wait to post it lol. Thanks again!
Date: 10/08/12 12:36 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm hooked! Pretty good so far!
Author's Response:
Thankyou! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 10/07/12 04:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow, PCP that stuff will for sure mess u up. Oh I see the Carter family drama coming up since it was his Mum's hang up that had him all upset.
glad Kevin is going to help out, hope to read lots of Kevin and nick bromance in future chapters.
Cant wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I love Kevin and Nick bromance! I can hardly find stuff on here with bromance so I thought I'd give it a shot. Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Date: 10/02/12 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
I loved the build up of emotion and anxiety in this chapter. I admit, the thought of AJ threatening anyone made me smile a little, but in the heat of the moment I could completely see him doing something like that. Lol at Nick's head in Howie's crotch. I had forgotten all about Brian lol I'm glad to see he's involved in the story now. I am happy that Kevin is heading down there. I love me some Kevin & Nick moments. Great job! :-)
Author's Response:
To be honest, I always viewed AJ as a wanna be bad boy and I don't mean that in a terrible way at all! I get the impression he's really gentle but would like to be bad ass now and again :) Thanks for the review :)
Date: 10/01/12 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Another awesome chapter. I love how you flash back to other times when he's counted on the guys, because sometimes he really does seem like a lost child. I like how you've captured the group as a family. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 09/30/12 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm liking that you are writing the past and present and look forward to seeing what's going on :)
Author's Response:
Thankyou! I'm planning on doing the whole past and present thing sporadically. I hope it doesn't get confusing.
Date: 09/30/12 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awwww Nick! I just want to hug him! I like how you've shown the contrast between the past and the present and sort of how Nick has changed over the years while getting progressively more and more closed off from the others. It's really interesting, I dig it! Really enjoying this so far and looking forward to more :)
Date: 09/30/12 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really liked how each of them when woken up were like "who would be waking me up? Oh, that's who." That was a really nice touch and I thought it worked well to link all the scenes together! I also liked the flashback, and I'm curious as to where Brian is in all of the stuff happening in the present and what his thoughts are on Nick's actions and how he's been in the tabloids recently. Really enjoying this so far.
Author's Response:
Yay someone picked that up lol Thanks for your reviews! Brian will be showing up in the next chapter. I can't leave him out for too long :)
Date: 09/30/12 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww poor Nick! Of course he would call Kevin when he's in distress but what does he expect him to do when he's in Florida and Kevin's in New York? Classic Nick though, lol. Too drunk to realize and his first instinct is to call Kevin. I feel so bad for him, for both of them, really :(
