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Reviewer: Heidi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/08 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 53 - One Step at a Time

I'm glad you are okay! Pretty nasty for your car but I hope you're happy with your new one wich I believe is the case. Hehe.

Anyways, great update! I love the way you are getting a therapist in this! I know it's cliché but I think it makes the story a reality. So many people see a therapist and they can all relate to the feelings that Alyssa has. So that's that.

I love Nick the way Nick is acting in this chapter! He's acting reliable and supportive, he's anything but selfish. I love that in men. He is trying his best to get Alyssa through this and I think he is doing a great job. Make me wish a man like him! Hahaha

Good luck on the next chapther but I know you'll handle it! Can't wait to read it!

Author's Response:

Thanks Heidi! I am very happy with the new car! It looks brand new and is in VERY good condition. And it has a sun rood :D. Don't love the payments, but what are you going to do *sighs*

I'm glad you like the therapist stuff. I was hesitant because it has almost come a fan fic cliche, but unlike a lot of stories I do think Alyssa needs it. I know some fics that throw therapy in just for drama and look to create problems that aren't really there, but I think Alyssa has plenty of real problems she has to deal with right now. Hopefully therapy does wonders for her.

Nick is being very sweet. I mean he's kind of hanging out in the background for now, but that's what Alyssa needs right now. When she is ready she will come to him. But yes I wish all guys could be like that too lol.

Reviewer: sickasmysecrets Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/08 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 53 - One Step at a Time

I just wanna say that i love this story soooo freakin' much! I've read it in a week, i cant tear myself away from this! If your ever writing other stories, please write ones similar to this as the story is soo gripping! I love the sneaking around thing and especially stories when two people secretly like eachother at the start etc. This story is simply amazing! I'm starting to read it all over again from tomorrow and i'm looking forward to it! Thank u sooo MUCH!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review! I am glad that you enjoyed this story. Wow... Reading it all in a week is quite a feat since its pretty long! I do have other stories, but this is the only one that deals with an affair. If you'd like to read more about Alyssa and Nick there's a story before this one Under My Skin which I don't think is as good cuz I only finished it last year. Then there's an earlier spin off.

Reviewer: sickasmysecrets Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/08 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Wine Me, Dine Me, 69 Me

This by far is the best story i have read, i love the whole idea behind it, its amazing! THANK U

Reviewer: Kim Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/08 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 53 - One Step at a Time

Ahhhhh only 3 more to go, can't beleive it, I love this story, this update is awesome. update soon.



Author's Response: I know! I can't either... I have so much to still tie up and only 3 chapters to do it in. Scary!

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/08 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 53 - One Step at a Time

It took long enough, but it was worth the wait! Great job on this chapter! I am glad to see Lyss coming out of her shell a little and opening up to Nick and Julia. I am looking forward to this humerous element you are going to put in the next chapter....I am kind of sad though...only a few more chapters left.

Author's Response: Aww... Don't be sad. There's a sequel! It is a relief to see Alyssa beginning to open up and get over herself. I was skeptical about the therapy thing because it's become almost cliche, but I think Alyssa really needs it. As for the humorous element... Well, let's just say Teri and Tricia plan a little surprise for Alyssa to help her feel more confident in herself again LOL.

Reviewer: pinkycat Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/08 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 53 - One Step at a Time

I'm so glad Alyssa is starting to come out of her funk - just wondering what is going to happen with her and Nick though...I'm sure there will be some drama there. I'm glad the Sean situation was handled with only a few sentences as I was getting annoyed with him!! : )  Can't wait for the next chapter!! : )



Author's Response: You and me both. As for what's going to happen to Alyssa and Nick you'll have to keep reading. Most of the rest of the story is pretty Alyssa dominated, but Nick will be around. Ha I was getting annoyed with Sean too. I was so glad to have him out of the picture. One less person to worry about haha

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/08 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 53 - One Step at a Time

awsome job. So can't wait for more and for nick and alyssa to be come normal again.

