Date: 09/14/13 11:07 am Title: Chapter 4
"He could probably pass himself off as a Carter."
should I take that description seriously? Will Tim be revealed as Nick's long lost half brother or something before the story ends? lol.
I'm glad to tell you that I think I'm getting a hold of this flashback then present scene combination of yours. It's brilliant actually. I just have to read a bit slower or else I need to re-read the whole chapter. :)
Author's Response: Yes! An evil twin, shh! Don't tell anybody though! And yay! I'm glad it's getting easier to follow for you. I don't mind being called brilliant, so feel free to keep that up too! ;O) lmao
Date: 09/14/13 11:02 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh my! that howling sound is not good. I'm glad everyone seems to be okay... for now. I'm trying to imagine the position of the van but it's no good. Why is Brian below AJ? If the van turned upside down, which explains why AJ was up on his seat. Was Brian not wearing his seat belt or something?
This is just me, Mare. Please don't think that you might not have described the scene perfectly. You know sometimes it's hard for me to understand descriptions in english. *blushes*
Author's Response: No, you have every right to be confused, and yes I'm up at 6 am on a Saturday lol *shakes head* I was just talking to Julilly about my van description woes throughout this story, the other day. I think the problem with choosing a van is because there are SO many different types. The one I'm talking about is where the seats are separated in the middle so AJ would be in one while Brian was in the other behind Kevin. He was wearing a seatbelt but he would have been directly behind the driver's side. I know there are other types of vans that have a long seat without a divider. It's not one of those. I struggled with the van every time I had to describe a different aspect of it so it's not you, Ritz! You were right to ask! I feel like that's my only epic fail in this story, I was just hoping no one would notice! :-/ LOL Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/14/13 06:25 am Title: Chapter 26
Yqy for that last line and the FBJ getting involved. Can't wait to see how Nick's doing though. But knowing you, we won't find out anytime soon. :(
Author's Response: I wonder why everyone assumes it's Nick? Hrmmm lol Thanks, Bob!! LOL And yes, you do know me, so waiting is involved! But as we're getting closer to the end, not as much waiting as usual! :O)
Date: 09/13/13 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 26
Two of the members?! OH PLEEEEEEASE let Kevin had talked Tim into letting Nick go to the hospital!!!!!!
I love these little "interludes" as you call them. Just a LIIIITLE bit of info to go on and then continue reading to catch up.. Still loving the angst of this story!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jennay! I'm glad you're enjoying the interludes! I kind of do too because they are less emotional and the chapters are shorter for me to write! LOL Hrmm... perhaps you may be correct or perhaps you may not be! You shall see soon enough! ;O)
Date: 09/13/13 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 26
I am really happy that the FBI is getting some info. I can't wait to see what happens to the others. I was so excited to wake Up to a chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! Yup slowly more will be revealed as we get closer to the finale :O( lol
Date: 09/13/13 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 26
Ooooh this is getting good!! Can't wait until the next update!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 09/09/13 11:48 am Title: Chapter 25
The conversation between AJ and Brian was really good, I could really understand why they felt and reacted the way they did. Especially Brian trying to be the strong one and finally having a weak moment, that was realistic. Tim talking about the birthday cake really worries me, he better not offer Kevin the poisoned one. I also laughed at AJ sayng nick attracts insane people LOL. I don't know if I can wait until Friday but can't wait for a new chapter, Mare!
Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! Nick really does attract wackadoodles but I think that's one of the reasons why we love him so much. He keeps things interesting. LOL Tim and his damn birthday cake, huh? We'll have to see how that all plays out! Sorry about the wait. I hate how real life is getting in the way of my fun fanfic filled one! :O)
Date: 09/09/13 03:17 am Title: Chapter 25
I'm caught up! Wait...that means I have no more to read...that's an issue. Work on that. :)
Author's Response: YAY! Well you know me and my anal self will have a new chapter for you by Friday! LOL
Date: 09/09/13 01:19 am Title: Chapter 25
I like seeing Brian and AJ switch places and I'm glad that Kevin is ok. I'm starting to get nervous about the poisoning idea though!
Author's Response: Aww everyone's all paranoid about the poisoning thing now. Understandable I mean ever since this adventure started how smoothly has anything Howie planned gone? lol ;O)
Date: 09/08/13 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 25
Omg, I didn't realize what Jennay (?) states in her review, about Kevin eating the cake instead of Tim! *shoots Mare an ugly glare* Don't you dare hurt poor Kevin even more or I'll have to show up in your story and kill Tim myself! The poor guy only just got back to the group and you're already hurting him so bad. What did he ever do to you? ;)
Author's Response: How weird! I just responded to this and it's not there! LOL I hate when that happens!! Here I go again...Now wait...Jennay said that not me, it's just speculation and as far as hurting poor Kevin? It's his fault for leaving in the first place! Of he hadn't left that entire NKOTB debacle would have never happened! He's lucky I only broke his ankle! ;O)
Date: 09/08/13 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter, Mare!
The comment about Nick being a magnet for crazy people had me like laughing out loud. It made me think of all the fanfics where he ends up being Nicknapped, shot, stabbed, tortured or hurt in any way. What do you think that says about us writers?? ;)
Author's Response: I know! LOL he really does seem like a magnet for crazy though, just based on some fans. We are all nuts!
Date: 09/08/13 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 25
Aw poor Brian, he's always the more optimistic one, so to see him lose it is hard. But hopefully they will find someone, and not end up at the cabin too!
And I have to love Tim's craziness, whistling away like he hasn't got a care in the world. Shame Kevin's so badly injured and can't beat him to a pulp!
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Shame Kevin's so badly injured and can't beat him to a pulp! LMAO I love you! That would suck if after all of that they all end up in the cabin! Thanks, Steph!
Date: 09/08/13 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 25
I like vulnerable Brian. You write him well.
Author's Response: Thanks, Emily!
Date: 09/08/13 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh no!!! Tim's gonna feed Kevin cake when they get back!! Don't eat the cake Kev!!! Don't eat it!!!
Author's Response: LMAO!!
Date: 09/08/13 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 25
I'm here! lol I didn't stop reading, just hadn't a lot of time to review. :(
So, first, I've to bring back my sign #TimTeam He's really really really crazy. And that's why I love him! lol
Poor Kevin. He's really afraid because... yes, you've lied to poor Tim! I'm both afraid and curios about what Tim would do when he will find out the truth.
Second. Can I make you a little statue? Because just this morning I was saying on Twitter that I needed to read some Brian's comfort stories and what you gave me? A comfort scene! I love you. lol And it was soooo good. It's how I see Brian, always trying not to let the others see him weak because that's how people had always seen him because of his heart. *my baby*
So, great job and I'll keep reading even if sometimes I don't review.
Author's Response: I did see your tweet earlier in the day and was going to mention this scene but I didn't want you to feel like you had to read and I honestly thought you had stopped. I'm glad you liked it. I know you would have preferred Brian and Nick but I honestly think AJ and Brian have always had a unique bond as well. I do see him always trying to hide his emotions and be the strong one there for everybody. I'm glad you think I did him justice. Tim gets a lot crazier as we go on. LOL I mean total yikes crazy! So, you'll have that to look forward to. Thank for taking the time to review, Cinzia!
