[Report This]Date: 04/30/06 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 96
thx so much 4 the update! but ARE U INSANE to stop???? i wish nick could go with her instead of starting to work again!
when is the nexr chapter coming? "hint"
Author's Response: LOL Thanks fictionlover.
I'm glad to update, no need to thank me!
Not sure when I'm gonna post the next chapter. I really need to get writing, now that I've hit the 100 chapter mark, I seem to be slowing down, which isn't cool. Hopefully the next update will be soon, hang in there and thanks for the comments!
[Report This]Date: 04/23/06 10:09 am Title: Chapter 95
Another good chapter, yet this time it turned out a little short. The plotline you are following is exciting, but I do feel that you are a little confused about what to do next.
To-the author-once again I sent you something through the ''Contact'' option. The last time I didn't get any response from you. I'd like to know what you think about my idea.Hope to hear from you soon.
Author's Response: Hmm, well I emailed you a few days ago inquiring about what you sent me, but I didn't hear back from you so I'm wondering if the contact option on here is working properlly. I'll have to check and see if there's another way for me to get your email.
[Report This]Date: 04/23/06 06:59 am Title: Chapter 95
Man it was getting good, and you know what I mean when I say GOOD.. but that call just blew everything.. hope her dad is alright... Great job Veronica and you know I'll be coming back for more..
Author's Response: LOL Everyone is having a hard time with the phone interruption! That's surprising cause I didn't think it would cause such a rucks! LOL! I find it highly amusing I have to say. In anycase, thanks for the comments Veronica!
[Report This]Date: 04/23/06 12:54 am Title: Chapter 95
loved the updates i really hope for more soon cause i am hooked keep up the great work
Author's Response: Thanks Linda! I'll update again shortly!
[Report This]Date: 04/22/06 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 95
Ahhhh man..just when it was getting good and they were about to have a make out scene her Bro calls in saying dad is in the hospital...its sad very sad and I hope Nick does not go back to Fl I hope you stays there
.. Awesome Job Keep updating and loving it
Author's Response: LMAO! There always has to be some kind of distraction Alesha! We'll have to see what happens with Nick. Thanks for the comments as always.
[Report This]Date: 04/22/06 03:06 am Title: Chapter 94
loving the story... update asap please!!!!!
Author's Response: Ack, I somehow missed this one! Sorry! Thanks for commenting though, I'm trying to do better with the updating. Be on the lookout!
[Report This]Date: 04/19/06 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 94
YAY! You updated again. Man I can not tell you how much I LO... LO... LO.... LO.. VE this story. lol...sorry but I just love that ashlee simpson song L.O.V.E. But anywho...can't wait to read more soon!
Author's Response: LOL I'm glad one of us does! LOL! In anycase, thanks for the f/b kwc! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Please continue to let me know what you think!
Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 04/18/06 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 94
This chapter was definitely hot! Hadn't expected that the story might take such a turn. It was all of sudden. But it was also needed, because in a way in marked the line for they relationship-if they are going to be only friends or something more.
To the author- I sent you a little message through the ''contact'' option. Did you get it? Please let me know what you think about what I said! :)
Author's Response: I'm all about surprises! ;-) Gotta keep ya on your toes.
As for the message, I'm trying to think...hmm, I went through and finally responded to emails I've recieved last night, was there one from me? LOL I vaguely remember seeing your name, but I can't remember if I responded or not :-( . Then again I may have read it and didn't get to it last night, which happens. I've been so bad about responding promptly to emails. I'll do a double check right now. If I haven't, sorry, I'll respond asap!
Thanks Hilda
[Report This]Date: 04/18/06 04:55 am Title: Chapter 94
Mmmm that was soooo hot lol... I loooved the new chapter and thanx to the person that kept emailing you to update. Can't wait for more! Great job!
Author's Response: LOL Thanks Veronica. Yes, thanks to the people who keep emailing, it's very nice of people to take the time to comment.
Thanks Veronica
[Report This]Date: 04/18/06 03:25 am Title: Chapter 94
Ooooo This is getting GOOOODDD...Love it..and i hope V goes back with him for a little bit..Keep writing and more updates please Awesome Job
Author's Response: Thanks Alesha! I hope to write another chapter soon. I won't be able to this evening, but maybe tomorrow. Thanks again for the comments!
