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Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

oh snap. she's pregnant with his kid and totally in love with him and he bails? oh nickolas.. what are we going to do with you? I think he'll come around though. He wants this, but only with her. Looks like the battle to get her back has begun.

Author's Response:

LOl That's Nick for you! Don't worry though, he'll be back. He just needs to wait for the initial shock to wear off.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

OMG I love your story... I can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! That meand a lot!

Reviewer: True_Beauty Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Oh my gosh that was amazing. I loved it. I'm so happy she told him but that was a crazy way to tell him. I wonder how Sean is doing. Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Yea it was pretty crazy... Turned out a lil crazier than I orginally planned, but that's okay. And oops forgot the Sean update again. Grr...

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Omg what a brilliant chapter... love it, i wonder what nick's going to do, i hope he doesnt run too far. Love the regular update. Great work ;0)

Author's Response: I don't think he'll go too far. He'll be back! Thanks a lot Lisa!

Reviewer: ally Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

OMG i am so on the edge of my seat i need more hahaha my kids are at language and i had a second to check this out....

Author's Response: LOL Glad you're entertained. It may be a while for another update though because MY kids are taking up a lot of time. I just got a leave replacement and let's just say they're definitely trying to test me.

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Is really awful that I'm starting to take Sean's side in all of this? I mean, I really feel bad for Nick as well since of course he just found out Aylssa is pregnant with his child... but yeesh. Poor Sean is on the other side of the world, fighting for the country as Alyssa said and yet she's having a baby with another guy. Like, I know he was kind of a douche before he left, but still. It's probably just my personal situation that's making me feel this way but yeah. I really feel bad for Sean. Either way, it was a really good chapter Mel :) I was so surprised to see an update this morning, you've really been on a roll lately, woot! Keep it up girlie!

Author's Response:

I can completely understand your personal connection to this Steph and its perfectly all right to feel bad for Sean. At least someone does. LOl I feel bad for Sean. Unfortunately, I have to show all sides and in a situation like this SOMEONE is going to get hurt and there's no way around it.

I think my roll is just about over though. I gotta focus on school big time.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

omg that was so good. so glad that he found out so cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks! It IS a relief now that he knows.

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

WOWZA...great chapter. This is not how I expected him to find out, but I LOVE it. Drama, drama, drama! Can't wait for more.

You updating so often is making me lose focus on my own writing lol!!! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Aww... I'm very sorry about that! LOl Well, I should be slowing down a bit because I'm back at school this week starting my leave replacement and lets just say if today was any indicator of how its going to be, it's going to be a VERY rough rest of the year. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Monica Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Oh my God!!!!!!!!!!!! And Alyssa thought she could have kept it from him. She pratically blurted it out the first time she saw him... good job in keep it as a secret! And he ran away... not very nice, but i still think that he will be coming back to her pretty soon. after all we're talking about Alyssa here, the only girl he ever wanted children with!

I never ask for more, but... please update as soon as you can!!!! You're doing an excellent job! 



Author's Response: Well after that fight and all that emotion and the kiss I don't think it was that surprising that she dropped the act and just came clean. And yea I think Nick just needs to wrap his mind around the situation first. I'd like to udate again soon, but I can't promise anything.

Reviewer: csmbabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Oh my god that was a great chapter I wasn't expecting her to actually tell him in this one. I mean kind of but not really you know. Well all I can say is I love the updates and can't wait for more to come hopefully sometime this week.

Author's Response:

Yea I just didn't want to draw it out too much. I wanted hm to know before she makes her desicion so its not SO bad. I'll try to get more out but it may not be until the weekend.

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

WOW great chapter x really happy that she told him he does has i the right but very not happy running away like that hope he goes back to see her x the next step is to tell Sean and that not gonna be good but really good story

Author's Response: I think Nick just needed his space. Don't worry lol I won't let this go unresolved. Things will be sorted out soon. Telling Sean isn't going to be easy, especially since he's so far away right now, so it should be interesting to see what Alyssa decides to do.

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

i am so glad she told him. i know its going to be a really hard situation but im glad she took the high road even though i dont think she really planned on him knowing. i dont care what else happens so long as he knows. ok fine i do care.

great update!

Author's Response: I think Nick would've found out eventually. She really couldn't hide from him forever. Haha you sure you REALLY don't care what else happens? j/k Thanks a lot Mary!

Reviewer: Sweetyfranzi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Oh wow. I didn't expect Nick to find out so soon but I am glad he did find out! =) Even though I must say he is such a coward. I understand him somehow but I thought he would react a little bit different and not by running away. I hope you can squeeze out another chapter soon! I am really hooked to your story and enjoy reading it everytime! =)

Author's Response: I really didn't want to drag it out for TOO long. I think poor Alyssa would've had a breakdown lol. I know him running away is disapointing, but he can't be all perfect can he?(I was afraid I was making him TOO good to be true these past few chapters) Don't worry... He just needs to do some heavy thinking and sort things out. It's a lot to take in at once poor guy lol.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

Oh.. My.. God. Just omg. amazing chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I know that the last few chapters have been a lil slow, so it was really nice getting back into some drama.

Reviewer: TantilisinTeaser Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 12:06 pm Title: Prologue - Never Again

Wow. 3 updates in one week, you are really spoiling us! Great chapter although I must say i am a bit disapointed with Nick, I thought he would have handeled it better, but then again he did just find out that he is going to be a daddy with someone else's wife.

The shit is going to hit the fan now though because I can't see Nick wanting to keep the paternity quiet, after all you have been planting that the onyl person he would want a child with would be Alyssa.

Author's Response: Ha LOL I know, but don't get TOO used to it. The fact that I had off this past week and these last few chapters have been short because they're pretty much all just one scenes might have had something to do with. I think Nick was just REALLY shocked and after that heavy fight with Alyssa he just needed some time alone to process it all. And yes... I'd say the shit might just hit the fan...