[Report This]Date: 01/04/07 09:32 pm Title: Prologue
This prologue didn't hook me completely but it did make me curious enough to want to read on.
There were a few gramatical errors, but all in all the writing is succinct and pleasantly descriptive.
Author's Response: Please keep reading... The beginning I feel is really rough and if I could I'd prolly change a lot of it. I feel like it really begins to kick in within the next few chapters. Thanks for the constructive critisiscm (sp?)Keep letting me know what you think.
[Report This]Date: 01/04/07 08:31 am Title: Chapter Thirty - Two
Wow, I love this story! I can't wait until you write more :>
[Report This]Date: 01/03/07 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Thirty - Two
I loved the chapter!Can't wait for another update,I hope it's real soon!!!!
Date: 01/03/07 11:53 am Title: Chapter Thirty - Two
Great update, Mel! I wonder how this Christmas will end...
[Report This]Date: 01/03/07 06:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty - Two
Mel great job!!! I really want them to be fully back together, it would be great but yeah I like where your story is heading lots o drama!!
[Report This]Date: 01/03/07 05:16 am Title: Chapter Thirty - Two
Thanks for the update! I understand with how busy you are. I've been waiting for this story to have an update so thanks again and keep it going!! :)
[Report This]Date: 01/03/07 05:01 am Title: Chapter Thirty - Two
Ohh something tells me that this christmas is gonna be whoa... lol I loved it Mel, and you know I can't wait to read more. Oh yeah, I forgot to wish you the best of luck in 2007, Mel. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/27/06 05:00 am Title: Chapter Thirty -One
WOW!!!!!!! I've been readint this thru not-like-you and I cant waitttttt for more hunnie!!! I
[Report This]Date: 12/02/06 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -One
Please give us another update! :)
Author's Response: I'd love to write, but unfortunately an update is not looking so good until maybe after next week. It's my last week of school, so I'm REALLY busy and have just a bunch of crap to do :( Sorry! I'd much rather be writing about Nick and Alyssa than writing my thesis on student self esteem... Trust me!
[Report This]Date: 11/15/06 12:37 am Title: Chapter Thirty -One
Thanks so much for updating! I love this story!! :)
[Report This]Date: 11/11/06 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -One
oooh i can;t wait to see how their xmas goes!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11/11/06 05:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -One
I love it. I can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 11/11/06 04:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -One
awesome keep up the great work up update asap please
Date: 11/11/06 12:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty -One
I'm sorry I keep forgetting to read reviews. I'm always so excited when you do update that when I finish reading I totally forget lol
Kick ass update can't wait for all the melodrama thats gonna come during christmas!!!
[Report This]Date: 11/11/06 05:57 am Title: Chapter Thirty -One
Mel, you just made me cry with the song choice you made cause it always hits a nerve for me but this song really does fit to what is happening to Alyssa. Something tells me that Christmas at home with the family and ex is not gonna go down so right or maybe it is gonna be right.... hmmmm not sure lol I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks V!I dunno if you are familair with the song, but of you actually hear it, its ten times better. The whole "giving in even though I should know better" part I think perfectly describes Alyssa to a T.
