Date: 11/20/12 04:32 am Title: Day Thirteen: Isn't It Ironic?
Loved it. Can't wait to see how it's going to be when yazzy and nick see each other again.
Date: 11/20/12 04:07 am Title: Day Twelve: Poor Pussy, Poor Pussy Cat
Ooooooooo loving it amazing job.
Date: 11/20/12 03:48 am Title: Day Thirteen: Isn't It Ironic?
Where do you come up with this stuff? I can't wait for your next update!
Date: 11/20/12 01:32 am Title: Day Twelve: Poor Pussy, Poor Pussy Cat
THat was the most awkward thing i could have ever read lol! Why does Brian have to ruin something so hot?
Date: 11/19/12 09:50 pm Title: Day Twelve: Two Tricks and a Treat
Trouble for Brian and Nick with their women then? Interesting stuff! And I love that he's attracted to Yazzy, even in a pig costume :)
Date: 11/19/12 09:27 pm Title: Day Twelve: Two Tricks and a Treat
go Yazzy!!! wow ... I can't believe he did that at a party that Lauren was at even! oh my gosh I can't wait to see where this goes!!
Date: 11/19/12 09:20 pm Title: Day Eleven: White Liar
of course he's having second thoughts working on the story he's working on with Yazzy... that and he can eat what he wants... I wouldn't be able to stand someone watching what I'm eating. I have a hard time doing it myself but if someone pointed it out or said "you look like you gained weight" I would get really ticked.
Date: 11/19/12 08:33 pm Title: Day Eleven: Steam Heat
oh yikes Lauren is on to him and his Yazzy fantasies! Mmmm shower sex scenes are much easier to read then do *whistles*
Date: 11/19/12 05:02 pm Title: Day Twelve: Two Tricks and a Treat
So I have this big shit eating grin on my face right now. Is that ok that I wanted this to happen? I feel like I'm betraying someone's trust. I mean I kind felt like this was coming but I didn't think Yaz would cave in. But it's Nicholas fucking Carter, irresistible sexy as hell, you can't just ignore him, unless your dead.
I actually laughed out loud when Nick opened the door and screamed like a little bitch cause of Yaz's costume. I'm still laughing in my head. I can just imagine his face.
I'm totally invested in this story. I'm rooting for my girl Yaz. I'm sorry but Lauren just seems like a bitch. I just genuinely don't like her. She rubs me the wrong way, it feels wrong.
Anyways, awesome chapter. You're doing an amazing job. Can not wait for more. ;0)
Author's Response: Hell yes he's irresistible. Her guard was done too because randomly yanking pins out of one's face has to be disorienting. :p I can so see Nick screaming - akin to Everybody Backstreet's Back. It would figure he would think of himself as the only horror show that night. :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/19/12 06:12 am Title: Day Twelve: Two Tricks and a Treat
Fantastic as usual! I can't wait for more even if he is a..... Pinhead for kissing another woman ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Nick's a giant Pinhead, but then again, he is NICK
Date: 11/19/12 06:03 am Title: Day Twelve: Two Tricks and a Treat
I read this at work but I had to collect my thoughts afterwards. DAMN!!! I knew Nick has a thing for Yazzy, the two of them are cute together and honestly I think Lauren is a bit controlling. Like he really wants to eat a whopper when she makes him eat a salad. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Girl, you shouldn't be reading this at work probably from now on. LoL the story's taking a turn for the steamy. :) I have a feeling Nick's more of a Big Mac guy than a Whopper guy, but I so know what you're saying!
Date: 11/19/12 05:09 am Title: Day Twelve: Two Tricks and a Treat
Omg u can't leave it there. I need more. Amazing job.
Author's Response: KaoticUnicorn insists I stop until his next chapter's posted. Which I just did. More coming soon!
Date: 11/19/12 04:55 am Title: Day Twelve: Two Tricks and a Treat
I'm a bad fan but i was so happy that Nick went behind Lauren's back to kiss Yazzy! More of them please!
Author's Response: LoL you can join the others in the bad fan group then!
Date: 11/19/12 04:16 am Title: Day Twelve: Two Tricks and a Treat
Oye vey. Of course, he's going to cheat on Lauren.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Oye vey...he's such a dog. :p
Date: 11/18/12 12:58 pm Title: Day Eleven: White Liar
So the truth has been revealed... Brian wants to leave Leighanne. Not surprising to me, she's been up his ass for a while now. Being together literally all the time can get annoying as hell, marriage or no marriage.
As for Nicholas wanting to leave Lauren. That doesn't surprise me either. I think Lauren is a little bit overwhelming and a lot a bit controlling. You don't have to be perfect all the time. It's unrealistic and boring.
I think Nick writing the story with Yaz is what's got him to thinking about his relationship with Lauren. When he's with Yaz he seems more himself and just totally relaxed.
Well I'm very curious as to how these new revelations are gonna put a very welcoming twist to this awesome story. Can't wait for more. ;0)
Author's Response: there's quite a few more twists and turns left in this one. Thanks for the review! :)
