Date: 07/09/07 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 36
ok well, i have decided that the best time to read your fics is when im in the train on my way back home. know why? cause i totally got sucked in the moment and forgot abt everything else and that's awesome because have you been in a crowded train? Not so much fun.
so the story, lol...cause you know, i do read it ;p i love how you're scattering all the brothers, well, except for aj & nick...but yeah...i love how Kevin has his own lead, Brian's doing his own, Howie's...well, he's stuck in the hospital but his mind is working and he's getting uneasy and all kinds of bells are ringing off for him...there's aj and nick with the psycho sister and i am pissed she slapped Nick! I kind of winced when i read that, that gotta hurt. and apparently, Daddy Richardson already knows whose behind all this!
Also? Mean cliffy! Kick some jack ass (lmao!) for me Kevin!!! full of tension and suspense and a little of discovery (Brian finding the cellphone o/) and more questions to ponder, i love it! Worth the wait :D
Author's Response: LOL glad I can make your train ride better! How do you ever read anyting on such a tiny screen though? I could never do that on a moving train. I give you credit! lol This cliffie wasn't that mean :OP
Date: 07/08/07 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 36
Ooh Kevin better be careful! And I really do hope that Nick and AJ did get away. Thanks for the update Mare cuz yo know I was looking forward to this one!
Author's Response: Yes, it's one of the reasons I updated it! Thanks Mel! :O)
Date: 07/08/07 02:06 am Title: Chapter 36
oh kevin come on yo uhave to get him!
so mare did you change your mind?
Author's Response: eh...lol no
Date: 07/07/07 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 36
argh!!!! Stupid Jack had to see him didn't he?? I can't wait to see how you're gonna pull everything together! Can't wait for more. Thanx Mare.
Author's Response: Aww thanks for all the reviews Waj!
Date: 07/07/07 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 35
I actually felt sorry for Ariana...even though I pretty much knew her history, but seeing her explain it...its kinda heartbreaking. But that is no excuse to becoming a monster. And thank god Kevin decided to follow him. This is getting better and better!!
Author's Response: good, i'm glad you felt for her. Thatw as the idea lol
Date: 07/07/07 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 36
oooo.......come on kevin! go after him and kick his sorry ass! heh. and i have a very bad feeling that i think i know what he got from the vet...*bites finger nails* no killing our boys, got it? ;)
Author's Response: I will make sure to pass that along to Kevin lol thanks felikia
Date: 07/07/07 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 34
Omg-how did I miss this update? Never mind...I hope Jack will get caught...On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: aww i'm glad you found it now though lol
[Report This]Date: 06/08/07 05:41 am Title: Chapter 35
Love the story, please update when you can!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks and I will
[Report This]Date: 06/04/07 11:38 am Title: Chapter 35
omg the first half of this chapter...omg...ok so i already know the back story for Ariana but still...wow...the way it all played out...i kindafeltsorryforheralittletinybit and also i kindofhateRichardsonSenior....
still, two wrongs dont make a right. She could have come away with it being a counsellor to troubled kids, try to reconcile with her enstranged father and introduce herself to her little brothers who all seem to grow up to be great young men...but no, she let the anger in and turned her vengeful. it's her choice right? and it's the wrong one to make.
and yay for kevin!!! i love him for noticing hte gun! and also, also, the whole riding the bus and wondering if bus drivers carry change! lmao! that's too cute and a little break from the intense chapter. and, and...poor Nick and AJ...the way they found out about everything... :(
Author's Response: Yay! You're the first person to comment on the bus and the hating Kevin senior and feeling bad for Ariana. Thats exactly what I wanted to happen for this chapter. LOL Woot!
[Report This]Date: 06/04/07 10:12 am Title: Chapter 35
Here we go.. I got a feeling this is going to be like hell..
Author's Response: aww lol
[Report This]Date: 06/04/07 03:35 am Title: Chapter 35
ooohh you said the thriteenth step! anyway first of all great chapter i am glad to see an update and how wonderful you are doing with it. second as far as i care these stories can go on forever since you are threatening to retire *bursts into tears*
Author's Response: aww *hugs* and it's not a threat, it's a promise lol
[Report This]Date: 06/04/07 01:31 am Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter! My favorite part: AJ looking straight to her when she asked him if he knew where the story was going and then thinking that he did know exactly where it was going. And then his reaction, it was just a line describing it but the whole thing made me really sad. And then poor Nick still lost. Kevin has to save them right now. And don't do the 'may' reply here too or you are gonna get another tongue icon lol
Author's Response: well maybe lol ;O)
Date: 06/04/07 12:48 am Title: Chapter 35
pls update soon x love it
Author's Response: I shall try
[Report This]Date: 06/03/07 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 35
lmao....dunno if you meant to have it in there, but i laughed at the thirteenth step part :D starting crossovers between your stories are you? :P loved the chapter, will hate to see any ofthe stories end too :( But hey, there will probably be more where these come from, right? :D
Author's Response: yup I did that on purpose, I figured maybe it's the closest thing to a 13th step update you'd all get lmao I thought it would be funny. and I plead the fifth on the rest.
[Report This]Date: 05/05/07 07:27 am Title: Chapter 34
Love it, please update when you can!!!!
Author's Response: just did lol
