[Report This]Date: 04/13/06 05:04 am Title: Chapter 93
I'm soo proud of Veronica for finally telling her dad what she felt about him saying those kinds of things to her... soo proud.. Completely understand about being busy and just talk your time.. ;) I can't wait to read more and I hope all is well with you!
Author's Response: Yes! Success for Veronica! LOL It needed to be done that's for sure. It's very important that she did it for several reasons. All is well with me thanks! Just getting adjusted to my new job, no more deli for me! Hee hee!
Thanks Veronica!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/06 04:13 am Title: Chapter 93
okay the whole thing about the dad talking about weight..hit really really close to home...Awesome Job Girl
Author's Response: Thank you Alesha. So you can relate to the whole Dad thing too huh? Isn't that sad, someone who's supposed to make you feel good no matter what, can make you feel so bad about yourself. My Dad did that to me a lot and I know he meant well, but he had no idea of the damage he did or has done. *Sigh*
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/06 01:06 am Title: Chapter 93
oh my god you always write how i feel alot of the time it is great to really know that others feel this same way keep up the great work and update real soon i really enjoy your story. :-) :-) mauhhh
Author's Response: Thanks Linda! As always it's surprising when someone says they can relate to "Veronica" cause the way she is is how I am cause she IS me with a few minor differences. It's nice for ME to see that I'm not the only one who feels that way.
Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/06 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 92
another nice chapter. I like the way you've started to prtray Nick....he has some kind relaxation in his situation right now...he's most likely enjoying life in terms of having it simple...and with Veronica, he even enjoys that...
Be careful with bringing up the divorce issues. They are important, but balance it so that they don't overshadow, but support the mutual match of Nick and Veronica...with small steps, make their relationship closer...
Writing is not about speed of writing our quantity..its about inspiration and quality, so don't worry!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments and suggestions Hilda. I'm glad you're still reading!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/06 02:30 am Title: Chapter 92
yeah what she said i however did tear up alot cause i have always been big and what you wrote is exactly how i feel alot of the time thanks for the great update and you rok big time
Author's Response: Thank YOU Linda. Man reading these comments are so great, I know I love to read a story I can relate to and understand on a more personal level. I'm glad I was able to do that for you as well! Thank you for the honor! Please keep reading!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/06 01:56 am Title: Chapter 92
Jeeze Veronica, you know how to hit the nail right now the head with the hole weight thing.. same with me.. and I also adore Nick's tummy lol You actually made me tear up a bit.. loooved it.. I love the part about Scrabble.. heheh boob and him winning and taking it to Kevin lol loooved that.. and I love your story!!!
Author's Response: Aww well I'd like to think I'm not the only person who feels self conscious about her weight. All of that was true about me. It's cool to know that others can relate. Yeah, I'm a HUGE tummy lover! LOL It's always been this thing with me, a lot of it has to do with the whole weight thing, but some of it is just because I love it! Hee hee! It's cool to know that you related to some parts so much that it made you tear up, what an honor. Thanks Veronica and I hope you'll continue to keep reading!
[Report This]Date: 03/28/06 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
dang girl update please i need my veronica and nick fix :-) :-)
Author's Response: LOL I hope to update soon, I haven't written in a while. Be on the lookout though! Thanks Linda!
[Report This]Date: 03/21/06 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 91
AGHH!!! i am on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: LOL! I promise to update more very soon! Hang in there please and thanks for commenting tree!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/06 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 91
Why...WHY WHY WHY do you have to keep us hanging like this all the time???? At least keep us hanging at a boring part! Not....Nick smiling slowly as Veronica asks him what he wants to do....hmph! Can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Is Nick that predictiable? Hmmm....
It could go a lot of ways really, just where is everyone's minds at? LOL!
Thanks Karen!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/06 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 91
The first thing I have to say is that in this chapter you have really worked on Veronica's character. You showed how unsure about herself she is and how she is controlled by her father. That is tragic when parents can control their already grown up children even in judging their relationships. I think a lot of people can relate to her feelings.
About Nick...it was nice to see how he felt for her, that he was even brave enough to start the talk about last night. Guys do that rarely and IF they decide to do so, you can be really sure that this girls means to him a lot.
And admitting that she isn't an''easy lay'' for him is a really big step forward in their relationship.
I can envison what happens next,but..I'll better wait for your update...
Author's Response: LOL! I'm keeping what you said in mind, these chapters were written quite a while ago, I'm currently up to chapter 101, so I'm trying to improve with each chapter.
Yeah, it's very important to see the impact the things and events around them have on their lives and their personalities, you'll see more of that as the story continues since you'll start seeing more conflict and such.
I'm curious as to what you see happening next!
Thanks Hilda!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/06 06:37 am Title: Chapter 91
hmmm and the tables turn again... lols they wont stop turning xD... great couple of chapters. Jelousy eh... Nick has fallen hard for her and she is so oblivious to it... then again i think he is too. w00t for updates ^.^
Author's Response: Yup, I wanted this to be a story of them helping each other, but not expecting to...meaning they went into the relationship not expecting to be helped from one another or expecting anything more.
Yeah, the feelings for each other are definately there mutually, but neither realize it or want to for that matter.
Thanks Kelly!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/06 03:51 am Title: Chapter 91
That's gotta be typical Nick when in a serious convo than making a dirty comment lol Damn that was rough when he called her out on what was really happening with her.. I looved it!!! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It's important in a story, at least one of this nature, for each character to grow or learn something. In this case, Nick and Veronica both have their "demons" and a big part of their relationship is they can help each other with their situation either by personal expierence or a different perspective, which makes their otherwise non-connected lifestyles, connect.
Nick's the typical guy I know! LOL! Thanks Veronica!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/06 02:47 am Title: Chapter 91
i can guess what he wants to do!!! great update keep up the great work and update soon!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I thought that'd be a fun place to end the chapter, a cliffhanger of sorts without the drama. Thanks Linda!
[Report This]Date: 03/11/06 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 89
Your story has a good storyline development. It is interesting to read on. Don't worry about the number of chapters, it is not too much.
A little suggestion-I would concentrate more on the character's personlity's development to make them more ''real''....
Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thanks Hilda, I'm glad you're reading!
Thanks for the advice!
[Report This]Date: 03/05/06 04:37 am Title: Chapter 89
gah! poor nick. he probably feels like shit. love this stroy! update soon! :D
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, Nick is feeling pretty bad right about now. I have to say that a small part of me is happy because he needed to know what it felt like.
Thanks Ann!!
