Date: 03/16/08 03:34 am Title: Chapter 17 - Downpour
Hey Mel, i didn't want this chappie to end lol. It was really great, and what i can notice from UMS to this one is that there's a connection between them that wasn't there before, i mean deeper, now that they've both grown up and changed and i think they're so ready to get back together, lol. I really liked this chappie. And i'm sorry i'm not giving you a more insightful review but i'm still in shock and can't concentrate very much 'cause i saw the Boys live last night!!!! My very 1st concert!!! It was awesome, and plus, i got to go to the soundcheck!!! Great job, don't leave us hanging for too long :D
Author's Response: Aww lucky!!! I'm still waiting for dates here in the states, but soundchecks are incredible! I went to one on the NG tour and it was just amazing! But anyway onto the chapter... I'm so glad that you can see the connection between UMS and now and how different its become. I've spent s lot of time trying to work on showing that they are stronger now, so I'm glad readers are noticing. Ha lol You may not have wanted that chapter to end but by the end of that last sex scene I sure did! LOL It took a lot out of me. But it's okay because it'll be a while before anything else sexual comes up. Thanks for your review!
Date: 03/16/08 03:08 am Title: Chapter 17 - Downpour
oh my..... that chapter was full of emotion. Cannot wait for the next chapters.... (the morning and the dr visit....)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Even though it was half sex I REALLY tried to pour a lot of emotions between Nick and Alyssa. My next chapter shouldn't be too long so maybe I can update soon!
Date: 03/16/08 02:41 am Title: Chapter 17 - Downpour
Holy shit! can't wait to see the morning after lmao
Author's Response: Yea the fallout should be interesting. Thanks a lot!
Date: 03/16/08 01:56 am Title: Chapter 17 - Downpour
OH MY GOD....that was a really great chapter. Nick really has changed over the years. Alyssa is more comfortable with her body and herself all together. I think you did a great job on this one. I mean the whole freakin story is great but you had me on the edge on this one lol. I know Alyssa is prob. going to hate herself in the next chapter, but then again you did such a great job on this chapter I won't really know what to expect till you update again which I hope is really soon. Again great job keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you can see the changes in both Nick and Alyssa's personalities from UMS to now. I really tried to make Nick more considerate and genuinely concerned for Alyssa. As for Alyssa yes she is much more comfortable with her body and more confident in a lot of good ways. Her character has even been shocking ME at times LOl
Date: 03/16/08 01:27 am Title: Chapter 17 - Downpour
I absolutely loved that chapter!!!
They finally did it! Twice! I can't wait to read more.
You are an awesome writer, keep staying the way you are! I love your story and will be waiting for the next chap to come!
I hope she is pregnant with Nick's baby now... After all they have to end up together somewhere in the story... at least I hope so! ;)
Author's Response: Yepp they finally did! Now you all can stop bugging me lol j/k. Hmm... Pregnant w/ Nick's baby? We'll have to see about that, but if that is the case you won't know for a few chapters now anyway. Thanks Franzi!
Date: 03/14/08 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
AWESOME>>>i cant wait for moreee
Date: 03/14/08 03:48 am Title: Author's Note/ Disclaimer
I think its great that you're standing your ground. I'm happily married and would never cheat on my husband but that doesn't mean that I'm at all against reading about it. In order for fiction to be good (in my opinion) it has to have two important elements...it must be realistic and it must be interesting enough to entertain. ENTERTAIN. It's fiction, because you write it does not mean you condone it or will it to ever happen in reality. You have a great talent and I especially admire your conviction. Keep it up, girl !!!
Date: 03/12/08 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
im just guessing the next chapter is going to be.. um.. not PG13 lol.. and if it as, after his myspace video.. i just might die. not sure i can handle to much more R-rated nick lol
Author's Response:
LMAO OMG TOO freaky because my friend JUST showed me that video and then you left that review... VERY weird lol * gets a chill* Actually I only have one more scene of the next chapter to write and so far yea... I think it goes past the PG-13 line. I'm going to try to write some more tonight, but I'm actually a little disturbed by that video LOL
Date: 03/12/08 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
You so have to update soon, can't wait to see what happens with nick and alyssa. love this story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm up to the last scene right now, but its pretty critical so I really want to make sure i get it right. Hopefully I can update soon.
