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Date: 08/25/05 11:40 pm Title: 25

omg...i cna't believe this....so the sick fuck is pretending to be Nick's dad.?!?! OMG...too bad Patty couldn't help out more..but Maria and Tyler suspicious? Dang...that has got to be intense, since he works with them and all. I wonder what AJ has to say? I really do love this story!

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Date: 08/25/05 11:25 pm Title: 24

Don't tell me that Scott was right there watching? They have to catch him before he hurts Nicky! At least Tyler is letting Kevin come along to help out. the suspense is killing me!

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Date: 08/25/05 09:31 pm Title: 23

Nicky has to be okay...he just has to be...*sighs*...The hell that kevin and jackie and everyone must be going through...my god...I cant imagine...and now am terrified to step out of my house...got the doors locked and everything...patthetic, I know...but hell...its such a good story, its well worth locking myself inside for!

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Date: 08/25/05 09:11 pm Title: 22

There is just something so incredibly sexy about Kevin breaking down in to tears...mmm... Anyways, they have to find Nick. It's good that Aje will be ok, but Nicky has to be too...he has to be. He's probably so scared. *sniffles* Loved the chapter though...love the story. It's one of the best I've ever read

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Date: 08/25/05 08:47 pm Title: 21

omg...poor Nicky..and AJ was hurt too. Damn, they have to find Nicky alive..they just have to. God, my heart is pounding so badly right now...and Brian is an ass telling Kevin it is all his fault...Kevin did his best to make sure everything was okay without getting them involved...damn. Love the chapter

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Date: 08/25/05 08:25 pm Title: 20

oh my god...you cant leave it liek that...luckily, the next chapter is up since I am a little late reading! but what a chapter, Kevin's detective work is amazing...he needs back on the case...like, head of it. He knows what he is doing...and why do I have a feeling the code has something to do with Nick? By his reaction...oh god...I cant s top reading....you are talented, girl!

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Date: 08/25/05 07:48 pm Title: 19

oh wow...so Lisa and Stacey were the same person? So maybe thats how Scott knows so much bout Kev? Lisa was an aquantance of Scott? I dunno...but Kevin is in deep. I hope he doesnt get himself killed. Damn...intense. Love the drama though. I live for drama!lol

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Date: 08/25/05 07:30 pm Title: 18

omg...Lisa? Lisa was killed? How did I have a feeling this would happen? but was she associated with WIlson? oh, wow...damn. I can't believe that Kevin and Howie are restricted to the office only because Tyler is being an ass clown. Kevin better get back on the case. He has to! Great chapter, and as always, reading on because i am ADDICTED!!!

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Date: 08/25/05 07:06 pm Title: 17

Poor Jack...he seems innocent enough, but is he? That Scott is a pure evil psychopathic...ARGH...breaking in to some innocent mans house and using an old phone line to trace it back to the wrong person> How SICK. I love the chapter though..i just cant stop reading.

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Date: 08/25/05 06:43 pm Title: 16

so the guy calling Kev is somebody different than this Scott person? hmm...things getting a lil more complicated. Kevin needs back on the case and Tyler needs to be stuffed away somewhere else. Poor Nick though, so horribly frightened for his big brother. Another awesome chap!

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Date: 08/25/05 04:50 pm Title: 15

oh shit...one was missing? And this guy needs to leave Kevin alone! What did he ever do to anybody? Psycho stalker freak! At least Kevs and Nicky are feeling better...but I have a feeling that things are just gonna get worse for everyone. Incredible chapter! Love the s tory!

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Date: 08/25/05 04:36 pm Title: 14

Lisa is so not understanding...I mean, if Kevin can't tell her the whole truth, its cuz of his job...she should now that! Kevin can do better than her. Poor Kevy and Nicky though...both sick and throwing up. Hope they feel better soon!

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Date: 08/25/05 04:09 pm Title: 13

Nick is absolutely adorable...hopefully Lisa wont be a bitch when Nick comes along for a short time. And Kevin, wrapped around his little brothers finger. Classic...hehe...really cute chapter. Loving it!

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Date: 08/25/05 03:42 pm Title: 12

so Kevin is off of the cases now. So why do I have a feeling things are just going to get so much worse? At least him and Lisa are, as it seems, going to try to make things work out..even though she feels they are too different. Another great chapter...I have a feeling I will definitely be finishing readng today, because I cant tear myself away!

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Date: 08/25/05 03:16 pm Title: 11

holy shit....you had me scared to death there! I would be flipping out, running to my car and driving quickly away...far far away. Sucks that Kev's car wouldnt start...which I have a feeling Scott had something to do with. But damn, my heart is still hammering away. JEEZ! Great chapter though...truly amazing.