[Report This]Date: 05/22/06 03:53 am Title: Chapter 9
Great chapters. Can't wait until they become friends.
[Report This]Date: 05/17/06 01:58 am Title: Chapter 17 Part 2
HAHA! you did it again! another hilarious chapter, the aviator and latte thing was TOO funny! Can't wait to read more! Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 05/17/06 01:53 am Title: Chapter 17 Part 1
Hahaha, I love this story, it honestly is hilarious! Great job and you can definatley tell they like eachother! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 05/16/06 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 17 Part 2
This chapter made me feel that Nick kinda likes to hang around with Lauri. Is he trying to be nice?I guess so. I love his childish behaviour!:)
Also very intriguing is the headline...has Sara or Kendall something to do with it? You better update sooner:))
Author's Response: i love childish Nick too, its fun to write! i'll update as soon as possible, i've already been putting some to paper :)
[Report This]Date: 05/16/06 10:57 am Title: Chapter 17 Part 2
Yeehaw!!!
Lols... man i love it... i cant wait to see her reaction to the magazine ^.^
Author's Response: it should be interesting!! :)
[Report This]Date: 05/16/06 10:27 am Title: Chapter 17 Part 2
This chapter was really funny, hope you post more soon.
PS, a Beau is a man. It should probably say "Nick Carter's New Beauty", LOL
Author's Response: i usually see beau in the tabloids when used as someone new bf or gf. i'll look into it, thank you!! and i'm glad you like the chappy!
[Report This]Date: 05/15/06 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 17 Part 2
hmmmmmmmmmmmm. interesting. me loves
[Report This]Date: 05/15/06 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 17 Part 2
Damn Nick and his girly drink lmao... Ohhh Star Magazine.. ekkk this canNOT be good. Loooved it and I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 05/15/06 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 17 Part 2
Oye vey. I KNEW the tabloids owuld get a hold of a pic of 'em! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: those damn paparazzi!!! hehe.
[Report This]Date: 05/14/06 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 17 Part 1
I liked the way you showed that he has kinda a special attraction to Lauri because he had invited her for Xmas. Though I still would wish to see how he feels and thinks. You can put his POV in italics.
How does Lauri really feel about him?Has she developed a kind of interest in him or all what she's looking for is a good refference letter at the end of her contract? Would she, eventually, consider sleeping with him, out of attraction not in needs for refence?
Author's Response: i really wanna keep it a one person story. i thought about making it his POV too when i first began, but i know i couldn't write it the way i want it to be presented. hopefully soon his intentions will clear up. as for lauri, no one knows how she really feels, not even herself. dont worry, there is ALOT more story left for her to figure herself out.
Date: 05/12/06 10:53 am Title: Chapter 17 Part 1
:-) oh yeah...at least he knows that he is immature.... and i wouldn't be surprised if he'll buy her some of the vs underwear for x-mas(thats what she was looking for wasn't it?)
and there'll better be an update tomorrow ;-)
Author's Response: i wouldnt be surprised either **hehe**. ya never know, he might grow up in, oh say four weeks..... but probably not :)
[Report This]Date: 05/12/06 01:51 am Title: Chapter 17 Part 1
Haha. Nick admits he's immature. Cute!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 05/11/06 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 17 Part 1
Hey... she's gonna spend Christmas with him.. lucky but I guess she doesn't like the idea.. I'm glad he admitted he's immature now if only he admits it in real like.. lol Loooved the chapters and I can't wait to read more!
