[Report This]Date: 07/01/05 06:02 am Title: 23
WTF!?!?! I BET IT'S PATTY'S FATHER!!! I BET IT!!!!!!!!!!! GET NICKY BACK!!!!!!!!!! HE CAN *NOT* BE DEAD!!!!!!!!!! *NO* F*CKING WAY!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LOL! Why can I picture you yelling at your computer screen?
[Report This]Date: 06/30/05 08:06 am Title: 23
the first night is the worst...i have to say that you wrote this so well that it's not really fiction at all. i mean, this thing do happen in real life and i actually put myself in kevin's shoes and the desperation he must have gone through knowing his little brother is out there. I have to stress again that my fav part of this story is when the parent said something about not being able to sleep cause every second could be 'IT' the moment where their son would just be a memory. sigh...that got be bad. Now this is my fav chapter so far, lol...so you got a lot going on for the next chapter missy! lmao
Author's Response: Aww Mersey you are another one who is always too nice to me! I know I pay yu well to say those things but still lol
[Report This]Date: 06/30/05 02:54 am Title: 23
i hope its a happy ending. and i hope patty can help :)
Author's Response: :D me too! lol
[Report This]Date: 06/30/05 02:53 am Title: 2
This was good and cute especially when nicky say that he would run from the stranger but he would run with the dog.
Author's Response: LOL aww yes Nicky wants a puppy
[Report This]Date: 06/30/05 02:22 am Title: 23
oh wow what a chapter. im so amazed at how beautifully written it is. you are blessed with an amazing talent for writing mare. the story was awesome. you should get this published next
Author's Response: THat was such an incredibly nice thing to say Anita! You are always way to nice to me :) *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 06/30/05 02:17 am Title: 1
That was great and interesting chapter with alot of mystery and action. good hon keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 06/28/05 11:17 am Title: 22
I LOVE how this chapter really shows the love the boys have for one another! I love it! I can't wait for the moment they find little Nicky safe. Honestly though, I think Rob did it. I think there's some unresolved issues between Rob and Kev's dad. Can't wait for tomorrow's update!
Author's Response: Aww thanks Roxy :) hope this week you get answers (although maybe not lol)
[Report This]Date: 06/26/05 03:48 am Title: 22
i knew something like this would happen, i was just waiting for it. i hope nick is okay.
Author's Response: Aww hopefully we'll find out soon enough :) thanks for stopping by :D
[Report This]Date: 06/26/05 01:47 am Title: 22
excellent job with the chapter i loved it amazing and heartbreaking i cried!
Author's Response: Thanks as always Anita! :D
[Report This]Date: 06/23/05 03:50 pm Title: 22
ok you know how this is THE most anticipated chapter to date right? You'd think we'd be left feeling some kind of relief after this chapter, but NOOOO...you HAVE to put those 'what ifs' in there...and CASKET! good lord! the things that word caused to my ample supply of imagination! that aside, i love the change in behavior in Brian. You know he's so easily huggable in this story so that twist made Brian even more 3 dimensional to me. Im also glad AJ is going to be all right, I bet he's gonna score some major cool points once he's back in school. I think the character i sympathise most here is Momma R. Imagine just being in her shoes...sigh. Now lets hope Nicky is all right. Im still curious to find out how he knew the code word!
Author's Response: You rock my socks! lol Thanks! :D
[Report This]Date: 06/23/05 01:08 am Title: 22
OMG! OMG! OMG!!!!! What if that evil Bastard HURTS Nicky 'cause he's screaming for his Daddy's shirt?!?! Oh, God!!!! What *IF*!?!?!?! This is just *TOO* unbearable!!! The "what ifs" are KILLIN' me here!!!!!! I can feel for Kevin, Brian, & the others - I'm freaking out over the "What Ifs" too!!!! Dude, I *CAN'T* wait 'till next Wednesday - I'ma go *INSANE* by then!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. LET NICKY LIVE!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww sorry Lenni, they don't call it suspense for noting hehehe Thanks for the review :D
[Report This]Date: 06/17/05 02:27 am Title: 21
i didn't try guessing the code cos i got so much on my head right now and the only thing that's going on in there is HOW IS NICK? i hope he's fine, and please update. you got us hanging again. LOL. i love the story and the flow of it. CHEERS!
Author's Response: Thanks Scarlett! Hopefully I won't leave you hanging for too long :)
[Report This]Date: 06/17/05 02:14 am Title: 20
wait. before i click that.. i think this is about his family, isnt it? tsk.tsk. now, i've been praying hard for them not to get involved!
Author's Response: Aww lol oopsies
[Report This]Date: 06/17/05 02:13 am Title: 20
i try not to read the next chapter and pass out this review first. you know what? i got gosebumps over tha back of my neck as i write this. damn! you'r not mean to me now, cos i got the next chapter to read. but after that....let me tell you. :D :D
Author's Response: Aww lol yay no cliffie for you :D
[Report This]Date: 06/16/05 02:10 am Title: 21
wow excellent chapter it was so sad. poor kevin for feeling this way. I LOVE YOU BABY YOUR WIFE IS HERE FOR YOU HONEY! and brian i feel bad for him and understand where he is coming from but it is still so mean poor kid though AND MY BABY NICKY DONT KILL HIM!
Author's Response: Aww lol Thanks Anita and I would never kill Nick. I can't promise someone else wouldn't but I wouldn't. hehehe
