Date: 04/23/08 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
I knew it!!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Update SOON!
Author's Response: I'll try my hardest! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/23/08 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
Wow Nick has to so be the father then. That was a great chapter can't wait for more. I loved it.
Author's Response: Yea lol Out of process of elimination I'd say he's the one! Now it's all about how Alyssa decides to handle it.
Date: 04/23/08 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation
*Makes a happy dance* YEAH - that's what I wanted to read! hehe It's Nick's baby after all! =) I wonder how he will react when she tells him, if she tells him anytime soon. Now I really can't wait to read more! You did an awesome job, awesome writer! I am looking forward to the next chap! =)
Author's Response: LOL Yea I know I made a lot of people very happy with that turn of events. It'll definitely be interesting to see how it all plays out and the next few chapters will deal with how she chooses to handle her predicament so stay tuned Franzi!
Date: 04/23/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
Well worth the wait! But who is the baby daddy? LOL! I personally think it is shaun but I think there will be some confusion as she slept with them close together!!
Author's Response: Ooh one vote for Sean! That's different since everyone says its Nick. And don't worry... The confusion is coming!
Date: 04/22/08 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
Totally loved the update!!!
This migh be not a good thought or comment but.... I soooo hope it isn't Sean's! I'm a little afraid it will be, but I sooo hope it's not..... I will be so dissapointent... hehehehe (I have a feeling with Nick and Alyssa and hope it will be okay)
But, we have to see!
Thnx for the update and I'm looking forward to see another one!
Author's Response: Lol When you said that this might not be a good comment I kind of panicked for a second there. You'll find out more about the baby's daddy next chapter.
Date: 04/22/08 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
so good, really loved it. but now she is going to find out that the baby is going to be nicks not seans and i think nick would want the baby because it was with alyssa and noy shayla. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: We'll have to see about that... Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/22/08 05:58 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
Oh no....I have a feeling Alyssa is gonna get a shock on how far along she is when she see's the doctor....won't she? *bites fingernails*
Shayla should do heaps more begging for forgiveness if she wants Nick.....that was low.....bitch LOL
awesome update....hope to see another soon :D
Author's Response: You'll just have to see... As far as Shayla though she will definitely be doing some more groveling lol
Date: 04/22/08 03:25 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
Ahh...I was waiting to hear what the news from the doctor is...I know you will get there but I have a theory!!!
Great story, can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: I think I may have an idea what your theory is and if I'm right just wait until next chapter lol Thanks for the revew!
Date: 04/22/08 01:48 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
Nice one! and somehow i have the very strong feeling that alyssa's baby is not sean's. This is gonna get interesting, tho it's a shame that the updates will be very seldom, this is starting to get really good. Take care :D
Author's Response: I know! And I apologize lol Honestly if I could write more I definitely would but life has to intefere. I will try to get enough out to at least clear up the baby confusion soon.
Date: 04/22/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
i think it's interesting that alyssa seems to have completely forgotten about sleeping with nick. When she was talking to kim, right around "Sean and I have had so much trouble conceiving that I seriously doubt that something magical happened right before he left," would have been the moment, for me at least, that I went, "...ooooo fuck." lol So shes obviously blatently ignoring it or right now she's so excited that she's forgetting to consider it, and since she isn't realizing that little complication, I'm curious to see what will tip her off.
good luck updating again lol
Author's Response: I see it more as Alyssa is trying to act as if it never happened to herself, so she's kind of repressing it and forcing herself to block it out of her mind. Is it the most healthiest approach? Definitely not and it will come to bite her in the ass. I think it's also like you said she's excited and knows how much this means to Sean, so she's kind of assuming that it HAS to be his. Right now she doesn't want to consider the alternative. wait to next chapter though...
Date: 04/22/08 12:01 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
She finally got pregnant!!!! I am so happy for her. It will be hard, though, with sean away from her. Pregnancy can be a wonderful experience, but it can get a little difficult without anyone by your side. I soooo wanna see Nick's reaction to the news. He's gonna be shocked, but I think he will be the first one to think about the possibility that it maybe his. afterall, wasn't alyssa the onlygirl he ever wanted children with? Plus, he seems to be falling hard for her all over again... Let's wait and see... good job.
Author's Response: That's definitely true Monica, but Alyssa has a lot of people around to help her out (including Nick) I think Nick would be genuinely happy for her, but as for as him wondering if its his... Well, You'll have to keep reading. Thanks Monica!
Date: 04/21/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
That is soo nick's baby!!! Aye aye this is going to get bad
Author's Response: I hope you mean bad in a good way lol Thanks for the review Mary!
Date: 04/21/08 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
ooooh!! can't wait for more!!! :D
Date: 04/21/08 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
Oooh, so he's talking to Shayla again. That's interesting. I'm glad that Sean got online to chat with Alyssa on her birthday. Very sweet and cute :) I wonder how nick's going to react when he finds out that Alyssa's pregnant.. that should be interesting. Well, I'm sure he'll just be happy for her, but hearing the timeline of it all I wonder if he'll think (or she'll think) that it may not be Sean's child. Oooh the impending drama! Loved it Mel! I was so happy to see an update so soon :)
Author's Response: Yea I wanted to throw Shayla back in the mix again a bit because she's not gone yet. As far as whether or not it's Nick's or Sean's child you'll have to stay tuned. Thanks Steph!
Date: 04/21/08 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All
Oh my gosh I can't wait for more. I so think that its not Sean's baby and its Nick's. I so want Nick to get with Alyssa.
Author's Response: We'll have to see about that... Only time will tell...
Author's Response: We'll have to see about that... Only time will tell...
