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Date: 06/30/06 06:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
well what would a fanfic be without drama!!! love it!!!
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Date: 06/30/06 05:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
AHHHHH! Awesome!!! I loved this chapter well not more then I loved the other one ;) lol but talk about awkward.. lmao Ohhhh I can answer that last sentence Alyssa said well it's cause it's Nick :P heheh Ohhh Mel, I loved it and I can't wait to see what else is gonna happen!
Author's Response: That is true LOL Nick does have a talent for making things complicated. Next chapter will be good. I'll give ya a little teaser. Something from Nick's past that had a major impact on his and Alyssa's relationship comes out.
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Date: 06/30/06 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Wow!!!! that chapter was definalty worth the wait!! Cant wait for the next one!
Date: 06/30/06 04:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Damn girl that was hot! you are very creative with you writing! You are doing a great job! Update soon!
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Date: 06/29/06 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Oh, good 1! Lol, I thought they were gonna get it on right there in the cab, lol, it would've been hell of a show for the driver, lmao, but they made it to the appartment =P. I wonder what's gonna happen with them, update asap plz =)
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Date: 06/29/06 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Love this story - I hope there's more to come!!
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Date: 06/29/06 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I loved it! Please write some more soon. I'm totally hooked.
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Date: 06/29/06 05:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Oh my! Lol! 'Bout damn time they did it! Haha!
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Date: 06/28/06 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
jesus christ...can it get any hotter ?
and when does nickyboy recognize that is still madly in love with her?? huh? its abt damn time:-)
update asap!
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Date: 06/28/06 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
AHHHHHH THEY DID IT!!! YESSS!! Damn Mel, you know how to write a fuckin' sex scene even with this Cali heat wave it was freakin' hot. That was awesome but I'm real curious on how this is gonna take it's toll on their new found friendship. Great job and you really did make it worth the wait.
Author's Response: Thanks V! That means a lot to me because I really was unsure if it was "hot" enough LOL. So far though it seems like everyone loved it. And of course them having sex is going to have a huge impact on their friendship which is going to open lots of doors with this story in the next few chapters.
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Date: 06/28/06 05:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I loved it! I am so glad they did it! LOL I can't wait to see what is going to happen tomorrow! Post more soon!
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Date: 06/28/06 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
perfect written and I loved the end... keep u this awesome job girl!
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Date: 06/25/06 04:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty- One
ooh cant wait for an update, although she's more drunk than him surely he shouldnt do anything?
i hope for an update soon i know the wait will be worth it.
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Date: 06/25/06 12:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty- One
I want more of this story!!!
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Date: 06/24/06 05:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty- One
loving it! hope to read more very soon.