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Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/13 05:03 am Title: Chapter 10

Well, that was easy. I guess well be going to kuala lumpur after all.



Author's Response: Oh nothing's EVER easy! Except maybe this...but we'll see :)

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/13 02:56 am Title: Chapter 12

lmao!!! Sneaky bastard!  And how the HELL can Parker sleep thru all THAT?!  



Author's Response: Lol Nick would SO do that, don'tcha think? As for Parker..,.:smile:

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/13 02:39 am Title: Chapter 11

Oh, how I love stories in which Nick plays with little kids....



Author's Response: Totally hot, right?

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 11

I love Nick! Macie needs to enjoy her trip with him and enjoy being appreciated by someone since her husband doesn't seem too.



Author's Response: Don't we all love Nicj? Lol. The trip chapters will be here soon!

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 11

Carter is hot as is...but stick him on the floor playing with two 2 year olds..yeah..she's done for...lol  That's a whole new experience for Rielynn...a male figure actually PLAYING with her.  Nick is already proven he's 10 times the man/father Charlie is.  

Which makes me start to wonder if he really is having an affair or if he's just married to his job instead of his wife.  My ex was like that...a TOTAL workaholic.  One of the biggest reasons I divorced him.  That old fashion way of thinking where the man works and the little woman stays at home and takes care of the house and kids..yeah, that don't fly with me...and it sounds like its not really flying with Macie either.



Author's Response: The day Nick becomes a dad in real life I am so screwed because that is gonna be hella hot. Lol. Brian was hella hot when Baylee was little. It's the dad factor. As for Charlie...all will be answered in due time! Thanks for the reviewwww!

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 11

EEEEEEKKKKK she is sooo fallin for him.. and nick totally has a thing for her too they are soo darn cute i love it!!!! can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response: Lol they are cute aren't they? :) TFTR!

Reviewer: JordansLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 11

great chapter cant wait for more..i always love your stories 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm having a lot of fun creating this world :)

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 11

I love the description of Macie's purse lol!It sounds like my purse.I have stuff in there that I know I will never need but it's there "Just in case" lol and it's such a disaster area.I even clean it out every week and it still ends up the same way lol.Oh and trying to get a toddler to sit still really is a lesson in futility lol.My brother's first experience with a photographer was a complete nightmare for the guy at the place where my mom got his pictures and my mom lol.I swear they both needed a drink afterward cause if my brother wasn't trying to crawl away the whole time he was crying his eyes out because he hated the little bow tie my mom made him wear lol.I also love that Macie looked at Nick in his Mario bros shirt and thought he looked hot lol,She's in big trouble isn't she? lol Anyway great chapter!Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Macie's purse = the constant state of MY purse :) and Rielynn reminds me of my daughter---pictures are absolute hell unless I have wi-if and put the intro of Mickey Mouse clubhouse on repeat! Lol. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 05:39 am Title: Chapter 10

wow. he sucks! :( Could've put up a little fight or looked a little bit bummed.

Author's Response: Well he did ask if Nick was just a friend. Totally counts as jealousy right? #Sarcasm

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 05:39 am Title: Chapter 10

I don't know what bothers me more,The fact that Charlie was trying to shut Macie down again,Or when he did finally let her talk it seems like he doesn't care.Not that I think he should be all jealous and fly off the handle about the whole thing but he could have shown alittle more concern about his wife going to another country with another man.Something tells me Charlie has secrets of his own and that is why he isn't that bothered by this and not because he thinks it will be a good learning experience for Rielynn.Anyway, Great chapter!Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: What two year old is going to learn anything going to a foreign country at two? LoL. You're exactly right. Thanks for the review! Stay tuned! :)

Reviewer: JennayHeartsNick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 03:32 am Title: Chapter 10

Well then...shoulda known you'd have a good reason for her to go instead of Parker to stay...lol #shouldaknownbetter

And my god...I bet she could never come back and Charlie would never even notice.   College app?!? HELLOOOOOOOO asshole! She's only, what? TWO?! Wow...dude needs to get his head outta his ass..cuz here comes Nick Carter!! haha!!!



Author's Response: I always have a reason :) OPDS is a serious disease y'know!!! Nick Carter is a force to be reckoned with. Except he's kinda married too. #Damn

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 01:21 am Title: Chapter 10

What a jerk! He could at least pretend to be happy to see his wife!



Author's Response: Maybe that WAS him being happy #SadAintIt? #LoL

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 12:55 am Title: Chapter 10

oh bless her heart.. i think deep down she wanted him to get mad, get jealous, say NO.. not be okay with it.. i mean sure if she is like me and she wanted to go she probably would anyways but darn you would think your husband would mind if you were going to take yourself and ya'lls child away for a week without him going and with another man none the less... i really dont like this guy.. he is prolly screwing the receptionist lady .. :( update soon great chapter! in my mind i totally want her and nick together but i dont want their relationship plauged with bad vibes by them cheating.. hope it happens in a way that they wont be ashamed to tell the kids later on in life...



Author's Response: Of course she wanted him to get mad or jealous! Seriously, what husband wouldn't even at least MEET the person that's taking his family out of the country? What a dipwad...lol.

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

OH BOY! Great Chapter! Totally didn't expect her to say yes before talking to Charlie but at same time i find it very crappy of him to not care what his wife has to say to him makes me think something is def up with him and if he isn't cheating himself then i think that its still pretty crappy of him to realize that he has a family at home that isn't going to wait around on him forever... its not fair to either of them.. i thnk its soo sweet that nick is such a great dad because good dads are totally hot..espec. when they are NICK CARTER haha! great chapter can't wait for more.. bad part is Charlie prolly wouldn't even notice that they are gone... :(



Author's Response: Oh it's totally crappy of him. But is he cheating? Or is that just the way he is? And I also agree with you that Nick Carter + Good Dad = Dripping Hotness!!!! Thanks for reviewin' :)

Reviewer: Rainbowbrite006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 04:38 am Title: Chapter 9

I'm glad she's going! Looking forward to more! :)



Author's Response: Thanks for the review!