[Report This]Date: 05/12/06 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow that was a great update. keep up the great job and i can't wait til the next update to see what happens to the richardsons next.
Author's Response: Thanks! :O)
[Report This]Date: 05/12/06 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh Lord...plan B cannot be good! And I still am anxious to know why these people are after the Richardsons. It sounds like Charlie and his gang had NO idea what they were getting themselves in to. Don't those little idiots know not to do ANYTHING unless you KNOW the outcome first? Freakin neantrethals. lol. Thankfully everybody is okay though. This time... You had me SO scared there that Stacey was in there. Good think you didn't kill her off. Amazing chapter. I cannot wait for the next...even if it is towards the end of the month.
Author's Response: Aww I know it's so unlike me to let her live isn't it? LOL Maybe that's why I did it. Thanks for understanding about the lateness. Hopefully it'll be before the end of the month. :O)
[Report This]Date: 05/12/06 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh, thank god!!! Everyone's ok...well, apart from the innocent ppl in that building...but, I am SO happy that Stacey survived!! And, erm who's Eric?? Is he supposed to be Nick? Coz I just assumed that u made a typo...hey, do u have plans to publish this as well??? Lol. Sorry for being so nosy, just can't help it!! ;-)
Author's Response: LOL aww Eric is one of the firefighters who work with AJ. The guy he was playing poker with in the last chapter and as far as publishing, i'm not sure if i'll try to get this one published. Maybe, but I don't know if it's publishable. Thanks for asking though :O)
[Report This]Date: 05/12/06 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
THANK GOD!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/06 01:09 pm Title: 15
Oh holy shit!!1 You can't kill Stacey...and just...NO! *sniffles* And poor Howie and NIcky and just...all of them. Everybody (but Nick) seems so content for the most part. That is SO about to change. Nick shoulda spoken up about Ariana while he had the chance. Awesome chapter....the real drama begins...lol
Author's Response: Aww I just saw this, sorry about the late reply. And Nick did tell Brian but then kind of chickened out so you can technically blame Brian too lmao :O)
[Report This]Date: 04/30/06 04:09 am Title: 15
Love the whole story and the cliffhanger. Please update as soon as you can!!!!
Author's Response: thanks! :O)
[Report This]Date: 04/29/06 04:53 pm Title: 15
i just re read it (before i read your comment heh) and didnt kev leave? nowi m al confused lol
Author's Response: LOL I live to confuse people! hehehe actually you are correct, Kevin left to get pizza, we're just not sure if he made it back or not yet. ;O)
[Report This]Date: 04/29/06 03:50 pm Title: 15
Oh my GOD!!! Poor Aj he can't lose Stacy. those two were a match made in Heven she can't die!!!!! you have to update soon I'm going out of my mind not knowing what's gonna happen. great chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww they are cute together aren't they? lol i'll try my best to get another update out to you on Friday. :O)
[Report This]Date: 04/29/06 10:53 am Title: 15
i knew it was coming, but i still screamed at my computer when i read that the fire was at AJ's apartment. & i so desperately want to know exactly why ariana and jack are doing this! i mean, i'm assuming that the man ariana was referring to is kevin senior. what did he do that ruffled their feathers so? but you do a great job of keeping everyone on the edge of their seats...so i'm not complaining per se. well, i can't wait until you update! :)
Author's Response: It's actually the entire apartment building and thanks for the review Ann :O)
[Report This]Date: 04/29/06 03:02 am Title: 15
OMG!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!! An' I bet Charlie will get in shit 'cause he didn't blow A.J. up!!!! Their stupid f*cked up plan backfired 'cause A.J. switched shifts with Stacy! OMG!!! KEVIN ALMOST GOT BLOWN UP TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And that gal doin' the laundry, I bet she was the FIRST to go, since she started the washer. HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And WTF is with Nick NOT telling Brian!?!?!?! He coulda SAVED A.J.'s fiancee if he had told Brian about Arianna!!!! ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: doing a lot of assuming tere Lenni lol ;O)
[Report This]Date: 04/28/06 09:26 pm Title: 15
another great part to the story cant wait for more on fri, Pls can Stacey be ok she got out some how x Charlie need a good kick up the will he know what x do not getting me started on Patty she believes she was even thankin that about Nick and poor Nick he got himself in a crossroad should he tell and keep it to him self x keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: 04/28/06 09:25 pm Title: 15
another great part to the story cant wait for more on fri, Pls can Stacey be ok she got out some how x Charlie need a good kick up the will he know what x do not getting me started on Patty she believes she was even thankin that about Nick and poor Nick he got himself in a crossroad should he tell and keep it to him self x keep up the good work
Author's Response: Aww, i'm glad you all like Stacey :O)
[Report This]Date: 04/28/06 08:55 pm Title: 15
HOLY #$@$@# @#$@# $@#$@# @$@#$@#$!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE LET THEM BE ALRIGHT!!!!!!
kevins in that building too, right? i just wanna be sure!
Author's Response: Kevin, Aj, Brian and Stacey all live in that building. The onyl thing you know for sure is that AJ and Brian were not there. :OP
[Report This]Date: 04/28/06 08:50 pm Title: 15
Hey Mare! Is Stacey dead??? I hope she survived, but I have a bad feeling. it seems as though non of them are able to stay happy for more than 5 mins...must be the family curse kicking in. I hope for AJ's sake that she'll be fine. And, Nick...I know that he should tell someone, but at the same time I'm glad he's not, cuz that witch could find out if he does...God knws what they'll do then! I guess everything'll kick off on the next chapter? Can't wait!
Author's Response: Aww, now you know I can't answer that Waj! What kind of mean cliffie person would I be if I told you if Stacey was dead or not? lol
[Report This]Date: 04/27/06 12:06 am Title: 14
Stupid, STUPID Nick!!! I mean, jeez...going back to get his sketch pad when he knows he was almost chased? He really is blonde...and how his ass is gonna get killed or slowly tortured. Ariana is a bitch....and that is being nice. WIll anybody believe Nicky if he makes it on time to speak of what he knows? Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: aww thanks! :O) Hope you had a great time in Florida!