Author's Response: Yea same here.. It's an ongoing process, so it's going to take time.

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/08 04:47 am Title: Chapter 53 - One Step at a Time

I'm glad Alyssa is getting back to normal!  can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yea me too... I had about all of depressed Alyssa that I could take!

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/08 02:22 am Title: Chapter 53 - One Step at a Time

guys suck. i hope you have better luck than i've had.

as for the chapter, it was a good transition chapter from the crash to the recovery. im glad that nick is trying his best to let alyssa get through this on her own, yet being supportive when he's needed. Hopefully things will work out between them.



Author's Response:

I hope this one is a keeper! So far he seems great! Just very busy which is a problem :(

I;m glad that you enjoyed the chapter. It was very transitional and although necessary a bitch to write for some reason. Only 3 chapters left! I hope I can get them out quickly!

Reviewer: magsie19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/08 08:09 am Title: Chapter 52 -Wake Me Up When It's Over

Oh geez! I can't take it anymore! Please update soon! Haha!

Author's Response: I am definitely going to try. I apologize for the wait. A lot has been  going on this past week that makes wroting the last thing on my mind. I got into a car accident on Fri (I'm fine!) but now have been in the process of buying a new car so yea... Not much writing time. Hopefully this week we can squeeze out an update.

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 09:28 am Title: Prologue - Never Again

****uhhhhhummmmm*****

tic toc tic toc........

Author's Response: Haha I am sorry Brandy, but I do have an excuse for the lack of updates. Remember how I said that I was going to get a second job? Well, I finally broke down and did it. I'm going to be a server at Chili's and I started my training all this week which is pretty intensive since I have no restaurant experience. Of course since I started training, I've worked every day teaching in one class this week and lesson plans have been skimpy so I've had to do a lot of outside planning. To top it all off I met a boy Sat night, so I've been pretty distracted. I'm not sure where it's going to go if anywhere. So yea... Not a lot of writing time this week :(. Hopefully next week isn't as busy for me.

Reviewer: pinkycat Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 52 -Wake Me Up When It's Over

Oh, I'm really excited now!! I love how Nick was the one to get her out of her funk!!  Yay!  Can't wait for the next one.

And I think a prequel would be interesting!!  I would def read it!!



Author's Response: Of course it was Nick. He was like the only one who could get her out of it. I'm so glad that you like the prequel idea. I started writing it last night and I think I'm going to go with it so be on the look out for it!

Reviewer: csmbabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 52 -Wake Me Up When It's Over

I know it's been a good long time since I've left anything here for you lol. Life has just been crazy and let's just leave that at that lol. Anyways, I just wanted to say I've been keeping up with the story and everything and I really think you are doing a great job with it. I hope this ain't like the end of the whole story for Nick and Alyssa. I would love to see what would happen if they really truely got together and this time it like work out for them. Are you planning on ending it with this story or what are you planning on doing after this story is finished? Hope your not done!! You're a very good writer and I would hate to see the end of any of your storys!!!



Author's Response: Aww I completely understand that! Thank you for popping in though to let me know that you are still reading and enjoying! To answer your question there will be an ALTOS sequel that is currently in the works. We only have like 4 more chapters of ALTOS left and I hope to start the sequel soon after. I have also been fooling around with a sort of prequel/spin off that people seem interested in so I think I'll try posting that too. Be on the look out!

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 08:41 am Title: Chapter 1 - Here's to You, Mrs. Robinson

Oh Wow so she did marry Sean. Hum...and she didn't invite Nick. Tsk tsk...I smell trouble.

Author's Response: Yepp... She went through with it. Now I guess it's almost inevitable for her and Nick to bump into each other again.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 08:35 am Title: Prologue - Never Again

Wow Alyssa has some guts alright, cause if I still had feelings for someone I would definately not face them...at their WEDDING. Off to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yea I'd imagine that would be pretty hard to swallow if you were in Alyssa's situation. Thank you for reading!