[Report This]Date: 07/24/06 02:18 am Title: Chapter 23
omg i do believe you've spawned your latest evil ickling ms mare! and while i was salivating over this blended garlicky spice and nick's burger (i know that sounds wrong), he had to totally crush my appetite and made me go all panicky over his sudden inability to breathe! just what was it she put in his delicious garlicky burger?! and I hope AJ tie the pieces together, Nick needs a break! and thanks, you've managed to make me more evil! (although im still giggling over 'Riri' it just reminds me of ba ba black sheep, no idea why). BRILLIANT chapter!! :D
Author's Response: LMAO so can we say that Ariana...aka Riri (wtf is with baa baab black sheep by the way? lol) is deliciously evil? :O)
[Report This]Date: 07/22/06 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 23
OMG, she is going to ruin Nick's life! How is he supposed to tell anybody anything if she is threatening him? Either way, he loses! And I cannot believe she poisoned him! At least he didnt get a full dose...yikes! Seems AJ is catching on to something though, so hopefully he will ask Nick about it, and believe him! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: aww thanks! :O)
[Report This]Date: 07/22/06 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 23
WOW!!! That was sooo intense. I need to read the next chapter right now to know that Nick is okay and what's going to happen now that he knows about his mom :( and especially what's AJ going to do after finding all those papers with all that info about Ariana. Come on AJ, come save Nicky since Kevin is being so dense lately that he can't understand what's going on.
Amazing chapter Mare :)
Author's Response: Aww okay well chapter 24 starts out with... lmao thanks for reviewing :O) Let's hope that AJ stops watching porn long enough to help out!
[Report This]Date: 07/22/06 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 23
:o....PLEASE LET HIM BE OKAY!!!! ILL SHARE MY GOBSTOPPERS WITH YOU IF YOU DO!!!!!
Author's Response: oooh gobstoppers eh? lol
[Report This]Date: 07/20/06 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 22
excellent chapter kevin annoyed me but I guess I can't blame him. The way things are going I wouldn't know what to do. I really hate Ariana. Such an evil biatch! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Aww lol thanks Anita! And yes Ariana need a good kicking.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/06 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 22
Oooh poor Nick! Why won't Kevin believe him. I'm totally hooked on this story. Ariana is quite the villaness. I just have one question? Is there a prequel to this? Because I feel kind of confused about things in the past.
Author's Response: aww thanks! And yes there is. It's called To Protect and Serve and you can find it under my name of you do a search by author. Aww yes. I can see why you might be confused lol
thanks for reading! :O)
[Report This]Date: 07/15/06 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 22
Ariana is HORRIBLE! I cannot believe Kevin is taking her side over Nick's. Blonde dumbass better speak up, and fast! Hopefully Nick and Patty reunite and get a lil thing going. They are sweet together :) Awesome chapter...as always!
Author's Response: Aww thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07/15/06 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 22
can i go after ariana with my bat? please?
cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Yes you may lmao I give you permission just not too soon. you don't want to ruin my story, do you?
[Report This]Date: 07/15/06 04:12 am Title: Chapter 21
love the chapter update when you can.
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07/13/06 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 21
that was an excellent chapter that woman is evil
Author's Response: Aww thanks for all of those reviews Anita! And no worries...you're a good character not a bad one...so far at least muahhahaha ;O) lol
[Report This]Date: 07/13/06 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 20
wow im a little lost is kevin her real father? and why did he kill her parents?
[Report This]Date: 07/13/06 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 19
oh no my nicky has been discovered TELL KEVIN ALREADY YOU DOLT!
[Report This]Date: 07/13/06 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 18
i hate her i hate her i hate her and i feel so bad for howie
[Report This]Date: 07/13/06 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 17
i said this before and ill say it again NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT HOWIE
[Report This]Date: 07/13/06 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 16
thank god everyone we love is ok im glad stacey didnt die that would have been horrible