Date: 03/10/08 12:28 am Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
Great chapter! =) I am glad that Nick finally sees what a bitch his wife is and I am happy he is leaving her behind. Noone deserves a relationship like that.
And I love how Nick ran into Alyssa half naked! hehe I can't wait to read more and I hope it's heading to where I think it is! =) Update soon!
Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you appreciated all the tension I tried to built up. I think I know where you want this to head and I'm working on it. I think I'm halfway through the chapter, but the second half will be the hardest part.
Date: 03/09/08 08:03 am Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
OH.....MY.....GOD!!!!
So many amazing chapters I've missed out on....such a great afternoon catching up on them all though :D
This story is turning out superbly Mel...I'm loving every minute reading it!
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks Moppy! I'm SOOO glad to hear from you again. I know you've been MIA for a while, so its REALLY nice to hear from you. I'm glad that you are enjoying this.
Date: 03/09/08 06:56 am Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
OMG Mel, what an awesome chapter! Im so glad Nick was going to step up to the plate and take care of his baby with Shayls, too bad there wasnt one...I knew she was lying, she just wanted to trap Nick and as Nick pointed hurt Alyssa along the way. Then when Sean and Alyssa are having this connection...BAM Sean has to go on and ruin it by bringing up a pregnancy...bad idea especially because I beleive one of the reasons they cant get pregnant is because they're stressing about it. I cant wait to see the results to those tests too because I have a feeling that Sean might be the one that cant get Alyssa pregnant..I will have to wait and see...NOW getting to the good part, they finally ended up at the condo together! I have a feeling that something may happen especially since Nick is separating from Shayla...plus he is so turned from seeing Alyssa wet and getting naked...lol! God such a good cliff. Mel, you're evil, lol! Update soon, I will be waiting to see if they finally hook-up or at least make a serious connection!
Author's Response: Thanks SOOO much Thia! I really think that it was a huge step for Nick to come around on the baby issue and do the right thing, so finding out that Shayla was only playing him this whole time was REALLY a slap in the face to him. Interesting insight on why Alyssa and Sean can't seem to get pregnant... As for the whole Nick and Alyssa situation, I'm sorry lol I couldn't resist the cliffy! We'll have to see what if anything happens, but Alyssa's fight with Sean earlier had to have left her a little "frustrated" if you know what I mean *winks*
Date: 03/09/08 04:42 am Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
OMG!!! great great chappie. When i started to read and it all seemed like Alyssa was pregnant i was like hmmm, maybe but then i remembered the name of the chapter and i was like "oh, nevermind, not happening" (and i thik it won't happen 'cause she'll end up with Nick so a baby would be an obstacle) but i didnt imagine (well maybe kinda did) that the title was for Shayla too, damn, that bitch, lol, but i'm so glad Nick is divorcing her. Then there was that part where things got tense between Sean and Alyssa and i knew she was gonna end up going to the condo and she was gonna run into him. Damn cliffhangers, hope you update soon! :D Great job :D
Author's Response:
Yea it was a false alarm on TWO counts... I'm glad that you loved the chapter and Im sorry I couldn't resist the cliffy. I'm working on my next chapter right now.
Date: 03/09/08 03:17 am Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
Oh my gosh I loved it. So can't wait for more. Can't believe Shayla lied about being pregnant. Great story so far.
Author's Response: Yepp... It's unbelievable how far she'd go to keep her man. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 03/09/08 02:29 am Title: Chapter 16 - False Alarm
I think I'm in love with this chapter but I really think I'll be in love with the next chapter lol!
This story is becoming addicting. I really hope you updated soon or my imagination is gonna run wild on me lol
bring on the affair!! FINALLY!! lol :p
Author's Response: Yea lol Knowing you, you prolly will be more in love with the next chapter lol I'll try to get to it as soon as possible.
