[Report This]Date: 04/11/07 01:18 am Title: Chapter 144
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww damn. that was so sweet.
and the chapter was waaaay tooooo shoooort *pouting*
and i still cant over that whole *tummy being her fave part of him* thats too cute :)
...and did he just tell her that girls refused to have sex with him?????????
dammit...nicky boy is really falling hard...or well...already fell hard for her...to tell her such things abt his life.
update asap plz :) i cant wait
Author's Response: Well her appreciation is my appreciation. I have an uncommon love for Nick's stomach. I just can't help it. I'm pretty sure it's probably happened in real life, I wouldn't think it'd be something he'd tell just anyone though you're right. Nick sure is falling hard isn't he? *sigh* Thanks La!
Date: 04/10/07 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 143
tieing up veronica was something natural to him...at least it seems like that to me. bu he also knew that it wasnt for her. bc of that he asked her to trust him.
turning on the light is kinky.. rarrrr :) maybe he new in the back of his mind that veronica would go crazy.. but maybe he just wanted to try. AND he did free her as soon as she asked him to. even though he then ran after her acting like he didnt know whats wrong. thats nick for us isnt it. but i get the feeling that he knows LOL hes just not admitting it. this chapter reminded me how different the two r...and that what makes the story so good. (one of the many reasons :)-->thats if there is gonna be an happy end girl lmao)
so .no i dont see anything wrong with this chapter at all.
Author's Response: LOL You crack me up girl! Thanks La!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/07 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 143
To tell you the truth, I'm a little surprised. Just so you know I'm gonna be talking like this story is real. But there couldn't have been a different way Nick could have done this instead of tying Veronica's hands together, blindfolding the poor girl and then flicking on the lights.. I mean talk about embarassing the shit outta of somebody. I know what Veronica is thinking in this chapter and sure Nick, in a past chapter, made Veronica show off her body in a bathing suit but being in the nude is so a different story. So now going from fiction to reality, appalled is such a harsh word but I get why they may think that.. today more woman are curvy, like myself, so appearance mean more to us than probably anything.. so being nude in the light in front of a guy you've "know" for you years is ehhhh lol But I know this is apart of the story and I know you're gonna make Nicky C beg for forgiveness and I hope he understands what just happened. I really think this chapter was great, V!
Author's Response: Wow! You as well make a lot of great points in this. I'm glad you guys are picking up on V's point of view. Then again I worry that Nick is coming off as a jerk, which he's not. Honestly he wasn't thinking along the lines of making V uncomfy or trying to embarass her, not at all. Nick's a good guy and I think he geniunely cares for her. We'll have to see what happens. Thanks V!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/07 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 143
loooooooooved the chapter. ehh should i recognize something abt it?
i think its great.
and i really like the idea of nick turning the light on.even though veronica wasnt into it at all. awww they need to make up. update asap plz
Author's Response: You liked the idea of him turning on the light, I think that's great. I'm glad someone acknowledged that. Thanks La!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/07 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 143
I didn't find anything wrong with it. I think that maybe she is uncomfortable because she is heavy. I can relate to that. I hope things work out for them. Please update soon. I need to know how they work out. great update
Author's Response: Ooo you're on the right track too DG! We'll have to wait and see. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/07 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 143
I liked the chapter..I didn't find it demanding at all..I'm just wondering if her being uncomfortable has more to do with her being uncomfortable with her body..you know if there's something else there...can't wait to read the next chapter.dont have us waiting too long lol..:)
Author's Response: Ahhh you may be on to something Haydee! Cool! Hopefully the wait won't be too long! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/07 06:44 am Title: Chapter 143
ok, here's what I think... appalled is not the right word. Surprised maybe, but not appalled. I honestly don't think he was trying to force her into anything, and honestly he didn't do anythign *that strange. I'm a little surprised that he would be so bold after so long being apart. Especially knowing that he was her first and (for all he knows) her only so he should have known to move a little slower maybe? I don't think it was necessarily inappropriate as much as it was just he should have asked first. He suprised her.
Nick's a lot more experienced than her, so his mindset is a bit different. I'm sure that type of thing happenes between couples all the time. From a relationship standpoint it seemed realistic and it definitely created some drama for the rest of her stay so I'm ok with it. oh... and I was laughing my ass off over the LL Cool J thing. My best friend has this serious thing for him and it's soooooo funny. But he is very smooth... and gorgeous. anyway, great chapter!
Author's Response: Ahh very cool honey! That's about right I'd say. My friends were kinda upset over the tying up thing, and I didn't write it with the intention of it being a big deal, and to be perfectly honest...that's not what V was upset about, how bout that? Hee hee! In any case, you make a lot of great points there, a lot. He most certainly did surprise her, but there's another twist. As for LL oh yes, I LOVE LL mmmm! I loved him in Last Holiday! Thanks Honey!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/07 05:12 am Title: Chapter 143
its like the story turn into a different direction with this story. Now in the story I dont know if Nicks intention was a good thing. Doing that to Veronica. I think he should have understood and not jump to quickly. I liked how they kissed for awhile but I did not this was coming. It is a little appauling in some areas ecspecially where they took off the clothes and I had this sense of how Nick was saying this stuff and it felt like he really did not mean it, but probably did. I hope this problem in this story fixxes it in the next coming chapters..I dont want to see Verionica go home thinking how everyone would tell her "I told you so" it was a Great Update. Even though we as the readers did not this was coming. And as for the light thing. I think something happened to Verionica with the light on in her childhood that maybe one of her parents did to her or at least a family member..and again Great Update
Author's Response: Hmm very interesting points made. You had almost the same response as one of my friends, plus a bit more. I'm curious to see what you think when you read the next chapter. I'm glad I took you off guard. I'm hoping to keep readers on their toes. Thanks WB!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/07 04:52 am Title: Chapter 143
I usually rarley find the chance to review, but I HAD to review this cuz this chapter made me go o_o why'd she run away?!?! =0 update soon!
Author's Response: Ahh it's mystery! Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it! Thanks Unbroken!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/07 04:44 am Title: Chapter 143
OMG it was a good Chapter, i dont think she should have ran away from him. update soon again...
Author's Response: LOL Well she had a reason, you'll find out why soon. Thanks Blue!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/07 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 142
Oh Veronica, you know what she was implying.. lol ;) I know what you're trying to make me do and that's talk.. but noooo :D Chris is one of Nick's BFFs lol He was in House Of Carters when Aaron got drunk. It's not that I don't like him cause he's Nick's friend, it's just that he reminds me of my ex... :/ loool
Author's Response: Girl you're too much! LOLOL!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/07 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 142
Great chapter! Please update again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks Aimee, another update shortly!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/07 07:37 am Title: Chapter 142
that was a great chapter, though I didn't understand what the girl meant by that Veronica wouldn't come back later with Nick.
update soon please
Author's Response: Meaning that the next time they'd see Nick, Veronica would already be gone is all. Thanks Moppy!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/07 07:18 am Title: Chapter 142
awww that was cute. Nick in big brother mode. I'd like to see that, but unfortunately I missed house of carters. My friend says one of them's really really psychotic... can't remember which one though? Anyway, the meet the fam/friends chapters are always interesting. I'm glad you kept it light and brief. Some go with the doom and gloom of the craziness that is the Carter's and I hate that.
Author's Response: I didn't want to revolve around that too much, there will be time for that later. Thanks Honey!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/07 06:10 am Title: Chapter 142
OMG i love it cant wait for more u got to update soooooooner please
Author's Response: LOL I'll update asap I promise! Thanks Blue
