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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/13 11:19 am Title: Chapter 24

Oh hell. I felt so bad when Howie thought about killing himself with the pills :( it kind of really put things into perspective with how bad their situation is.

Loved the part where Howie told Nick he was his best friend. I think Marilyn is Tim's mother by the way. Great chapter Mare!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! Yup, definitely not a good situation. Yes, it's Tim's mom. It's one of those things we know but Howie and Nick wouldn't. :O)

Reviewer: Jenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/13 02:45 am Title: Chapter 24

This is such a good story but then again I wouldn't anything less. I'm still reading but have slacked giving you the feedback you deserve :( Poor Howie having to resort to killing a man so Nick could survive! Nick grower weaker by the hour. I can only imagine what happen next....

Author's Response: Thanks, Carrie! Glad to see you're still reading. Sometimes when people stop reviewing I am afraid the story is getting too dark and I'm scaring people away lol Glad to know that's not the case. Poor Howie and Nick, I haven't been very nice to them. :O(

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 24

Geez. So much happening, hopefully now that they've figured out the Aspirin issue, Nick will start to perk up a little bit (or a lot). I don't know what Howie's going to do once he realizes that Kevin is with Tim, but so far this "plan" doesn't seem like the most fool-proof one. Crazy how Nick's condition is making Howie so sentimental, but I don't blame him, I can't imagine what a situation like that would make you think.

Author's Response: Yeah, I kind of picture Howie the type to not really ever let the guys know how he feels about them etc... but in a crisis I can see him maybe regretting that and wanting to share because he knows that Nick is the complete opposite and always shares his feelings. I over analyze a bit when I write and I agree, this plan is a very Scooby Doo plan! lmao Thanks, Sam!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 24

What a sad chapter, I really felt for them both, and I also love all the brotherly love. I still have a bad feeling about the poisoned drink, but hopefully Tim will accept it, especially if he sprinkles it on the cake too. I just hope no one else drinks/eats it.

Looking forward to more, hopefully Tim getting stabbed with a poker :)

Author's Response: Aww I know what you think is going to happen! ;O) and LOL @ the stabbing! Thanks, Steph! I hope you're feeling better!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 24

Yeah, you are cool, but yet mean for keeping us in the dark even longer.. and poor Nick for slowly dying.. why does he make it so easy for us writers to torture him? ;)

Author's Response: I know, poor guy. It's not like he's this tiny little vulnerable guy either. LOL

Reviewer: Jujube Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 24

ah, I really hope this works and Howie and Nick can get out! Nick doesn't have much time! Or hopefully the cops and FBI find the boys and then find Nick and Howie!

Author's Response: We shall see what happens!! Thanks so much for taking the time to comment! :O)

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 24

I love that Howie admitted to Nick that he was his best friend. I also hope that the plan works and Tim gets knocked out by the pills! Good chapter!

Author's Response: Aww thanks, Kyrie! :O)

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 02:50 am Title: Chapter 23

Kevin's with who? TIM. He's with Tim. Gah- I think it's bedtime.

Author's Response: Well technically Kevin is on the way to the cabin so it's only a matter of time before he is with Nick, your brain just jumped ahead there! ;O) lol

Reviewer: emily_michele Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 02:02 am Title: Chapter 23

I love these two together, and since we know Kevin's with Nick, I'm dying for a Kick scene! Perhaps that's inappropriate terminology...

Author's Response: There will be a kick scene. I use that too! It sounds better than Nevin! lmao

Reviewer: Kyrie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/13 12:20 am Title: Chapter 23

I love Howie for being Nick's protector. This is a terrific chapter and I agree with Nick, let's poison Tim!

Author's Response: Thanks for saying that, Kyrie! I appreciate it!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 23

I am a mess right now :( I lost it at the part about Howie calling him selfish and Nick not wanting to lose the others. Then Nick telling Howie to go and him refusing got to me again. I love these two. Poor Nick knows he doesn't have much time left :(((

Author's Response: Aww, sorry about that. :O( This was kind of a sad chapter to write. I agree though I love Nick and Howie together too! Thanks, Tracy!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 23

So heartbreaking the way Nick has just given up. Howie is right, he's going to have to kill him, but poison hmm, I'm worried that if he finds poison someone else will get it by mistake. Better to stab him with that poker :)

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: lmao you would want Howie ti be all stabby and gory! Thanks, Steph!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/13 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 23

Hmm, I have a hard time believing Howie could do something like that, even if it was the only way to save both Nick and himself. But then again, we will have to wait and see if he actually will. Sure looks like something will need to happen soon if you don't want to continue the story with only four Backstreet Boys to survive this whole ordeal. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Aww, I know. The situation is getting pretty dire now, huh? You never know what length's people will go to when it comes to surviving. We shall see if Howie has it in him! Thanks! Nijntje!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/13 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 22

LOL I had to laugh at Tim mentioning his birthday again, did he want them to break out in song and sing Happy Birthday to him :D And the way he stroked the gun like it's a cat, like he's Dr Evil or a Bond bad guy. Love it!

I was so glad Kevin was able to persuade him to take him, good plan as now they have the number plate. But I still have a feeling it won't be easy as it sounds. Tim can't keep up the 'Mr Nice Guy' image for long before the crazy shows through.

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: LMAO aww now I'll picture Tim as Dr. Evil! And yes, I think he really does want someone to sing Happy Birthday to him. :O) I'm sure the crazy will be coming out again soon! Thanks, Steph!

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/13 04:59 am Title: Chapter 22

AHH!!! That was such a good chapter, Mare! Damn, now we have to wait until Friday or Saturday?? That's like three days away, too much! lol Such a good twist though.

Author's Response: Yay! thanks so much for saying that, Same! :O) Yup, I'll really try to update on Friday night. Glad you enjoyed that little twist! lol