Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/07 08:09 am Title: Chapter Forty-Five

Aww she was so good at listening and calming him down lol I need someone like that for me!!

Great Chapter Mel, your definitely on a roll, your muse must have had a great holiday since you've been writing great chapter recently :D

Author's Response: Aww thanks Moppy! I'm hoping that it keeps up cuz as I've been saying my goal is to finish this story up this summer and start on the sequel come Sept. *crosses fingers*

Reviewer: FiliKlepto Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/07 07:11 am Title: Chapter Forty-Five

This chapter was just marvelous; I can see why it's your favorite! Nick's reaction to Kevin's news was so furious and real, and your writing was truly insightful into the way his mind must work.

I think this is also one of my favorites, as well. (Your writing just keeps getting better and better lately! What's your inspiration? You're really on a roll!)

Author's Response: LOl thanks a lot! I dunno what it is lately. Maybe its now that the summer is here I actually have time to write. Or maybe its that the end of this story is getting closer and closer. Or maybe its because I'm actually getting to some of the really good parts that I've been itching to write. Whatever it is, I'm not complaining!

Reviewer: csmbabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/07 01:58 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Please update soon, I can't wait to see what else happens.

Reviewer: mznickgenecarter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/23/07 04:18 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

im loving this chapter..keep it up

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/07 07:03 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

OOh boy....sounds like more Nick drama coming up! Can't wait!

Author's Response: You betcha! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Alexfrack Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/07 04:55 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Gosh, great chapter, i wanna know how Nick's gonna take the news and how things are gonna get between him and Alyssa. good one :D. Update asap plz :D

Author's Response: Well, that's definitely going to all be told in the next chapter... As soon as I get to writing it. Good news is that school ended on Thurs, so now I only have one job to suck up all my time until Sept rolls around.

Reviewer: FiliKlepto Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/07 04:29 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Oooh! Ooh, ooh, ooooooh! That was a really good one. I'm not sure why I enjoyed this chapter even more so than usual, but I did.

Maybe it was the rational!Alyssa being shocked by her drunken spree. Maybe it was the fabulous, heart-racing awkwardness of the accidental "I love you." (Really, really loved that part!) Or maybe it was the dialog, which was so natural and familiar, even when Alyssa was being forced and overly cheerful.

I just don't know, but I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one! :3

Author's Response: Those are all good reasons! I kind of felt bad for making Alyssa seem so trashy last chapter, so I thought it would be funny to have her shocked at her behavior the next morning. And the accidental I love you was kind of random, but I thought it fit really well because we all say things like that without thinking it and for her to say it to Nick it would be really strange. Thanks a lot and I hope to get down to it as soon as I can!