Date: 11/20/07 02:01 am Title: Chapter Twelve
oooohhh she went i knew it hehe good job
Date: 11/20/07 01:53 am Title: Chapter Eleven
another great chapter, i have come to enjoy this story very much, you are a wonderful author getting down the emotions beautifully
Author's Response: Thanks Anita! Glad I got you hooked and I don't really start even loving what I wrote until like Chapter 14 ish
Date: 11/20/07 01:11 am Title: Chapter Ten
oooohhh a baby! heheh awesome and wow friendship like that with nick? well see how he acts
Date: 11/20/07 01:02 am Title: Chapter Nine
omg wow what an emotional thing but i can see why nick was upset with his parents divorse and how it scared him
Author's Response: Yea, the effect of Bob and Jane's divorce on Nick is an ongoing theme throughout this whole story. It's definitely left quite some deep scars on him as a result.
Date: 11/20/07 12:52 am Title: Chapter Eight
another very good chapter i am still highly enjoying it
Date: 11/19/07 08:10 am Title: Author's Note and Thank You's
I really enjoyed every minute of reading this story. Im glad you finished it and working on the sequel. Its funny cause i was going to ask you about it. I wish you luck with the sequel and cant wait for it.
Author's Response: Thanks Zahra! The sequel is up already so check it out please
Date: 11/19/07 05:57 am Title: Chapter Seven
wow i had butterflies through out this entire chapter it was so good though
Author's Response: Thank you! I know that chapter was full of lots of anticipation with Nick FINALLY popping into the story.
Date: 11/19/07 05:50 am Title: Chapter Six
ooohhh that was an intense chapter but the next one seems to be even more so!
Date: 11/19/07 05:42 am Title: Chapter Five
aaww poor alyssa. if i ended my relationship with nick too id be devestated also....not that i have one but ya know
Date: 11/19/07 05:35 am Title: Chapter Four
oooohhhh great job....i have a feeling the drama is about to begin
Author's Response: Yea this is about where the plot begins to thicken...
Date: 11/19/07 05:21 am Title: Chapter Three
oh wow poor thing has been through so much but still an excellent and emotional chapter
Date: 11/19/07 05:11 am Title: Chapter Two
a very excellent chapter. its good learning everything the way you have been placing it
Author's Response: Thanks unfortunately the set up is really long in this story so I'm glad it all makes sense to you so far.
Author's Response: Thanks unfortunately the set up is really long in this story so I'm glad it all makes sense to you so far.
Date: 11/19/07 04:34 am Title: Chapter One
very good chapter i enjoyed it also nice flashbacks with the memories
Date: 11/19/07 04:28 am Title: Prologue
very good start so far i liked it a lot
Author's Response: Thanks! You have a lot of reading ahead of you, but take your time. I love new readers!
Date: 11/16/07 09:05 pm Title: Author's Note and Thank You's
waow that was a great story sad that its ended but im will look forward to the sequal, you are a really great writter cant wait for the next one xxxx
Author's Response: Thanks! I just posted the Prologue to the sequel A Little Taste of Sin, so please go and check it out!
