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Reviewer: sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 11:47 am Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

Omg. Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 08:08 am Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

omg!!!!!  more soon!

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 05:50 am Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

argh. okay. i hate alyssa now. i understand her but did she really have to tell him and then rip it away from him? She wasnt thinking about what was best for everyone, just her. blah. great chapter. cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Aww... I really tried to make it as sympathetic as possible, but the whole situation just sucks. Yea... It was kind of shitty for her to do to Nick, but on the other hand would it be better for her to not tell him? Like I said things happen for a reason, but thank you for being honest and I'm glad that you're still reading.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/08 04:59 am Title: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh my god. he cant go home and he cant give up his rights to his child. that was so good i so cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: * hides* Sorry! Just think of the long term drama this is going to cause.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/08 10:46 am Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

update soon please.

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Great......I hate it when there is a cliffhanger!!! As horrible as I think cheating is.....I find myself rooting for Nick and Alyssa to finally find happiness with one another...I hope the end of this on is happier than the first one....

Author's Response: Its okay lol That's kind of the point... To look at the grey areas of cheating. I think everyone is rooting for Nick and Alyssa, but unfortunately this time its circumstance that keeps them apart instead of each other.

Reviewer: marvinemm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 06:15 am Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

I want more girl and can you please let me know when you update because I have been so busy lately with my own story along with school and always being on the fan club

Author's Response: If you added the story to your favs you SHOULD get e-mails but I know that doesn't always happen. If you give me your e-mail or im name I can let you know myself though.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Oh oh! I really hope this is going to work out..... Some how I believe Nick will think it over and realise that he really wants this baby, especcialy with Alyssa! On the other hand..... I don't know gotte hang in here to find out. Oh by the way, if Nick wants the baby, Alyssa really has someone to lean on. That will be good for her in an ironic way....

Good Job! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Nick might realize that he wants it, but the question is does Alyssa want that kind of relationship with him? All I can say is that you'll see a complete 180 in Nick and Alyssa from UMS until now.

Reviewer: Notsku Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Oh my god! That was.. wow:D. I think it was the right thing to do to tell Nick it was his. It wouldn't be fair otherwise to anyone.. Sean is going to be pretty hurt..And Shayla.. I just love this story:D. All the drama:D.

Author's Response: Yea Sean and Shayla are going to wind up getting hurt in the long run, but the question is how soon? Thanks Notsku! I'm glad that you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: Iz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Ok... this whole chapter I went from wanting to smack Nick (he sounded like an arrogant asshole for most of it) to wanting to smack Alyssa (she was really mean!) I spent the whole time with my mouth open, like watching a really fast pace, really ackward tennis match.... At the end, I am still unsure if I don't want to smack them both anyways!

Another great chapter and I can't wait to see how Nick is going to react and what will happen between them !

Author's Response: But arrogant Nick is actually kinda hot in a twisted kind of way *blushes* And yea Alyssa said some pretty fucked up things, but they were in retaliation to what Nick said. LOL I suppose it was like a tennis match though. They're so evenly matched they played off each other great (LOL Too bad they can't have make up sex. It would've been HOT lol j/k) You'll have to wait and see for Nick's reaction.

Reviewer: Iz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

How can you get me to care for Nick one minute (baby blanket anyone??? awwwww) and the next I want to smack him ((he's so going to try to get back with Shayla, that idiot!!!) lol... I guess that just how good of a writer you are !

Reviewer: angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 04:38 am Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

great update! Now let's see Nick's softer side awe :)

Author's Response: I promise you'll be getting to see a MUCH softer side of Nick in the near future.

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

OMG!  More soon!

Author's Response: I'll try! Thanks!

Reviewer: Alexfrack Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 01:09 am Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

OMFG!!! I was literally biting my fingernails while I was reading, and more when I got to the part when she tells him!!! This was really good and thanks so much for the quick update. Nick's world got turned upside-down, it wasn't a very nice way to find out he's gonna be a daddy but at least now he knows, wow, this was a really good chappie and I'm dying to know how things will turn out! Hope you surprise us with another update very very soon. Great job Mel! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The characters kind of came alive and took over the scene especially Nick LOL. I'd love to update quickly, but I think my students are going to be keeping me VERY busy!

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/08 12:57 am Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

*looks up at shit covered fan* Oh ohhh!

I wasn't expecting her to tell him....though I can understand it....being pregnant is very emotional, very mind warping....thank god for something good at the end :D

Awesome chapter Mel....can't wait for more



Author's Response: LOL Yea... If you thought Alyssa was an emotional person before now factor in the pregnancy and yea... It explains a lot lol.As her pregnancy progresses her mood swings will be very entertaining I promise. I'll try for more as soon as I can.