Date: 05/22/14 05:16 am Title: Chapter 26: Brian
That's it! Kevin and Howie planning out self defence for themselves! After the incident with Tony & Joey, it cant be helped to really think something is off. and with the police themselves not giving much information, something smells too fishy. I just hope they won't be led to a worst situation. but, that too is impossible since the story is just beginning to open up. hehe. Nice of you to mention Leighanne & her twitter posts. ^_^ but, i guess i like Leighanne so for now I really don't understand their problem yet. haha! this is fanfiction anyway, and everything is possible. I'm glad for your continuous updates on the story. I am always looking forward to each new posts. thank you very much!!!! :D
Author's Response: Good to hear from you again! You know that the situation is just going to get worse from here on out. If it didn't than there would be no story. ;) I find it so funny that everyone is suspicious of the bodyguards and the detectives. Perhaps you're all correct though ... you will have to wait and see.
Date: 05/21/14 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 26: Brian
I have this mental image in my head of Howie and Kevin going to buy guns..and I can't forget Leighanne going to twitter putting the boys in danger like that I suspect something fishy going on ;) Great chapter! :)
Author's Response: Howie and Kevin going to buy guns would turn into a massive comedy routine. :) Howie would likely be too scared to pick one up and Kevin would probably do massive amounts of research to ensure that they picked the "best" kind. LOL
Date: 05/20/14 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 26: Brian
Was having a bad day at work. It's nice to know that I can have a good read with an update from you. Poor Brian, embarrassing himself like that. Hehe. So what's tmz saying? Will they be blowing the guys cover soon? I feel like tmz always finds people. Anyway, I do like that bit where Kevin says Brian did exactly what he was supposed to do. I agree. Kind of like a shoot first ask questions later situation they got themselves in. they should stock up on weapons. I feel they need a gun, but I think they'd accidentally shoot each other. Oops. Well I sense more trouble and cannot wait for it. I only love drama in my shows and in my fiction heh.
Author's Response: Sorry to hear that you were having a crappy day at work. I've had way too many of those lately. Ugh! Can you imagine Kevin and Howie trooping into town to buy a gun?? - LOL I think that might counteract the whole "let's not draw attention to ourselves" motto that they've got going at the moment. I agree that they would probably wind up shooting each other by accident in a moment of panic ... although that might add to the drama. More trouble is ahead!! :P
Date: 05/18/14 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 25: Kevin
I love when you write in Kevin's POV. His thoughts on the guys and the situation always get to me the most for some reason. Loved the line "Is this a Kentucky thing?" lol And of course Leighanne would take to twitter to bitch. That sounds about right. I still am not buying the families are safe. They are the best way to get the guys out of hiding. I know if I was a psycho villain, I'd be paying one of them a visit. You could probably guess who! LMAO I'm still thinking there's something slightly off with these detectives too. Maybe I just like thinking everyone is looney tunes bonkers! Being sane is so overrated though! Okay, enough babbling...long story, short - great chapter! hehe
Author's Response: I find writing in Kevin's POV almost as hard as writing in Howie's POV. So, it's good to know that you appreciate how he "sees" things. I couldn't resist taking a small jab at Leighanne's constant Twitter posts. *rolls eyes* If you were a psycho villain, I have a pretty good idea who would be first on your hit list. ROTFL!!
Date: 05/17/14 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 15: Kevin
Before I even got to the Eminem line I was thinking of the Stan video lol.
Yes, he needs to speak to the police.
Author's Response: I actually heard Stan on the radio while I was doing the outline for this story and that's how I got the idea for the look-a-like. I still find that video to be super creepy!
Date: 05/17/14 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 14: Nick
Wow, so they were away this whole time and didn't have a clue! But who is the look-alike and why was he murdered? Is it someone really after Nick? This is seriously fascinating stuff :)
Aw, I loved the moment between Nick and Brian too.
Author's Response: I love Frick and Frack moments ... both reading and writing them. I'm thrilled that you have so many questions at this point. Some of them will be answered shortly, while you will have to wait to find out the answers to the others.
Date: 05/17/14 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 11: Brian
Oh god, that message really got me :(
Sorry my reviews are short, I'm more of a reaction review type of person lol.
