[Report This]Date: 07/14/05 02:33 am Title: 25
WTF!?!?!?!?!?! I bet A.J. will say the man looks like Dad!!!! I just bet he will!!!!!!!!!!!! Dammit!!!!!!!!!! WTF ARE THESE PEOPLE TRYING TO PULL!?!?!?!?!?! ARGH!! AND WHERE THE F*CK IS NICKY!?!?!?!?! HOW DO WE EVEN KNOW HE'S STILL OKAY!?!?!?!?!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LMAO okay okay okay....relax!
[Report This]Date: 07/14/05 02:17 am Title: 25
i'm waiting for the next chapter girl, this story is awesome
Author's Response: Aww thanks Luisa!
[Report This]Date: 07/14/05 01:47 am Title: 25
ooohh boy...i know you said you had a change of heart, but maria being the bad girl is totally unexpected, which is why it made sense. No one would have suspected her right? She's ALWAYS there and was always the one that is showing concern. You know what's creepy? that Kevin worked with her and she's pretty much working for Kevin and to know she's the one behind this...im STILL unsure who the bad guy is though even though you did tell me something...btw, im curious what AJ gotta tell, i hope he has something concrete, that would so totally help big bro! Ace chappy mare! and you get a cookie for that huge twist!
Author's Response: LOL believe it or not that wasn't the change of hert, The chapge of heart hasn't happened yet. hehehe
[Report This]Date: 07/14/05 01:29 am Title: 25
What was that about Maria being under Kevin? Oh working, right? What? I didn't say anything hehe
Great chapter mare, that was a big twist that I really wasn't expecting. I still don't know what's Maria's role in all this but I'm sure she can be a great villain (lets kidnapp Kevin now lol) And I hope you like Plutonians because you will expending some time with them. ROTFL
Okay seriously now, I'm really not sure where are you going with this story. Too many questions right now. I mean, if this guy has been playing the 'dad' role for a long time, does it mean Nick was always his main target or are we going to find out that there is more than just one bad guy?. In other words, I'm loving the story and you are doing a great job having me wondering what's going to happen next. Yes, I need another update lol
Author's Response: LOL I knew you were not going to like that! I've been wanting to tell you for awhile that Maria was always intended to go this direction heheh well at least I didn't make her a procrastinater right? hehehe ;O) Get writing!
[Report This]Date: 07/13/05 11:46 pm Title: 25
i wouldn't like to have guesses anymore but here it is... is it possible that their father went psycho and staged his death? i'm sad and still confused... :(
Author's Response: Hrmm maybe? lol
[Report This]Date: 07/13/05 11:35 pm Title: 24
what's there that's just right on his face?!?!
please, don't let anything ham come to Nick...***feeling gloomy here***
Author's Response: aww lol
[Report This]Date: 07/13/05 11:27 pm Title: 23
it just so happened that my player is playing 'Incomplete' and i feel like that right now, without our little Nicky around. i feel sad, and this chapter is so deep and full of elaborate thoughts..i can feel the emotions of the characters. Sorry for taking this so long. i got so much work to do, am very much pressured.
Author's Response: Never apologize for not sending feedback lol it's awesome that you even take the time to stop in I appreciate it. :O)
[Report This]Date: 07/13/05 11:00 pm Title: 25
I'm gonna be stubborn on this one. The only one I know that has been in the family for years is Rob. I still think it's him. He's been convieniently quiet lately! Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!!! Keep up the awesome writing!
Author's Response: Aww thanks Roxy :O)
[Report This]Date: 07/13/05 07:56 pm Title: 25
maria definatly sounds evil....i hope nicky is okay!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Aww poor Maria.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/05 12:27 am Title: 24
Great chapter! I can't wait until Kevin finds Nicky! I'm 97% sure that Rob is the kidnapper. Where is he when all this is going down? It's always about Tyler, Kev, and Howie when the crime scenes are being investigated. It's got to be Rob. There's no one else. Nicky knows Rob, he's like an uncle to him. He was good friends with his father, now he's Kev's supervisor. There's no one else that could make Nicky feel safe when he's away from his family. I can't wait to find out if my instincts are right! Keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: hrmm we shall see ;) thanks for the review hopefully i'll be back on Wednesday with another one.
[Report This]Date: 07/07/05 02:48 am Title: 24
yay i got another part!!!! what a surprise yippie *dancing around* thanks so much mare! and hey my husband might be the bad guy???? why do i always get the jerks *wails* lol if my husband didn this to nicky ill kill him and marry kevin!
Author's Response: Yes you had another part! Sorry not letting you marry Kevin in this one! lol You are already taken!
[Report This]Date: 07/07/05 02:25 am Title: 24
*WHERE* was the picture taken!?!?!?!?!?!?! Is THAT the *BIG* clue he missed?!?!?! I think it is....lol....
Man! NEXT Wednesday?!?! I don't wanna wait that long...*whines * pouts*....
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LOL Yes always Wednesday sorry :( good question hrmmm lol
[Report This]Date: 07/07/05 01:16 am Title: 24
ok that's a really really mean cliffy! What clue is staring right back on his face! aaahhhh!!! and since im no nancy drew, im drawing blanks! *mersey draws blanks all over a piece of paper* You gotta update again soon! and ick, he even had the audacity to ask how is aj doing! pppfffttt!!
Author's Response: LOL it's the game Clue silly see? Howie was carrying the game with him. hehehe that was dumb sorry it sounded better in my head. Muah! Love ya!
[Report This]Date: 07/06/05 09:56 pm Title: 24
hmm....detective felicia (lol) has her suspicions....she beleives that patty doesnt know her dad cause hes always away on business, so he is the guy who nick saw but patty didnt recognize.
Author's Response: Aww well detective Felicia we shall wait and see if you are correct or not ;o) LOL thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 07/03/05 08:55 pm Title: 23
Wow, that was a deep chapter. I'm taken aback by the use of that meeting playing in Kevin's mind. Such a great use of words. You're an amazing writer and I hope you never get sick of hearing that because it's not going to stop anytime soon. You're so talented. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Wow thanks so much Roxy that was really sweet of you to say :) I hope you enjoyed the chapter.
