Date: 05/24/08 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 29 - You May Now Kiss the Bridesmaid
amazing chapter. i so cant wait for more. i loved how nick just let it all out to alyssa maybe she will change her mind.
Author's Response: Maybe although I think it might take a while for her to get used to the idea. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/24/08 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 29 - You May Now Kiss the Bridesmaid
Aww I loved how Nick finally put his feelings out there. Not one hundred per cent annoyed with Alyssa about rejecting him though. After all what did he really expect after all the crap he has put her through over the years.
I know she loves Sean but I think deep down she loves Nick more. I'm intrigued about your banner with the stairway on it. Stairway to heaven maybe? Is she going to even get the chance to come clean to sean?
I'm so in love with this story! It's awesome. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I'm REALLY glad you are seeing Alyssa's side too because I feel lately readers are hating on her again. I think it would be incredibly unrealistic for them to just run off together. It would be nice, but they need to go through more together. Alyssa needs to SEE that Nick loves her. I agree that she prolly has deeper feelings for Nick, but don't expect her to be as ready to admit to them as in UMS.
And about the stairway I'm SOOO glad you noticed. Of course there is a reason for them being there. The stairs will play a part later on in the story. I love your prediction though. You'll just have to see if you're right or not.
Date: 05/24/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 29 - You May Now Kiss the Bridesmaid
WOW. OMG more soon!!!!!
Date: 05/24/08 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 29 - You May Now Kiss the Bridesmaid
The garter landing on Nick's bottle was absolutely hilarious! I really felt bad for he and Alyssa though, when he was confessing his feelings to her. You can tell that they've both really grown up and matured a lot. As you said, it's pretty ironic that the tables have turned now. I hope that things work out for them, because they really do care for each other even after all the drama that has surrounded their relationship. That has got to mean something, right? Great chapter, Mel :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it Steph! And I'm glad that you think they've grown up and matured since I know not everyone feels that way. The tables have turned now and it'll be interesting to see when or if Alyssa comes around. Thanks!
Date: 05/21/08 07:45 am Title: Chapter 28 - Going to the Chapel
another awsome chapter cant wait for the next one. sooooooooooooooo good.
Date: 05/20/08 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Girls Behaving Badly
Hey..... loooooooved that chapter and how Teri and Tricia reacted!
Can't wait to see what happens at the wedding....
And I'm kinda sad that I was right from the beginning with Nick being a whiny baby who couldn't stay on his own!
Author's Response: Yea I feel like Teri and Tricia handled it really great. I thought it was awesome how instead of being like WHAT? Are you crazy? Teri asked her how it was. LOL I love how you add in that whiny baby part about Nick.
Date: 05/19/08 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Going to the Chapel
Oh god, you so have to update soon, don't leave us hanging. I love this update, can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I will try to get another one out soon!
Date: 05/19/08 06:53 pm Title: Prologue - Never Again
really I am gonna want to kick her ass??? I can't wait. Maybe after I read it I will dream about doing just that! I love getting wrapped up in the Characters like they are real...it is so much FUN!!! LOL can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: LOL Ok then I guess I'll take that as a compliment. Don't want to give anything away but I think you might be disapointed in her next chapter.
Date: 05/19/08 07:15 am Title: Chapter 28 - Going to the Chapel
awe! more soon!
Date: 05/19/08 04:58 am Title: Chapter 28 - Going to the Chapel
Loved it can't wait for more.
Date: 05/19/08 04:26 am Title: Chapter 28 - Going to the Chapel
I have been waiting like forever to find out what happened to katie.....looks like we are gonna find out soon. I think this is the first chapter in a while that I haven't felt like slapping Aylssa upside the head.....can't wait for part two of the wedding......hope it is SOON!!!
Author's Response: Yea the Katie mystery shall get resolved I promise! Aww let's not threaten any violence on Alyssa. She's pregnant! LOl Something tells me that you're going to want to kick her ass next chapter *hides*
Date: 05/19/08 12:22 am Title: Chapter 28 - Going to the Chapel
wow..alyssa's a whore lmao. nice!
There's so many elements to this story, it must be hard to keep track of everything but its cool how each chapter intertwines yet its almost like there's 2 or 3 different stories being told just to get to one final ending. you keep things interesting thats for sure lol nice update!
Author's Response:
Oh God... Sometimes I'm pulling my hair out for deciding on a story this complex. It sure is a bitch, but I'm trying to see it through. I've contemplated writing a prequel to UMS which would be everything in like their previous relationship from like 2000 -2002, but I'm not sure because it would almost feel like going backwards. I like both of them a lot better now lol. Anyway I do try to intertwine stuff as much as possible so I'm glad that you appreciate the complexity.
And oh ya lol Alyssa is SO going to hell. Not only is she thinking about sex in a church, but hello? She's having her ex b/f's baby while her husband is over in Iraq? I'd say that pretty much condems her LOl
Date: 05/18/08 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Going to the Chapel
that was an interesting memory. blah. they are so frustrating! good update! let the drama unfold courtesy of teri.
Author's Response: Yes let's all thank Teri for the drama hehe... I know the flashback seemed a lil out of left field but everything will fit together in the end like a puzzle. I promise.
Date: 05/18/08 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Going to the Chapel
yay i finally caught up! great job with this chapter. update soon!
Date: 05/18/08 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Girls Behaving Badly
wow that chapter was just wow. it was way better than i expected and i really enjoyed it
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying this story Anita. It's so nice to have my tough critics come around in the end. It means a lot!