[Report This]Date: 04/30/07 05:05 am Title: Chapter 34
This was the one I hadn't read and...it has another mean cliffhanger!!! But since I'm reading this one really late...does that mean you are about to post another chapter? pretty please lol
I loved the beginning with AJ in this one, with him remembering the day after their mother died, but I especially LOVED the first description at the very beginning with 'the most fearless' part.
My favorite part in this whole chapter (and you aren't going to believe it) is probably Ariana's part though. It was awesome, really. Why? Well I really don't know why, I mean, I still hate her but I love when books or movies give us villains that are not a cartoon character and make us go beyond just hating them. I don't know if it's pity but the part about her thinking 'how dare they to call her evil' had me going 'wow she doesn't see it' because well she IS evil but it's kind of sad that she doesn't realize it.
Amazing job again mare, hopefully you update this one soon and I don't miss it :)
Oh and Kevin Sr. still not my favorite person lol
Author's Response: Aww I suck! i thought I had responded to this already. Even though I probably have through our chatting. *hugs you anyway* lol
[Report This]Date: 04/27/07 04:32 am Title: Chapter 34
you seriously rock my world! i read this last night before going to bed and was reminded why it is not a good idea to read anything suspenseful by you before sleeping, i mean come on, the cliffy is practically waving a neon flash sign from far away but did i listen? No. *facepalm*
I love that little flashback from AJ, that was so sad, and to tie it nicely to the present, when nicky was still out cold and AJ was there wishing he has the right thing to tell Nick. And then the conflict you gave Ariana...she's 3 dimensional, she's broken and she's a family member they never knew. But my hatred towards her is too deeply rooted to feel sorry for her anymore, because you know, you're not the only abandoned kid growing up, it doesnt have to be this way
I have a feeling daddy is going down in this own, which is making me depressed. and im still worried over Patty adn Charlie. *is sighing*
Excellent chapter! looking forward to another update :D
Author's Response: Aww thanks for all of that Mersey :O) I am happy to hear that even though you hate you...I mean her lol you also find her three dimensional. Wooot!
Date: 04/26/07 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 34
great update x cheers for the cliffie x NOOOOOOOOOOOO leave Brian and Kevin alone and patty if you going to phone kevin do know pls
Author's Response: LOL awww
[Report This]Date: 04/26/07 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 34
Not another cliffie.. *sighs* ;)
Author's Response: lol ahem
[Report This]Date: 04/26/07 05:51 am Title: Chapter 34
oye vey.....be prepared you two!
Author's Response: lol
[Report This]Date: 04/26/07 03:58 am Title: Chapter 34
omg mare how dare you do it to me again! please update SOMETHING soon
Author's Response: Sorry Anita, i'm a mean cliffy person it's in my nature lol
[Report This]Date: 03/27/07 06:33 am Title: Chapter 33
I love this story, Please update as soon as possible,thank you!!!!
Author's Response: I just did :O)
[Report This]Date: 03/19/07 03:58 am Title: Chapter 33
wow great update. just got back from vac. couldn't wait to read them keep up the great work
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 03/16/07 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 33
o_O means something like > I'm just speechless.. o_O are two eyes, and one just seems to almost pop out.. Out of speechlessness or amazement.. ;) Great chap again!
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03/16/07 04:56 am Title: Chapter 33
He looked over at her and nodded, there wasn’t much else he could do really. He then turned his attention back to his baby brother who lay quiet and still next to him. “I don’t want that guy anywhere near Nick again, do you understand me?” AJ said, hate shining from his eyes, “I don’t even want him looking at Nick.”
OMG! i can totally picture this in my head and omg! i cant stop omg-ing everywhere!
and im sorry, but i have no place right now to feel sorry for Ariana (me, whatever, lol). She needs to do A LOT to redeem herself because she didnt think twice to poison Nick and frame him and now, now she wants to coddle Nick and wonders/wishes her brothers could love her? 2 kids lives are at stake because of all these! and hello? she's willing to off Kevin! big bro! no way! lol...
the boyfriend has to go though. For Howie man, do it for Howie! lmao!!
[Report This]Date: 03/16/07 02:23 am Title: Chapter 33
omg GREAT chapter mare you are the bomb and i am THRILLED at the update so soon! im waiting for 13th step and why and another scars so step on it
[Report This]Date: 03/15/07 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 32
omg...
Author's Response: :O) lol
[Report This]Date: 03/15/07 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 33
Oh, wow. That was a really good chapter. And the last one. I'm so glad Patty survived, if nothing else, she could tell them what really happened. And, when is Kevin and Brian gonna realise what's really going on. Thanx for the updates Mare.
Author's Response: aww you're welcome and I have a feeling that very soon they will start to catch on lol
[Report This]Date: 03/15/07 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 32
omg...
Author's Response: LOL
[Report This]Date: 03/15/07 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 33
better ending...but still a cliffy! thank god patty WAS awake! they better find everyone FAST!
Author's Response: Thanks Felikia. I didn't think that was a cliffy at all lol I was so proud of myself too.
