Date: 05/12/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Girls Behaving Badly
Hey Mel! =)
Great chpter as always! ;) I think it's good that she told someone else because even though it might complicate things for her, it makes them easier, too. Everyone needs someone to talk to and now she has two friends who can be there for her! But I like that they don't seem too fond of Alyssas idea either.
I can't wait to find out what happens on the wedding. A drunk Nick would be awesome! lol Or drama! ;) Even though I want them to get back together in the end! I am a hopeless romatic and I am routing for a happy end! =)
Can't wait for more but I try to be patient! =)
Author's Response: I agree. Alyssa does need some friends she can talk to about her situation. It is interesting though that although they don't necessarily agree with her desicion they will still support her. If only everyone could be that way huh? I dunno if a drunk Nick will be at the wedding, but drama will be lol. You can keep routing for a happy ending though. There's at least twenty more chapters left and a sequel just to give you some perspective.
Date: 05/12/08 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Girls Behaving Badly
Please, just think of a way to keep Shayla out of their way at the wedding.... The have to face each other again, without witches on the way...
Anyway... Alyssa couldn't keep all that weight on her shoulders. She was soooo brave telling them about her night with Nick. I don't know if I would have done that.
But I'm pretty sure I would have run back to Nick in a glimpse! Even more so as he was so willing and mature about having a baby with her! C'mon girl! Nick has to get in action... hihihi
You're an amazing writer, but you already know that!
Author's Response: I think it can be arranged to give them some private time minus Shayla lol I'm so glad that you can sympathize a bit w/ Alyssa. It was GOOD that she could confide in Teri and Tricia. She needs someone on her side. But remember Alyssa doesn't KNOW Nick wants the baby. He hasn't told her this yet. Thanks for the review Monica!
Date: 05/12/08 11:18 am Title: Prologue - Never Again
Can't wait for this wedding haha ..it's gonna be some drama!
Author's Response: Yea it definitely will be
Date: 05/12/08 10:18 am Title: Chapter 27 - Girls Behaving Badly
Ohh more people know now, that's never very good!Slip of the tongue and all! And add in a wedding, alcohol, Nick being pissed I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yea the next chapter is going to be a lil crazy. It's definitely most probably going to be a longer one so please be patient.
Date: 05/12/08 07:18 am Title: Chapter 27 - Girls Behaving Badly
ARGH! i just want to smack her upside the head a couple of times! lol. agh. i just feel bad for the situation. that baby is going to come out super blonde and nick like i bet. does sean have blonde hair? okay. calm down mary. : ) i love teri and tric!
Author's Response: Oh no... the violent threats against Alyssa are starting again lol. Lol No Sean isn't blonde, but Alyssa's mother is. You'll have to see what happens. There's still quite a bit until the baby arrives anyway.
Date: 05/12/08 06:21 am Title: Chapter 20 - Table For One
awesome chapter even if it was a filler well i gtg to bed but ill finish tomorrow!
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews Anita! Hope you get caught up soon!
Date: 05/12/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 19- The Power of Goodbye (Real Version)
wow great job with this nicks publisist sucks ass though
Date: 05/12/08 06:02 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Power of Goodbye
wow ok i was gonna say a three some might have been hot but right after sean got shipped off would be harsh
Date: 05/12/08 05:50 am Title: Chapter 18 - Reality Sets In
oh wow what a chapter poor alyssa and poor sean
Date: 05/12/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 17 - Downpour
that was very awesome i loved the chapter so very sexy but its kinda a sin that i was reading this as my parents were saying the rosary in the next room
Author's Response: LMAO!!! Very sinful LOL I approve lol j/k. Thanks Anita!
Date: 05/12/08 05:35 am Title: Chapter 27 - Girls Behaving Badly
Loved it can't wait for more.
Date: 05/12/08 05:23 am Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
oooohhh excellent job but if nicks getting a divorse, how does he cheat? hhhmm maybe he forgives his wife? guess ill have to wait and see
Author's Response: He's still techincally married...
Date: 05/12/08 05:04 am Title: Chapter 15 - Joy and Pain
wow oh wow i can not believe all of this but um great job with the chapter well written and lets see what happens with the testing!
Date: 05/12/08 04:48 am Title: Author's Note/ Disclaimer
so seeing alyssa pg in the pic maybe she gets pregnant when she cheats with nick....after all maybe she isnt getting pg because shes thinking about it so much and i've heard that that can affect getting pregnant. Anyway I was one of those people who almost didn't read this second story after UMS ended the way it did but I told you i'd try and thats what I am doing
Author's Response: Thank you Anita for your honesty! I really appreciate that you gave this one a chance and I hope that you won't be disapointed. I've worked really hard to fix a lot of mistakes that I made with UMS. About how she gets pregnant... You'll just have to wait and see.
Date: 05/12/08 04:44 am Title: Chapter 14 - Wine Me, Dine Me, 69 Me
ooooohhh she took my advise fast lol mmm kissing nick sounds fab! great chapter
Author's Response: She listens well lol. Yes I'd kill to have Nick kiss me like that too lol
