Date: 04/05/08 08:04 am Title: Chapter 20 - Table For One
that was soooooo good i cant wait for more. i really liked it but cant wait for drama
Author's Response: Well, the next chapter or two some more drama should be starting so stay tuned!
Date: 04/05/08 06:23 am Title: Chapter 20 - Table For One
Loved it can't wait for more.
Date: 04/05/08 03:59 am Title: Chapter 20 - Table For One
Well yeah there was no drama here but it was a good chappie, i did like it, well, more from the half through the end, because now they've finally talked to each other. So i wanna read the next chappie, i'm sure it'll be very good as always. Don't take too long to update :D
Author's Response: I was SOOOO dreading their conversation too. It turned out okay, but I think I was dreading writing it more than Alyssa LOL. I'll try not to take too long to update.
Date: 04/05/08 03:28 am Title: Chapter 20 - Table For One
Oh that was a good chapter and I think it was really nice of Nick for wanting to cheer her up and everything. I think it showed alot of how much here changed and also the part about not trying anything with her he actually kept his word on this one. I hope he can show Alyssa just how much his changed even though it'll just make things worse with her and Sean, but you can't help who your hearts telling you to love right. Can't wait for another update girl!!!
Author's Response: Yea this chapter was a side of Nick that was a lot different from Nick in UMS. Right now Alyssa is kind of swinging back and forth between the two of them. We'll have to see who she winds up with although she'll be swinging for a while.
Date: 04/05/08 03:26 am Title: Chapter 20 - Table For One
oooh....can't wait for more!
Date: 04/04/08 10:02 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Power of Goodbye
Haha I loved it thought it was very entertaining!|
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing it hehe Just because it was so out there!
Date: 04/03/08 02:04 am Title: Chapter 19- The Power of Goodbye (Real Version)
Okay, so I already told you my thoughts kind of on AIM, but I'll post them here too, cause everyone loves reviews! How lame is Nick's publicist for making him stay with Shayla? Grr, that sucks! Oh well, I'm not complaining much, because it'll be cause for more drama - which I love! I really feel awful for Alyssa, it sucks that Sean left so suddenly. Damn military and their whole "let's do this RIGHT NOW" attitude, argh. Of course, this will give her more freedom to goof around with Nick... which should also cause more drama. Ah drama, drama, drama! This story is full of it and I adore it! Keep up the good work Mel!
Author's Response: Thanks Steph. I know you can relate a lot to the whole military thing right now so it had to hit pretty close to home for you. But yes its all the sake of upcoming drama LOL
Date: 04/03/08 01:00 am Title: Chapter 19- The Power of Goodbye (Real Version)
glad to know your pc problems are solved!
keep on writing i love it
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad they are too! I was ready to go crazy! I'm working on my next chapter now.
Date: 04/02/08 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 19- The Power of Goodbye (Real Version)
Nice chappie! I wished I could say something for the next chapter, but really, I have no clue! It can go every direction! You are keeping me hanging here! Good Job!
Update soon!
Author's Response: Yea this was sort of one of those in between chapters, so I suppose it would be hard to comment much on. Thanks for leaving the review anyway though!
Date: 04/02/08 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 19- The Power of Goodbye (Real Version)
loved the reall chapter. if i was nick i so would not have listen to her it is his life. cant wait for more soooooooooooo good.
Author's Response: Yea it is, but I don't necessarily see it as him giving in just yet. He's just thinking things over a lil more carefully. We'll have to see what he decides to do. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/02/08 04:50 am Title: Chapter 19- The Power of Goodbye (Real Version)
loved it can't wait for more.
Date: 04/02/08 02:43 am Title: Chapter 19- The Power of Goodbye (Real Version)
Ok that sucks that Nick can't get divorced because he would affect other ppl as well as his image but i guess that comes with fame huh, not that i'm up for divorce but sometimes there's no other option, i hope he makes the best choice. And then we have Alyssa, in a weird way better off without Sean around for the moment. I hope you update soon, this was a very good chappie girl :D
Author's Response: Yea they're both in VERY interesting positions right now. I'm just setting up for the next shoe to drop
Date: 04/02/08 02:36 am Title: Chapter 19- The Power of Goodbye (Real Version)
interesting.. and i have no jokes for this one lol, sorryyy. but yea im curious to see what nick does and how shayla reacts, etc. i wasnt expecting that at all...
Author's Response: Yea unfortunately this was a pretty serious chapter. Had to throw a monkey wrench in there somewhere...
Date: 04/02/08 02:15 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Power of Goodbye
lol i was like yea that isnt real lmao. entertaining though!
Author's Response: I knew you'd see through it *glares* lol j/k. Glad you appreciated it at least.
Date: 04/02/08 02:14 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Power of Goodbye
Hahaha this was great!!! I was like "huh?!?!?!, wtf?" lol, and then i thought that there was sth wrong here but it sounded interesting, haha. It was very funny in a fucked up way like you said, I really enjoyed it, nice work! :D
Author's Response: Thanks lol It was an experience to write. You can check out the complete chapter now.
