Date: 06/17/08 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
another great chapter please update soon!
Date: 06/15/08 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Hormonal Overdrive
ugh sorry i don't agree at all with alyssa and she does sound selfish to me but i still enjoyed th chapter and nick is ssssooo bad but great job
Date: 06/15/08 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Damage Control
an amazing chapter i nearly cried seriously. it was a great chapter and i am off to read more
Date: 06/15/08 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 29 - You May Now Kiss the Bridesmaid
oooohhhh excellent chapter very intense with nick and alyssa but i have to say the last bit of the chapter was my favorite part. great job with the humor
Date: 06/14/08 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
Oh.. My.. God!!!!:D That was seriously awesome. I can't believe Sean!! Shouldn't everyone be able to do what they want. Not everyone has to like other people. Alyssa doesn't have to breastfeed. Not everyone does it. Nick's being really nice to her and all. Sorry I haven't been able to write a review before. Been busy. But this story is definitely my favourite!!!!
Ooh and please update soon!!:D
Date: 06/14/08 06:27 am Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
Oh my goodness! Awesome updates!
So who saw them kiss just then?
"and if I'm single this weekend, so are you" oh! That line was the best! Lol I am sooooooo into this story, you are an amazing writer! :)
Date: 06/12/08 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
Awwwwwww.... I hate how everytime I feel bad for Sean he has to go and be an ass ! I don't care what he thinks, he should ALWAYS take his wife's side in any argument.... At the same time, I can't help but be mad at Nick for cheating ONCE more on his significant other... Even if he doesn't like Shayla, noone made him go back with her.... hopefully he will learn one day !
Good one, once more !
Date: 06/11/08 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
WOW!!! I'm linging on every word.... this is pretty exciting! I'm really dying to know what happens next, but knowing myself i'm holding a 'but' to it. LoL. I will just have to wait to see what happens next.
You did a great job on this chappie, men!
Date: 06/11/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
i cant believe it ended like that!!! great way to end it though build the anticipation!!!
Date: 06/10/08 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
loved it can't wait for more.
Date: 06/09/08 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
great keep it coming !!!
Date: 06/09/08 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
OMG you can't leave it there.....OMG I soo need more and fast.....
Author's Response: I'm trying to churn out an update soon. Just been super busy!
Date: 06/09/08 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
I'm glad you got your update posted, even if it was cut short. What a place to end it though, you can feel the tension and awkwardness radiating off the screen! Oh and Sean is a major dickface. Like, WTF is up with him? He knows she's upset about the whole issue and that she's obviously not going to change her mind so why try to fight it? Honestly that really wasn't cool of him. I know it must suck that Alyssa isn't getting along with his friend's wife but really he should be supporting her. I mean, she's supporting him enough in his Iraq/military exploits, he could at least support her in this, yeesh! (Wow I went off on a rant..) Um anyway.. great chapter Mel! You know what they say about chocolate ;)
Author's Response: Yes lol Chocolate is VERY inspiring to me. Sorry I haven't responded to any reviews lately. I've been too busy to. Now if only I could get the first page of this next chapter grr!
Date: 06/09/08 07:08 am Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
NOOOO....did you have to end it like that???? Seriously though, great update. Lyss is going to start giving in to him more and more, I just know it. Nice touch with the little fight with Sean, makes for a good excuse. Looking forward to another chappie...not having to wait 2 weeks would be nice too. LOL J/J take as long as you need to make the NEXT chapter PERFECT!.....
Author's Response: Sorry lol I wasn't going to end it that way, but then the chapter would've been longer and I wouldn't have finished it because we had a bad storm last night and we were without power for most of the night. Thought it would be better to build the anticipation a lil lol. Alyssa definitely has motive to possibly go a little further with Nick because of Sean being an asshole. I will defnitely try to get out the next chapter as quickly as I can. I'm going out to the movies tonight to finally see Sex in the City, so it'll have to be later in the week :(
Date: 06/09/08 07:01 am Title: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation
hey at least she didnt throw something at the screen when she got angry. lol. chocogasm. very nice. cant wait for more. i say goo alyssa!
Author's Response: That's a good point Mary lol. Glad you liked the chocogasm part! I'll try to get more out soon.
