Date: 04/25/08 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
* Jumps of the couch * lol, hehehe.
Anyways, wow! What a suprise! I haven't thought about Sean being sterile for a while, and you threw it back in this chappie! Loved it! It's cool that it's Nick's but I don't know.... Something really tells me there is more to it... Maybe Nick is the one who will be enthousiastic about the kid, cause it can bring him closer to Alyssa (what he wanted) But then there is Alyssa and she has to tell Sean.... AND he is in Iraq. She really is in deep mess. I hope she can see it as some kind of destiny...
Ohhh how romantic does that sound... lol destiny....
Anyways, keep up the good work! Can't wait for more. It's something I can long for everyday... hehehe
Author's Response: Thanks Heidi! You know me. I lke to throw out hints early on and I always come back to connect the dots. Alyssa REALLY is in a sticky situation here. No matter what she does she's in trouble, so it'll be interesting to see how she decides to handle this situation.
Date: 04/25/08 01:04 am Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
Tell him or IŽll kill you Alyssaaaaaaaa
hehe update ssoooon
Author's Response: Lol Threatenng my characters now? I'll take it as a compliment hehe. Well, if she tells him but not RIGHT away can she still live?
Date: 04/24/08 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
OMG I had a feeling that it was Nick's Baby but that was a amazing chapter. Can't wait to find out what is going to happen when the truth comes out that Sean is not the father. Great update and I loved it.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Natalie! You'll have to keep reading, but trust me it's going to be good!
Date: 04/24/08 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
hehe so love that nick will be the father. hehe i know its kind of bad since she cheated on sean with nick but i still love it. such a great job, so cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Yea it is totally wrong but I guess since you know both Alyssa and Nick you feel more compelled to root for them. Question is will this make things better or worse between them?
Date: 04/24/08 12:52 pm Title: Prologue - Never Again
We all knew that was coming haha
Keep up the good work!
Date: 04/24/08 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
Great chapter kind of knew that it was Nick but I still think it's good lol. Can't wait for another chapter please update as soon as you can please.
Author's Response: Yea I think it was kind of obvious. Hopefully there will still be a few twists up ahead that are unexpected though. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/24/08 02:39 am Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
oh my... getting exciting. I cannot wait until she tells Nick. And then when Sean finds out.... OH My. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Nick won't find out right away. (Alyssa needs to formulate a plan first) but everything will come to surface sooner or later. Lol I know that you weren't really surprised though because you called this a while back, right?
Date: 04/24/08 02:21 am Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
oh man. i knew when i read the title of the chapter what was coming. i wouldnt even know what to do at that point. she could be truly effed up and pass it off as seans but im sure he would end up looking just like nick. that would be really hard. cant wait for more. and i meant great when i said its getting bad. haha.
Author's Response: Yea I guess it was a pretty obvious chapter title. It REALLY is a very effed up situation Alyssa is in, one that no matter what she does she's screwed. I think she'll try and find the option that is safest for everyone involved even though it might not be the most moral desicion in the world. Glad you're enjoying it Mary!
Date: 04/24/08 12:37 am Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
I knew it!!! the baby is Nick's, it's great that it is now confirmed, but on the other hand, poor Alyssa, how is she gonna tell Sean? I think she'll do it eventually, but not at the moment. Wow, and I wonder what Nick's reaction gonna be when he finds out, a huge shocker. Damn cliffies, this is getting better and better, ah!!! I hope you don't take that long to update girl. It was a very short chappie but def great. Great job :D
Author's Response: Yea telling Sean that its not his baby after all is going to be REALLY hard for Alyssa especially since Sean probably wants a child more than Alyssa does. As for Nick's reaction it also should be interesting because he really doesn't want kids, yet he's said he wouldn't mind them with Alyssa, so his reaction might surprise you, but you'll have to wait a few chapters for that. I'll try to update again as soon as I can.
Date: 04/24/08 12:33 am Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
Wow I didn't see that coming, you so have to update, can't wait to see if she tells nick. great story so far.
Author's Response: I will try to update soon, but I go back to school on Mon :( You'll just have to see what she decides to do about Nick. Thanks Kim!
Date: 04/23/08 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
hahahhahahahahahahahahahah
thats all i have to say.
Author's Response: I hope that's a good laugh LOL All I can say is things are going to get VERY interesting.
Date: 04/23/08 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
I knew it! I knew it!!!!!
Author's Response: You must have been one of those who were peeking at my outline lol j/k! Some readers I just can't pull anything over on them. Thanks for popping in with the review!
Date: 04/23/08 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
Oooooh shit! That is really really not good. So Nick's the father, eh? Oh man, I can sense the impending drama and I am loving it! Great job Mel!
Author's Response: Yepp... Nick's the daddy. And yes this of course shall lead to SOOOO much drama. Thanks Steph!
Author's Response: Yepp... Nick's the daddy. And yes this of course shall lead to SOOOO much drama. Thanks Steph!
Date: 04/23/08 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
OMG!!!!!! Poor Sean! Poor Alyssa! Knowing nick's the baby daddy, but hell, Sean being sterile! How's she gonna explain that when/if he would want another child?
Author's Response: Yea, I think most readers expected Nick to be the father, but I'm not sure many suspected that Sean actually couldn't have kids. It is definitely going to be rough for Alyssa to break the news to Sean especially when he's so excited about her being pregnant. You'll have to wait and see how Alyssa handles the situation.
Date: 04/23/08 10:57 pm Title: Prologue - Never Again
I so wanna see Nick's reaction! Man... he didn't even want to have a child with his wife and now... man... big drama on the way! If I was Alyssa I would call Nick right away. So they can talk this out... he's besotted with her... why can't she see it? True Love is on the wayyyyyyy!!!! (yeah... right after the drama...)
Author's Response:
Yea it definitely will be interesting to see how Nick takes it when he does find out. I agree Alyssa SHOULD come clean with him... But since when does Alyssa do the right thing? Lol Thanks Monica!
