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Reviewer: ALM Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/07 12:25 am Title: Chapter 31

I now i sad that im starting to like Charlie but if you going to kill one of the kids it has to be him x Kevin so going to blame himself x up date soon pls x

Author's Response: Aww poor Charlie lol everyone saying kill him. :O(

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/07 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 31

Ooh you and your cliffhangers! Seems like the story is nearing its climax. I'm gonna predict that Charlie is the one that gets shot cuz you can't kill Nick and I kind of like Patty LOl

Author's Response: LOL aww i'm glad you kind of like Patty and the rest you shall wait and see :OP Thanks Mel!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/07 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 31

im spolied now with these updates lol. and who got shot?! please be charlie! dont want him to be shot, but better than patty or nick! i hope kev and bri find them all!

Author's Response: I know lol I hope it keeps going. Thanks felikia!

Reviewer: waj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/07 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 30


Oh my god. I can't believe u ended there! How the hell is Nick gonna get out of this mess and AJ, what's gonna happen to him?? Dnt let her kill him! Pleeeeease. And plz plz update soon, the waiting's killing me!

Author's Response: Aww I just did hehe :O)

Reviewer: mers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/07 11:29 am Title: Chapter 30

OMG!!! that was totally unexpected, finding AJ there! as much as i love for her cover to be blown, im also worried for AJ now! i'd like to think he can handle this and give her more problems, screw up her plan...but we shall see :D and gah! the whole scene involving Nick trying to get out of there and with the phone...that was INTENSE! i like how it seems being discreet and street smart runs in the family...Nick is like a little detective there isnt he? Now where the heck is big brother kev? he'd be slamming his own head for not picking up the phone, lol...brian and his maracas, hehe..and poor Howie :( this is going to scar him real bad!

Author's Response: you can blame Kevin not answering his phone on my inability to channel him so anything that happens from here on in, is ALL Keivn's fault! lol

Reviewer: A.W. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/07 06:27 am Title: Chapter 30

I love this story,please update as soon as you can!!!!

Author's Response: I will try, I promise :O)

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/07 04:42 am Title: Chapter 30

Ooh... The plot thickens. I hope that Nick can hold off Jack until Kevin gets there. Damn him for not picking up lol



I haven't read this in a while but after just one chapter I was so hooked that I was almost late to work lol

Author's Response: YAY! Thanks for reading Mel :O) and sorry I almost made oyu later for work lol

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/07 01:22 am Title: Chapter 30

OH MAN!
What's going to happen?!? O.O
Update soon

Author's Response: Aww lol I like your little surprised face!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/07 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 30

More...i want more...and umm...now...LOL...jk...but it was great...update SOON!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks Jenn :O)

Reviewer: ALM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/07 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 30

she better not hurt AJ x pls pls can someone stop her x I hope all of the three kid will be ok WOW know im hoping that the Charlie kid will be ok x

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad people are starting to care about Charlie :O) Thanks ALM

Reviewer: Anita Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/07 04:31 am Title: Chapter 30

OMG DONT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT NO NO NO please update soon mare

Author's Response: Aww but I haven't left a mean cliffy in a looong time lol ;O)

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/07 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 30

hahaha! yes! its back! *dances* and why the hell isnt kevin answering his phone? and does aj know that the kevins are in the house too? how did ariana miss them? I NEED ANSWERS DAMNIT! *halo gets put back on* lol

Author's Response: Eep! The Kevins are not in the house! lol I'm sorry that wasn't clear. KEvin was at the office reviewing the 911 tapes.

Reviewer: A.W. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/06 05:28 am Title: Chapter 29

I love everything about this story please update asap please!!!!

Author's Response: aww thanks! :O)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/06 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 29

Now I can't wait to see what will happen next!!lol...When are u updating again?? Can't wait to see what'll happen next!! Loving the story mare.

Author's Response: Thank you! :O)

Reviewer: waj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/06 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 28

OMG...I hope they'll be able to get out...Nick knows more abt what's going on than any of the federal agents put together! And Nick's reaction to Patty was soooo sweet..Hope he gets the girl in the end!!

Author's Response: Aww lol thanks Waj!