Date: 02/04/08 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
So COOL!! Don't know what to say! I guess Nick and Alyssa have some unfinished bussiness to intend too..... Wonder how that's going to work out!
Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Yea I guess so... Next chapter should be interesting!
Date: 02/04/08 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
Great update so far, can't wait for more. wow would shayla be that deceitful and get pregnant. that would really be bad, hope the pictures bring nick and alyssa back together.
Author's Response: Well I dunno of the pictures alone will do the trick, but it'll definitely help stir up those conflicted feeings that Alyssa has been fighting. And about Shayla getting pregnant... We shall see. The next few chapters should start to get really exciting if I can find them to write them :(
Date: 02/04/08 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
Hey there, well guess what, i had forgotten to add this story to my faves and i kinda forgot about it, oops :P, and like 2 days ago i came across with it, so now i'm back to read and leave my reviews.
The story is great so far, very very interesting, i have to say i was pretty shocked at the very begining with Nick getting married, i was like "wow, he's really moved on". The story has developed really well til now, great job, i'm really enjoying reading it.
Now, about this chapter, poor Nick, now he's not able to trust Shayla that much because of her comment on "accidentaly forgetting to take the pills", let's see how that'll affect their relationship. The dilemma with the pics. i don't think it should be that much of a big deal to tell Alyssa about them and ask her what to do with them. It'd be awkward, sure, but i don't think it'll turn out that bad right? And i guess it's not such a good idea for him to keep a couple of them, if Shayla finds them...not pretty, lol
Great job, hope you update soon
Author's Response: Ooh I was wondering what happened to you! You're like one of my most faithful readers so it did scare me a bit not to see you around. Well, I'm glad that you finally caught up and that you are enjoying the story so far. I know the beginning was shocking, but I really wanted to do something unexpected, but as you can see marriage isn't working out so great for Nick. We'll have to see what Nick decides to do about the pictures, but we all know he sometimes doesn't make the smartest desicions in the world. Thanks for the review and its good to have you back. *hugs*
Date: 02/04/08 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
oh big load of trouble are coming cant wait x update soon pls
Date: 02/04/08 06:02 am Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
Whoot! can't wait for more!
Date: 02/04/08 05:33 am Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
oooohh very interesting chapter wanna see where this goes. great job and ill look for the next update
Author's Response: Well you'll find out next chapter. Originally the chapter was supposed to be a lot shorter but then I decided to write the flashback so I have to split it up between two chapters. I'll try to update by next week, but we'll see.
Date: 02/04/08 05:23 am Title: Chapter 10 - Spring Cleaning
oooooh scandalous maybe sharing those pictures with her will make them start becoming more intimate again. great job with the flashback felt like forever since an update
Author's Response: I know it did feel like forever even though it was only exactly a week. I really wish I could update more often because its making the story drag not being able to update much. Thanks for the review! We'll have to see about how the pictures impact Nick and Alyssa's relationship, but it probably couldn't hurt.
Date: 02/04/08 05:17 am Title: Chapter 9 - Coming Clean
ooohhh great chapter sorry i missed it but wow im glad that alyssa and sean made up and what pictures are they talking about here at the end hhmm?
Author's Response:
Read the next chapter I just posted and you'll find out...
Date: 02/03/08 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Coming Clean
please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm going to try to update tonight. I have one more scene to finish up after work. I have only like 2 hours to do it and post because a friend is coming over at 9, so it's not defenite. Otherwise I prolly won't be able to physically update until prolly Wed :(
Date: 02/01/08 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Coming Clean
please update soon.
Date: 01/31/08 02:48 am Title: Chapter 9 - Coming Clean
lol if they're of a naked Nick... THEY BETTER BE REAL!!!! hahah
Author's Response: LOL Sorry to disapoint there, but that's a negative... I still think you'll enjoy the next chapter though.
Date: 01/30/08 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Coming Clean
Ooooooooooh im LOVING your fic Mel!!!
Cant wait to read the next chapter hun!
Author's Response: Yay! Your FINALLY caught up Lisa! *huggles* Well, I'm glad you like the direction that it is moving in and I hope that you continue reading it although I know how busy you are. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/30/08 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Coming Clean
more pictures huh? very interesting lol. it's kinda fun watching these marriages crumble like this lol. that's so warped but.. eh, it's fiction lol.
good update!
Author's Response: LOL Yea its a bit sadistic, but I get where you're coming from. It's like watching a train wreck. And yea there's more pictures but I think you'll enjoy these ones *winks*
Date: 01/29/08 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Coming Clean
Wow! Please don't leave us hanging to long!It's getting interresting!
Author's Response: I'll try not to although school just dumped a whole load of crap on me this week blech
Date: 01/29/08 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Coming Clean
great job. really well done i so cant wait fore more sooooooooooo good.
