[Report This]Date: 01/26/07 01:13 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Wow, I really enjoyed this chapter! You write Nick's perspective so naturally and convincingly that it's easy to understand why his life is happening the way it is. Great stuff!
Author's Response: Thank you. I love writing about Nick because he's such an angsty person, that I feel like he has a lot of issues. He's a very versatile person and great to write about!
[Report This]Date: 01/25/07 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
awww i love it
[Report This]Date: 01/24/07 11:19 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
"It's okay Nick," she assured him as she placed a hand on his shoulder. "We probably just needed to get that out of her systems. Now its happened and we can move on." == Best recovery ever! I really love the way things are progressing with these two.
Author's Response: Thanks! And just think you're only on Ch 13. There's so much more to come lol
[Report This]Date: 01/24/07 07:34 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I really like how you're unfolding their past, and the story of how they said "I love you" for the first time was so sweet! Haha, I feel like I am mass-commenting you as I read. O_O
Author's Response: That's perfectly all right! I don't mind the mass commenting at all! lol
[Report This]Date: 01/24/07 04:21 am Title: Chapter Six
Wow! That flashback to their first kiss sent chills down my spine.
Author's Response: Really? Wow thanks lol. It's not one of my best parts I felt like, but it means a lot that someone else liked it!Thank you for your reviews
[Report This]Date: 01/24/07 03:53 am Title: Chapter Four
*g* Oooh, the plot thickens! I love how you've really built up the tension between Alyssa and Nick and they haven't even met yet. So awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you! Considering Nick doesn't really step back into the picture until Chapter 7 I have to really work on that suspense.
[Report This]Date: 01/18/07 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
Wow...very good chapter...Can't wait til the next one :)
[Report This]Date: 01/18/07 08:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
It's great that they give things another chance. But still there's Australia, a lot of girls, a lot of temptation...
Tx for the update, Mel!
Author's Response: Oh yea.... Australia... That should be interesting *winks*
[Report This]Date: 01/18/07 06:59 am Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
Great update, awesome chapter!! I love where this story is going!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/07 02:04 am Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
That was badass. Seriously, for Nick Carter, I don't give a crap who is near us, down the hall, in the same room... it's just like, who the hell cares. It's Nick Carter!!! hahahah
that was a great chapter, can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: LMFAO!!! You just totally made me crack up Liane! That's like the best piece of feedback I've ever gotten lol You rock!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/07 01:38 am Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
That was badass. Seriously, for Nick Carter, I don't give a crap who is near us, down the hall, in the same room... it's just like, who the hell cares. It's Nick Carter!!! hahahah
that was a great chapter, can't wait for the rest.
[Report This]Date: 01/17/07 09:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
Wow that's awesome that they are gonna try it again... but I hope that Nick doesn't get cold feet later on... Aww crap Mel, I wanted to be AJ's love interest but I guess you probably have someone for him... *makes face* I don't want to be with Howie.. lol Loooved the chapter and I can't wait to read more..
Author's Response: Aww... V! Now you're making me feel bad *pouts* I promise you if sumthin ever comes up again my fics where I need a cameo I'll think of you. Are you SURE you don't want to be Howie's g/f? lol You don't even have to hold hands w/ him. I promise. The part is more just to be friends of Alyssa when she's in LA. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 01/17/07 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
OMG their relationship is going somewhere !! When Nick walked into Alyssa's room i just knew something was going to happen. Im just glad that Nick finally came to his senses to get the ball rolling in the relationship department. If you don't have anyone but i bet you do i would love to be in your story to play AJ's love interest in LA but if you already have someone for him then Howie is okay too ! My name is Patricia .
Author's Response: You did? LOl Cuz I certainly didn't! I don't think I figured it out until Alyssa actually laid it all out for him. Funny, you shoul volunteer cuz I was kicking around naming AJ's girl Tricia. Do you ever go by that nickname? E-mal me at DimpledDevl18@aol.com with a breif description of what you look like for me.
[Report This]Date: 01/17/07 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
OMG their relationship is going somewhere !! When Nick walked into Alyssa's room i just knew something was going to happen. Im just glad that Nick finally came to his senses to get the ball rolling in the relationship department. If you don't have anyone but i bet you do i would love to be in your story to play AJ's love interest in LA but if you already have someone for him then Howie is okay too ! My name is Patricia .
[Report This]Date: 01/17/07 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirty - Five
Loved it!!!!Can't wait for another one.
