Date: 07/03/08 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin
I'm so torn about how I feel. I want to be angry at Alyssa becuse cheating is wrong no matter how you paint it. Pregnancy hormones is not a good enough excuse! But then again if you're not happy in a relationship then you shouldn't just stay in it, especially when a child is going to be caught in the middle.
I'm glad she has finally realised that she just settled with Sean though. I think what Teri said about abscence making the heart grow fonder will play on her mind. She needs to tell Sean but I get why she doesn't want to do it over the phone, she may be a cheater but she's not that callous.
And Nick? He's definetly changed. I love how he is taking care of Alyssa and his sensitivity is definetly working wonders. I think he settled with Shayla, after all that's why he didn't want a baby with her. This shit is going to hit the fan when she finds out!
Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens after this!
Author's Response:
It's such a tough situation because you want to be mad at Alyssa and Nick for what they are doing, but at the same time you really are cheering them on. Alyssa is beginnng to come to the realization that her and Sean aren't right for each other, now its just finding the right time to tell him.
Nick has definitely changed big time. He knows exactly what he needs to do to win Alyssa over and its definitely working for him. He's ony really w/ Shayla more because he can't be w/ Alyssa and Shayla represents more of the person he used to be.
Date: 07/03/08 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin
OHH MYY GAWWWDD>...please update soon....I need more of this....OMG...
Author's Response: I'm posting the next chapter in a few minutes.
Date: 07/03/08 01:26 pm Title: Prologue - Never Again
Go Alyssa and Nick!
Great chapter...
Author's Response: Thanks! i'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/03/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin
definitely my favorite chapter so far. it just showed them connecting on such a different level. the time in the condo compared to this even is a big step up. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Wow... You're the second person who has said that to me. I must say myself that I'm REALLY pleasantly surprised with even how well they seem to be connecting this time around. It's funny cuz when I wrote the condo scene I was like Wow... I'll NEVER be able to top this, but I think with this chapter I just might have. Definitely makes me as a writer want to explore this new connection between them even further. I'm so glad that you are enjoying it Mary!
Date: 07/03/08 06:10 am Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin
wow. that was hot. glad she finally realized what the issue was. she never was fully in love with sean and that was always obvious. she never looked at another guy when nick was gone on tour for long periods of time but the second sean is gone hes out of sight out of mind. though I don't really see her breaking up with him too quick. they have a lot to deal with.
Author's Response: Very true... It's kind of like duh she should have realized this sooner, but sometimes the things that are right in front of your face are the least obvious. As far as when she breaks it off with Sean we'll have to see. She wants to wait to be able to do it person, but she may find that harder to do then she originally thinks.
Date: 07/03/08 05:16 am Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin
OMG!!! GO Nicky it's your birthday...you got some booty form Alyssa!!!
I am so glad that Lyss is finally admitting that she is in love with Nick!
Here is my prediction for upcoming chapters....She is going to accept that she is in love with him, and she may even tell him. They will totally keep sleeping together!. As for Sean, she won't tell him about Nick or the baby until he gets home. She will think that it is easier that way!
Can i take Lyss spot in front of the Mirror? I won't be shy!!!!
GREAT CHAPTER MEL!!!! The best so far!
Author's Response: LOL Thanks so much for the review Brandy! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. I wasn't sure how my readers would react to Nick and Alyssa having sex because so many people are against the idea of them cheating, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. About your predictions you'll have to keep reading, but it sounds pretty logical to me.
Date: 07/03/08 03:51 am Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin
OH MY GOD i want more of that hehe.... that was such an amazing chapter. i love how it all happened from one simple foot rub. i cant wait for more. just cant get enough.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yea pretty darn amazing, but you know what a foot rub can feel like to a pregnant woman lol. Hopefully now you'll start to see more of that side of Alyssa and Nick.
Date: 07/03/08 02:13 am Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin
OMG!!!!!! more ! soon!
Date: 07/03/08 12:40 am Title: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin
Un-fucking-believable my dear! I loved it every bit of this chapter. It's truly my favorite so far aside from a few certain others. I love their chemistry and you so nailed it with this chapter.
Author's Response: Their chemistry is scaring me a bit too lately with how powerful its been lately. Thanks sweetie! You know I couldn't have done it without you encouraging me every step of the way *hugs* Let's hope that my other readers think its just as hot.
Date: 07/02/08 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Denial Is Not Just a River
Aye yie yie...you're definitely keeping this story interesting!!!
Date: 07/02/08 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
I love all the twists and turns - I'm seriously getting no work done today as I can't stop reading!! : )
Author's Response: Aww lol I'm sorry! I'm getting no work either because I'm determined to finish my next chapter, so don't feel so bad.
Date: 07/02/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Power of Goodbye
LOL - Good one!! : )
Date: 07/02/08 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Reality Sets In
Oh my Gosh - okay, so my prediction is that Alyssa will get pregnant, just not with Sean!!! Loving this story!!!
Author's Response: Hmm... That could be a possibility...
Date: 07/01/08 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
This....is getting good!!!
Author's Response: Yea that's right around where the plot thickens!
Date: 06/30/08 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
I was figuring Nick would take the pics to the condo that he never got rid of - if Shayla doesn't even know it exists, then the pics would have been safe there!! : ) But then we wouldn't have drama now would we!! LOL Love this story and how its progressing!!!
Author's Response: Ooh... I don't think I thought of that option myself. Yea, that would make sense, but its way too easy lol. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story Sasha. Please keep reading!
