Date: 02/11/08 01:27 am Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
I don't like the sound of that. I so can't wait for more. Loved it.
Date: 02/11/08 01:09 am Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
omg omg omg awesome job with the chapter girl great update wonder whats gonna hapen with nicks wife
Author's Response: We shall see... Next chapter primarily focuses on Alyssa and the girls though. So you'll have to wait a bit. Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/11/08 12:51 am Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
uh-oh! Sounds like trouble's brewing ahead! more soon!
Date: 02/10/08 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
Oh my, a new chappie, great! This was nice, lol, it sure was awkward for Nick and Alyssa with the pics, and everything was going to be great after he gave her the pics, but no, he caved into temptation and kept them, lol, and then Shayla finds them, i saw this coming somehow ha. Now let's see what's gonna happen now and when she'll tell him about seeing the pics. Good job, and i hope that now that you'll have more time, there are more updates :D
Author's Response: LOl Well its Nick... Come on... Can we REALLY count on him to do the smart thing? lol I'm hoping that more time will mean more updates too because I want to get this story on the road a bit more. There's a lot coming up ahead!
Date: 02/10/08 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
oh boy she seen the pictures x lovin it, it is getting really good now
Author's Response: Glad that you're enjoying it!
Date: 02/10/08 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
haaa i totally saw that coming from the second he couldnt find that schedule. lol nick can't do anything right. poor guy!!
it must be sooo awkward for nick and alyssa to sit there and talk about their past sex life like its no big thing lol i can't wait for them to hook up lmaoo!! great chapter!
Author's Response: I know you can't wait lol It's coming I swear! And in the next chapter I'm even going to give you a little something to tide you over *winks* About Nick and Alyssa being able to discuss their past sex life so openly I do think its awkward, but hopefully it also shows that they're a lot more comfortable around each other, especially Alyssa. I have a few conversations planned between them that they'd probably never have while dating, but now that they're older they find it easier to discuss. Thanks for the review as always!
Date: 02/10/08 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Curiosity Killed the Cat
I so knew that Shayla was going to find them!!! OHHHH know I need to know what she is going to do about it! I am loving where you are going, keep up the good work! Oh and enjoy your week off!!
Author's Response: Yea its only fun when someone finds them, but just warning you it might be a while before she brings them up. She's just filing them away into her head until the time is convienent for her to bring them up. Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/08/08 01:55 am Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
such a great job cant wait for more.
Date: 02/06/08 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
Oh thouse sorts of photos!! You just know that this is going to cause soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo many problems down the road. I have one of two theories, 1) Shayla finds them and flips out 2) they somehow get published maybe because of theory one!!
Loving the story, and cannot wait for the rendevous to occur!!! I know its going to be good!
Author's Response: Yes Lol THOSE kind of photos lol I was surprised that not too many people picked up on that theory. And of course those photos are only fun if they like destroy someone's life lol Not saying that's going to happen, but we shall see...
Date: 02/06/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
Another great chapter.... I wasn't quite far off the mark !
Can't wait to read more !
Date: 02/06/08 07:43 am Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
LOL, Nick actually being celibate, totally unbelivable, but I understand why...Shayla seemed totally suspicious with the comments she has made about accidentally getting preggers. That seemed totally funny to me how Nick turned to A.J for advice, but it does seem that besides Nick, A.J would probably have a lot experience with awkward situations as well. It looks like Nick is starting to think a lot about Alyssa... maybe these pics will bring them "closer"... Awesome job Mel with the chapter and can't wait to see what Nick decides to do about the pictures!
Author's Response: Ha I know its hard to believe that Nick is voluntarily giving up sex, but yea under the circumstances he is a little wary of Shayla right now. I'm so glad you liked the Nick/AJ scene because I had a lot of fun writing it. I've never really written a "guy talk" scene, so it was actually pretty entertaining. AJ just seemed like the perfect person for Nick to go to for advice about the pictures. Next chapter you'll find out if the pictures bring Nick and Alyssa closer.
Date: 02/06/08 02:46 am Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
I cant believe he still had the pictures ! He should talk to Alyssa and see what she says about what to do with them. But hopefully Shayla doesnt find them before Nick decides to do anything. That was such a great update Mel !
Author's Response: Thanks Patricia! I thought that it would be totally like Nick to tuck them away someplace and forget he really had them until now. We'll have to wait and see what happens. I'd love to update really soon, but right now between school and work I'm pretty booked for the next week :(
Date: 02/06/08 02:07 am Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
Great chapter can't wait til I see what else happens between Nick and Alyssa by the way the pictures were funny because it still showed Nick still likes Alyssa and thinks about times they shared together alone.
Author's Response: Thanks hun! And of course Nick still has those kind of feelings for Alyssa and I'm sure that in his current situation with Shayla he's thinking about those times more and more. It also prolly doesn't help that he hasn't been getting any lol (That was HIS desicion though lol)
Date: 02/04/08 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
DUDE! I SO figured it out like right as nick agreed to clean his office. I don't know why, but it just popped into my head what pictures we were talking about lol.. I guess I just had to get back into UMS mode for it to click lol. Very scandalous chapter lol. Im just gonna guess that while nick was at the studio shayla went through his stuff and found the pictures which would cause some really good drama!! and if not, im sure whatever you have planned will be just as dramatic. either way, i cant wait!!
great chapter!!
Author's Response: Yea lol Everyone seemed to forget about that very subtle mention of those pictures in the epilogue of UMS. Seriously did you think I'd just mention something like that for the hell of it? lol It takes time but things always tie themselves up eventually. And I know that you're just happy I gave you a lil SOMETHING sexual right? lol Even though it was a flashback. We'll see about your prediction...
Date: 02/04/08 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
Loved it can't wait for more.
