[Report This]Date: 01/12/07 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four
Heyyyy I didn't know you updated before... whoops.. well the last chapter was a great one. Uh oh... Carter invited her to Cali for New Year's... something's gonna happen there I just know it... maybe a midnight kiss... by the way, the kiss in the kiss in the last chapter was awesome.. lol but I thought for sure her parents were gonna see that one. Loved it and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yea I was a lil scared when you didn't leave me feedback last chapter lol I was like OMG what happened to Vron? My #1 fan lol Thanks a lot! I'm still kicking around some ideas for the Cali trip, but I can assure you that you won't be disapointed. And thanks for you comments on the kiss from the previous chapter. It was unexpected, but I think it was maybe the best kissing scene I've written.
[Report This]Date: 01/12/07 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Poor Alyssa. Anyway, another AWESOME chapter and I can't wait to read some more!
[Report This]Date: 01/12/07 03:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four
awesome! loved the chapter.update again soon plz ...cant wait
[Report This]Date: 01/12/07 10:39 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four
Oooooh i LOVE this chapter!!!
I cnt wait to see what they get up to in LA!
[Report This]Date: 01/08/07 09:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -Three
ahhh, so good! Please finish the rest soon!!! I wanna know what happens.
[Report This]Date: 01/08/07 08:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -Three
okay...this is one of the best fictions i have ever read... you are a great writer
[Report This]Date: 01/07/07 06:33 am Title: Chapter Six
so I have to be at work in the morning and I CAN'T stop reading this. ahhhh too good.
Author's Response: Ha and you're only at Chapter 6! It gets SOOO much better if I do say so myself. Okay I'll give you permission to go to bed, as long as u keep reading tommorrow lol
[Report This]Date: 01/07/07 04:59 am Title: Chapter Two
very good so far. nice job; i can't wait to read the rest.
[Report This]Date: 01/06/07 05:24 am Title: Chapter Thirty -Three
Oh my, what will happen next?! I love the way you write this! :)
[Report This]Date: 01/06/07 12:25 am Title: Chapter Thirty -Three
OMG that was such a great update !!! Poor Nick he felt so out of place at Alyssa's house and that kiss , was just OMG !!
Author's Response: Yea that kiss sneaked up on me too lol It wasn't orginally supposed to be there, but somehow it sort of came out while I was writing. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 01/05/07 06:39 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -Three
OMG you gotta update very soon! I can't wait to read the rest!!
Date: 01/05/07 03:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -Three
Already another update! Great work, Mel!
[Report This]Date: 01/05/07 02:06 pm Title: Prologue
YES!!! 2 Updates, I love both of em! Can't wait to see what happens next. I thought for sure her parents were gonna bust them kissing outside!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry her parents are going to start have their "suspicions."
[Report This]Date: 01/05/07 01:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -Three
I love the chapter,hope you update again real soon.Can't wait to see what else happens lol.
[Report This]Date: 01/05/07 11:24 am Title: Chapter Thirty -Three
Mel you're killing me here!!!!! God great update!
Author's Response: The kiss was totally not planned. I was just writing and I was like you know what? They need to have this like really intense kiss that's like "uh oh." So, that changed the tone of the entire chapter.