[Report This]Date: 04/14/06 11:31 am Title: Chapter 93
lols... seeing Nick just after he has a shower would make me want to jump him too... >.> ok now that i've said that ^.^ I am very muchly proud of Veronica!! She finally did it... it makes me want to say the same to my parents. Thanks for the great story!! Update soon xD
Author's Response: Thanks Kelly! Yeah, V's taken a big step, a huge milestone for her. I'm very proud of her as a character myself!
Mmm, wouldn't we all like to see Nick out the shower?
Thanks Kelly!
[Report This]Date: 04/14/06 03:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story. You took a storyline that could be seen as a teenybopper fantasy and made it believable and realistic. You've done an amazing job with the characterization; I haven't experienced some of the things V and Nick have myself, but I feel like I can relate to them because you've made them so understandable and easy to empathize with. I love how you show their inner thoughts; it really helps because they - Veronica especially - don't always act on their feelings, so it's good to know how they really feel, and you do a great job at showing that. You also keep both sides balanced really well, alternating between Nick's and Veronica's perspectives. Also, I really like the way you're tackling some tough issues, like divorce, self-esteem, parents' opinions of us, etc. and doing a fantastic job with them, while still sticking to the budding romance plot. These issues add to the believability of the story and give it more depth; I'm usually pretty picky about romance cause I get bored with it when there's too much "romance" and not enough of anything else, so I really enjoy the real life sort of drama in this story. Keep up the AMAZING work; I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Aww well thanks ROA! I really appreciate the comments! I've tried hard to make it realistic and believeable, but there's always room for improvement of course. I hope to get better as the story progresses cause there's still so much left to be said and done.
As for the issues, I just write about what I know, which is what a close friend of mine once told me. It's life expierences, and I can write it how I see it and I hope it shows in this.
Thanks again and I hope you'll continue to read! ;o)
[Report This]Date: 04/14/06 02:02 am Title: Chapter 93
ok lynne needs to shut up... i know that she is just looking out for her friend, or maybe she is jelous but she doesn't know nick so she doesn't know what nick is feeling... i really like this story so far and i can't wait to see where it goes... please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks fabc! LOL Lynne is gonna be the proverbal "voice of reason"...or one the people on V's side telling her that nothing good would come of a relationship. She is only looking out for Veronica, but she also doesn't trust Nick, which is understandable. She also doesn't really know their relationship, which makes her even more weary. One could say she's being a pessimist, but you can also see her point.
As for her being jealous, she's not at all. Definately not my intention with her character, so not to worry, that's not an issue.
Thanks for the comments and please keep reading!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/06 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 93
First of, it was quite a long wait till the update, but I guess it was worth to wait. :) I liked the way you showed how she stood up for herself against her father. This is a really impotant issue for her. Though I would've wished to see her inner thoughts.What had the most effect on her to do so?Does she at least hope he likes her? Or she doesn't care?Does she want him or not? In her opinion, where is this relationship going? Another thing what would've been wonderful was if you'd show Nick's thoughts. How does he feel about her?Is she just a holiday fling or something more? I would suggest you, in the next chapters, to focus on Nick's feelings and his attitude towards Veronica. Add some more romance.
Author's Response: Responding to this because it keeps showing up as unresponded and I've already responded to it! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/06 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
First of, it was quite a long wait till the update, but I guess it was worth to wait. :)
I liked the way you showed how she stood up for herself against her father. This is a really impotant issue for her. Though I would've wished to see her inner thoughts.What had the most effect on her to do so?Does she at least hope he likes her? Or she doesn't care?Does she want him or not? In her opinion, where is this relationship going?
Another thing what would've been wonderful was if you'd show Nick's thoughts. How does he feel about her?Is she just a holiday fling or something more?
I would suggest you, in the next chapters, to focus on Nick's feelings and his attitude towards Veronica. Add some more romance.
Author's Response: Thanks Hilda. Sorry for the wait, I'm really trying to get back into the writing. Now that I've reached the 100 chapter mark, I seem to be dwindling. Thanks for the suggestions!
