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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/07/08 12:59 pm Title: Prologue - Never Again

Oh no he want to come home ...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/07/08 05:48 am Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

Loved it can't wait for more.

Reviewer: angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/08 04:07 am Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

Oh my goodness, what's going to happen?! I don't even know what to say, great update!

Author's Response: You'll just have to keep reading...

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/08 01:29 am Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

*bangs head against computer table* Stupid Nick, Stupid Drunk Nick, Stupid Drunk Poor Nick!!! LOL I swear I had to read the part with Nick and Alyssa on the boat through my fingers, wondering how it was gonna play out!

It's gonna go down hill from here, even if it may seem stable nothing can hold onto the edge for long before it all comes crashing down!!!

I'm also wondering if Sean finds out about being sterile before Alyssa tells him and he keeps quiet etc if he comes back before she has the baby!

Awesome update Mel....hope to see another update soon!



Author's Response: Well yea... You know the truth is going to surface sooner or later although it might be later than sooner. Like you definitely have a good ten more chapters at least. Interesting about Sean finding out he's sterile on his own... He might be back in town for the lil Carter's arrival though...

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

wow, i really didn't think alyssa would do that, but at the same time i knew she wasn't going to leave sean for nick just like that. and the whole thing with nick running back to shayla cause he feels sorry for himself is a very interesting twists. you make me curious. :) good update, can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Curious is good lol. You know I never like to make things dull. I'm happy to hear that you're intrigued and not wanting to like smite me LOL

Reviewer: TantilsinTeaser Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

It's all going to come out in the end and it is going to be sooooooooo messy!!

Author's Response: Yea its going to be, but it sounds like you're looking foward to it I hope lol.

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

why did he have to call shayla, hope he doesn't do something stupid. I wish he would of just opened up to alyssa and told her the truth. please update soon.

Author's Response: There's a time and place for the truth. It'll come out soon enough. Thanks for reading Kim!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

Oh no! This is really breaking my heart. I felt like crying with Nick! Why couldn't he just tell Alyssa that the only woman who he ever considered to have children with was her! It could make a world of difference!

And why did he had to call Shayla?? I really hate him for doing that! Damn I got the feeling of helping them by shouting to both Nick and Alyssa... LoL. Then I realized it is a story... Whahahahaha

Update soon!

Author's Response: I think Nick admitting that just might have made the situation even harder on Alyssa actually.  It would just make her feel even more conflicted inside. And he called Shayla because he's a guy and is looking for some comfort *rolls eyes* lol 'm glad you're so into the story though Heidi. Yelling at characters is a good thing lol

Reviewer: Alexfrack Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

*shocked face* wow, you know i was sort of expecting that to happen, i mean, alyssa's decision but reading it was really shocking, and poor Nick, he's so hurt, I was about to cry here, and he can't give up on that child and how cruel of alyssa to ask him to be the godfather, i think that's even more painful than not being in the kid's life; and now he's going back to shayla, not what i wanted, lol, but like you said it's a long story and there'll be twists and turns ahead, we'll just have to wait to see what'll happen. This is for me one of the best fanfics i've read, keep up with the awesome work Mel and update asap :D



Author's Response: Thanks for being understanding! You're right there will be LOTS of twists and turns and highs and lows. I know Alyssa's desicion is highly controversial, but I love these kind of things. Nick is devestated which is half the reason he's crawling back to Shayle. You'll just have to see what happens next. I'm so honored though that you consider this one of your favorite stories of all time though!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

NO NO NO!!! This is so not what I wanted to happen!!! Update soon! GRRR.

Author's Response: I don't think it was what a lot of people wanted to happen, but keep reading. I promise that in time the truth will prevail.

Reviewer: Ally Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

WOW i love it...cant wait for the next chaptersss

Author's Response: Thanks Ally! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll try to update again soon.

Reviewer: Notsku Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

Nooooooo!!!!!!:D. That can't happen!!:D That was sad.. Alyssa can't do that!! Nick can't agree to that!!:D. LOL:D. I'm in a shock:D............ I don't know what to say:D. He can't go back to Shayla!!!:D
But anyway.. Great update:D.

Author's Response: LOL Well I'll take that as a compliment because when readers start yelling at characters I know that they are REALLY into the story. I know its not exactly what you wanted to hear, but I think the pay off might be better in the end.

Reviewer: Sweetyfranzi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

Oh yeah... I hate you!!!
Just kidding but you are right - I am really disappointed... I know Nick is insecure but I didn't think he would give up just like that. It's his child after all... I don't think he will be able to just be his/her godfather. But did he have to run back to Shayla??? Like for real? This sucks... Pretty, pretty please update soon! You had me crying here for a moment and I want something to smile about again!

Btw - great chapter and well written! ;)

Author's Response: Aww I'm so sorry sweetie lol I know it is disapointing, but like I said things happen for a reason. I think that Nick kind of feels a lil trapped because if he fights Alyssa on this they'd be pretty much done. We'll see what happens though. As for him running back to Shayla i can just totally see Nick being the type of guy who can't live without a woman, even if its a woman that treats him like crap.

Reviewer: Iz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

Ok...Mel you can't write chapters like that anymore (j/k) I look like a fool trying to hold back my tears in the office!

It was soooooooooooooo hearbreaking, I just feel like giving Nick a big hug...

I just hope Nick won't do anything stupid (it's bad enough that he is entering a love less relationship just because he can't be by himself, let's pray Shayla doesn't end up being pregnant as well!!!!)

I understand where Alyssa is coming from, but truth is the best policy.... Asking Nick to keep it a secret and asking him to be godfather is slightly cruel...

Can't wait to read more

Author's Response:

Haha Oops sorry about that! LOL God it must have been sad for you want to hug Nick j/k. Don't worry I think that it would be way too messy if Shayla got pregnant on top of all this.

And don't worry... The truth eventually will come out in the end.

Reviewer: csmbabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

Wow.....I mean just wow I wasn't expecting that. I mean I kind of had a feeling that she would ask him to do that but then I kind of didn't lol. Now his going back home gosh.....like I said wow. Can't wait for more please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Yea it definitely changes everything, but don't count them out just yet.*winks*