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Reviewer: angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 04:54 am Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

Oh my gosh, I can't wait to see what happenes next! Update girl :)

 



Author's Response: I just finished my next chapter and I'll update tomorrow. All i can say is its going to be INTENSE!

Reviewer: angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 04:45 am Title: Chapter 23 - Denial Is Not Just a River

I feel bad for Sean and maybe Shayla, except she messed up so I don't really like her right now but I want Nick and Alyssa to be together, that's true love.

Reviewer: angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 04:37 am Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation

I knew it! Lol :)

Reviewer: angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 04:32 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All

I have a funny feeling the baby is really Nick's..... Love the story anyway :)

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 01:27 am Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

I think what made me percieve it that way is how he was so confused by alyssa not telling him she was pregnant then completely avoiding him. Maybe he doesn't necessarily know that the baby is his, but he knows SOMETHING isn't right about the situation. So maybe when he finds out, the actual news will be a surprise, but not the fact that there was something more going on the whole time? Does that make sense lol

Author's Response: Oh yea absolutely. I mean he IS beginning to suspect that she's hiding SOMETHING from him. The fact that he's the father of her baby? Now that'll be a shocker for him.

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/08 12:55 am Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

Can't wait to see what happens next, hopefully nick will find out really soon. update soon.

Author's Response:

Oh I think he will. Thanks! I'll try.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

it almost seems like nick knows.. he just doesnt realize he knows. Does that make sense? Subconscience I guess. I feel some serious drama brewing.. cant wait!

Author's Response: Really? I was definitely debating him kind of considering the idea for a moment, but decided not to because I want to catch him off guard when he does find out. Interesting way of looking at it but I can definitely see that. And yes... Major drama is a coming!

Reviewer: True_Beauty Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

Loved it. She needs to tell Nick about the baby soon.  I wonder how Sean is overseas. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: That's what I forgot to include! A quick lil mention of Sean. I'm going to have to remember to do that next chapter. And don't worry... I have a feeling the truth will come out sooner than later.

Reviewer: Tantilisinteaser Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

Ohhh I can't wait for more. I am actually surprised that Nick hasn't thought about how strange it is that she got pregnant when she did. Boy is obviously not as smart as he looks!

Author's Response: Yea I was kinda on the fence about whether or not to make him think twice, but I REALLY want it to catch him off guard when he DOES find out. But that was definitely something I discussed with my betas. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

YAY for the update...Shayla is annoying. I can't wait for things to get more compliacted, update soon!

Author's Response: LOL Yea... I put the drunken booty call in for a bit of comic relief, but she'll get crazier as the story goes on I promise. And trust me things will DEFINITELY get more complicated.

Reviewer: Alexfrack Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

Wow, has it been three months already since he moved to the condo? time flies. It was a good chappie, not much going on, how nice of Nick to give the blanket to Alyssa, he's making it so hard for her now but I'm dying to know what will happen when Alyssa tells him the truth and I think it's gonna be pretty soon 'cause Nick's gonna get tired with Alyssa avoiding him and will want some answers. Hope you don't take too long with the next one but I guess we have no choice but to be patient and wait :D

Author's Response: It's actually been a little less. Nick moved in, in June and it's now mid - Aug already in the story. I've kinda been flying through time lately with this story. The next chapter will take us to the beginning of Sept. Nick is definitely unknowingly making it hard on Alyssa and I think you're right. Nick is going to want to know what's going on PRETTY soon...

Reviewer: csmbabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

I know I've not lefted any reviews for awhile but just to let you know the past couple of chapters were great and I can't wait for more to come. I would hate to be in Alyssa's shoes with the whole baby thing but heck it's Nick Carters baby lol. Hope to read more soon!!!

Author's Response: It's okay. I know its a crazy time of year for people, so stop in when you can. Yea it's a pretty tough situation for her. We'll have to see what she decides to do!

Reviewer: Sweetyfranzi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

Thanks for the quick update! You sweetend my day with it! hehe
I really can't wait for Nick to find out. I hope it happens soon! I just wanna know it all! ;)
Take your time if it means we are getting another awesome chapter! =)

Author's Response: Oh don't we all LOL. I'll try to get another one out as soon as I can.

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

you keep making nick any sweeter and i will hate alyssa even more when she keeps this from him lol. im glad he turned shayla away. even if he doesnt end up with alyssa he doesnt belong with shayla. garhg.

Author's Response: Haha Maybe I do need to make Nick a lil more assholeish. I don;t want you all thinking he's perfect now lol j/k. Thanks for the review Mary. Try not to hate me too much!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/08 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

oOOOO........OMG want more! that's just a freaking teaser!  lol  I bet Lyss is gonna tell Nick the truth sooner or later....hopefully Sean doesn't get hurt too much!

Author's Response: Yea LOl Sorry about that. It's the calm before the storm so to speak. I'll try to squeeze out another update soon, but I can't promise anything right away.