Date: 02/20/08 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
I hope she's really in love with Nick and not just making them up to hide from her difficulties with Sean. I think her and Nick should get back together and maybe Shayla and Sean should hook up. lol. Can't wait for more. Loved it.
Author's Response: Shayla and Sean? LOL That would be an interesting couple, but honestly I don't think that Shayla and Sean have much in common outside of Nick and Alyssa. I guess we'll just have to see what happens between Nick and Alyssa in the next few chapters...
Date: 02/20/08 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
Alyssa still has feelings for Nick hehe do not blame her though he so hot x Sean it so lucky that it was just a dream that he killed Nick lol x Alyssa Nick still likes u hehe x update soon pls
Author's Response: Thanks for the review as always. Now the question becomes what will Alyssa do about it? I'm working on the next chapter now and would kind of like to update tonight, but we'll see about that.
Date: 02/20/08 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
OOOOOOH more soon!
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter as we speak! Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/20/08 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
Oh I loved the Maroon Five bit, it fit perfectly! I canno wait to see where you go with this story. I'm in two minds about whether I want Alyssa and Nick to end up together because I have grown quite attached to Shaun!
Author's Response: That's perfectly all right lol. I know you're a new reader, but my older readers will tell you that I always like to make things complicated and make my readers feel torn. Alyssa is in a VERY complicated position indeed and its not gong to get any easier any time soon. I'm glad though that Sean has his lil fan base though.
Date: 02/20/08 10:31 am Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
Can't wait to read where this is going..... Please update soon!
Date: 02/20/08 10:01 am Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
i saw the title and i was like sweeeeeet. i love maroon 5. one of my favorite cds of the year. sweet visual. steamy. good use of the song. cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. It's a hot video and just over the top enough where its like OMG I NEED to use this lol. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 02/20/08 07:28 am Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
Love the dream... plus all the confessions to the girls about who is better, totally scandalous! But can we really blame Alyssa for having those naughty dreams about Nicky, not really when he is completely SEXY!!! Oh and I do not think it is possible for Nick to be bad, lol! I totally agree with Tricia that Alyssa has feelings for Nick and that if it's really what she wants she should go after it! Haha if Alyssa only knew that Shayla wasn't getting any from Nick... it's still so funny to me! Great job Mel and can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Thanks Thia! I haven't really had a good "girl talk" chapter yet in this story, so yea... this was it. LOL Poor Nick... I hope he never runs into any of you girls cuz I think he has A LOT to live up to LOL j/k. We'll have to see about what Alyssa decides to do about these newfound feelings. There is still Sean...
Date: 02/20/08 07:14 am Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
lol is it possible to be bad? i mean.. it was nick.. carter... lol im definitely going to sleep now.
Date: 02/20/08 07:09 am Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
oooooo that was definitely scandalicious lol
since we're sharing secrets, a few weeks ago, i actually for real had a sex dream about nick lol. WHY did i have to wake up?!?!?!? grrr yay for honesty!!
awesome chapter. can't wait to see where it goes...
Author's Response: Well thanks for sharing LOL I hope it was a good one! Thanks for the review as always!
Date: 02/20/08 06:57 am Title: Chapter 12 - Wake Up Call
Oooh and the plot thickens! I loved the dream sequence, very dramatic. Alyssa should totally sleep with Nick, I'd be all for that lol. Great job Mel! :)
Author's Response: Haha! I'm sure that you along with most of my other readers wouldn't have a problem with that lol. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter Saka. Things should be moving forward with the two of them in the next couple of chapters.
Date: 02/12/08 05:05 am Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
I cant believe Shayla went through the pictures ! Oh I just gotta see when and how she is gonna bring them up. Oh and if Sean finds them what is he gonna think !?! This was such a great chapter Mel, i cant wait to see how everything goes next.
Author's Response: You're actually the first one to consider Sean's reaction to the pictures. I haven't decided yet if or when Sean finds out about them. I was going to have it happen right away, but he and Alyssa have bigger problems with trying to have a child right now. So we'll just have to see!
Date: 02/11/08 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
Another awesome chapter! Obviously, NIck and Alyssa are getting closer and closer to doing something *wrong*.... Can't wait to read more about this and about what Shayla will do with her knowledge of the pictures!
Author's Response: Yepp... I smell cheating going on lol The big question is when?
Date: 02/11/08 06:27 am Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
The trading of the pictures and their meeting in general was good, maybe a bit akward, but good.I love how Nick and Alyssa were actually able to dicuss the pictures, it's another thing that shows that they've both matured! I agree with Nick, it's not bad if Alyssa doesn't get pregnant if Sean is sent to Iraq, it would be a lot of responsibility if he didn't come back! Haha... so typical of Nick to lose the schedule and then foolishly ask Shayla to email it from his laptop, where he has the pictures of Alyssa saved! Aww... that was sneaky but sweet of Nick to scan the pictures of Alyssa, it shows that there is still something, but I think we already knew that! Shayla is acting pretty sneaky herself, pretending that she didn't see the pictures until the "knowledge of the pictures become useful", hopefully it doesn't hurt Alyssa's image(she's a teacher!)Enjoy your week of Mel and as always great job, can't wait to see how the info of those pictures turn up again!
Author's Response: Thanks Thia! I'm glad you can appreciate how much more open Alyssa and Nick are with each other this time around. They have both matured a great deal. And of course Nick is right about Alyssa not needing to rush to get pregnant, but Alyssa has gotten so obsessed with the idea of being a mother that it not happening is stressing her out big time and eating away at her relationship with Sean as you'll start to see next chapter. I guess it is a lil dishonest for Nick to keep some of the pictures on his laptop, but it seems like such a guy thing to do and Nick does still have some feelings for her. We'll have to wait and see how long Shayla can hold out on those pictures, but good point at it possibly hurting Alyssa's career.
Date: 02/11/08 04:15 am Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
Yeah an update, awesome so far. Can't wait fof nick and alyssa hook up soon. I think shayla is up to something with the pictures. update soon.
Author's Response: I'm sure we all can't wait... It's coming up ahead though. I promise. And I'm sure Shayla will discover some way to use those pictures when its conveinent for her.
Date: 02/11/08 02:36 am Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
Great chpater can't wait to see what else happens with the pictures and Nick and Alyssa. Keep up the good work!!!!