Author's Response: The length of the review doesn't matter. I just like to hear what you're thinking. Sometimes a "reaction" review is actually they best because it means that it's most likely an honest review. Glad that the message stirred up some emotion. :)
Date: 05/17/14 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 24: Nick
Well, once again my Nancy Drew senses have kicked butt! Now onto what I would do if I were them is seriously second guess having those guys in charge of their protection since Brian - who is gnome sized - was able to basically beat the crap out of one of them! LOL perhaps they might want to rethink their security personnel plus who knows? Maybe one of them is working for the bad guys and really WAS intent on trying to kill or at the least maim one of them. I love how Howie and Kevin just kind of sat back and watched the other three goofballs go at it! Then Kevin says "Eh...who wants coffee?" lmao great chapter.
Author's Response: I love Nancy Drew! Have I mentioned that before? I used to read them all the time as a kid. I just busted a gut at your description of Brian: "gnome sized"! Poor Brian! He may be small, but he's all kinds of sexiness! Everyone seems to have it out for Joey and Tony ... are they coming across as mean?? :P
Date: 05/15/14 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 25: Kevin
First off, glad to hear Brian is your favorite. Me too! Hehe. Yay for more Brian fans. Coffee actually keeps people awake? I know that black goodness puts me down haha. Oh and... Noooo leighanne stop unintentionally jeopardizing the guys safety. I hope its unintentional. Hehe. Things are just gonna get worse before they get better. I like. Keep up the great work. This story is such a tease. I want more but I am waiting patiently. Well, ish.
Author's Response: Yay for another Brian fan!! There doesn't seem to be too many of us around ... I wonder why that is? My best friend and I have been Brian girls since the very beginning. :) I need coffee to wake me up. I don't know how it can bring you down. Crazy! LOL In reference to the story, things are going to get a lot worse before they get better!!
Date: 05/15/14 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 6: Kevin
I suppose it's all about to become very real for them now :(
Enjoying this so much, but it's getting late, so I'll hopefully be back to read more tomorrow.
Author's Response: You have no idea how "real" it's going to get ... Hurry back and keep reading!! LOL
Date: 05/15/14 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: AJ
I'm glad they're going together, they can console each other. Wow, can't believe Leighanne said nothing, what a cow!!
Author's Response: Hahaha! I love when people refer to others as "cows". Are you British by any chance?
Date: 05/15/14 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 4: Howie
Poor Howie, what a way to find out :( But I'm glad he had the two girls there, and that they were normal fans and not crazy nutters.
Author's Response: I wanted to make Howie find out in a different way (i.e. not sitting at home with his family) in order to mix things up a bit. I debated about having the fans be nut-jobs, but in the end I just couldn't make Howie's experience any more horrible.
Date: 05/15/14 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 3: Brian
Heartbreaking :(
But also loving it, so emotional.
Author's Response: Hopefully, you knew that Brian's reaction would be heartbreaking!! I added the Baylee bit in there just to tug at your heartstrings. :)
Date: 05/15/14 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: Kevin
Really enjoying this story, it's so well written and has me hooked already. But it'll probably take me a while to get up to date.
Hmm, I'm wondering where Lauren is? And I really feel bad for the boys, what an awful thing to find out and have to deal with.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you're hooked!! You are a bit behind, so just don't look at any of the other reviews because it will give some stuff away. At this point, everyone is wondering where Lauren is!
Date: 05/15/14 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 25: Kevin
They haven't followed the rules before! You know what would be really funny? If they were being hunted down and running thinking they were in danger or something and in the end it was just the wives planning a party or something crazy for them the whole time. Like they realize they were never in any danger. And the body gaurds could be the bad guys. A lot of time it is an inside job! As for where I live, New Mexico BSB hasn't been here since 2001 I believe so yeah when I saw them other times it was in Nevada.
Author's Response: Bahahahaha! If that whole party thing were to actually happen at the end of all of this I could totally see AJ losing his shit! So many people are wanting the body guards to be the "bad guys". What does everyone have against poor Joey and Tony?? LOL I hope you have an amazing time at the concert! I've seen the IAWLT tour twice and it was excellent both times. Although, I wish they had played a bit more new material and less of their "hits".
