Date: 12/26/07 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
Can't wait to see what happens on their lunch, sean is gonna be really ticked off. please update really soon.
Date: 12/22/07 07:44 am Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
I havent had to time to review about the last couple of chapters but I'm so loving where the fic is heading...I'm so excited to see how lunch goes with Nick and Alyssa, they need to realize that there is too much attraction/history between them to just be friends...And it's going to get better when Sean finds out about this "lunch date", I'm dying for his reaction especially since Alyssa mentioned that their marriage is a little strained since they can't get pregnant!... drama, drama, drama, gotta love it!... Awesome job, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks Thia! I completely understand about not reviewing because its such a crazy time of year right now. And of course when Sean finds out she spent the afternoon with Nick he's not going to be too happy as you'll find out in the next chapter. Thnks for the review!
Date: 12/22/07 03:00 am Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
wow awesome chapter. the song fit very well. i am growing a little bit more on this story and i am curious to see what you plan on doing with it. keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks Anita! It's definitely going to go into some interesting places, but unfortunately I still hsve to set the stage a lil bit, but I'm VERY excited for when it REALLY takes off. Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 12/21/07 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
Great chapter can't wait for more please update real soon please!!!!!
Date: 12/21/07 07:57 am Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
Amazing chapter as always!!
I love your writting- Can't wait for the update =]
Susan Raelle
Date: 12/20/07 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
loved it. it was such a great job. cant wait for more.
Date: 12/20/07 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
Thank u x oh that song is so sweet that is so is Nick
Author's Response:
Glad that you agree... Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/20/07 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
That song is so fitting, its crazy when you stuble on songs like that for your story isn't it? Since I love using lyrics, I liked how you had it coming from Nick. Very cute chapter, very interested in seeing the next one. :) I mean c'mon, Nick and Alyssa...awkwardness but fun awkwardness lol.
Author's Response: Yes! I LOVE using lyrics too and that song has always reminded me so much of Nick, so I've been dying to use it in a fic somewhere. Thanks for the review Rose! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/20/07 03:24 am Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 12/20/07 03:10 am Title: Chapter 6 - Rise and Fall
sure. riight. I love how oblivious both Nick and Alyssa are in this story. I don't know if you did this on purpose or if it's because we all seem to "know" what's going to happen with Nick and Lyss, but I just feel like shaking them both and going, "HELLO! Do you really think the two of you could ever be friends?" LOL, honestly, marriage won't even stop them.
anyway, i have to confess to two things: 1. I started reading this without ever reading the last 10 chapters or so of UMS because you sort of summarized that in the beginning of this story. I feel kind of like I'm cheating LOL
2. I've been reading this and not reviewing, so, this big-ass review should make up for the not-reviewing, right?
Good luck on writing the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I think that the oblviousness of both characters is sort of on purpose because duh its not a question of will they its when and how. Otherwise why would I choose to write a sequel? lol But I love the fact that they're frustrating readers in a good way. Let's just say they're in the denial stage now.
LOl and thanks for the confessions. It's cool because i know UMS is REALLY long and I kind of wanted to start ALTOS where if you never read UMS you can still follow it because I don't want to discourage new readers. When you get a chance you can read the last few chapters if you're that interested, so I don't think you're a cheater. And lately I've been reading a lot and not reviewing myself so I guess I'm a bit of a hypocrite. Thanks for popping in every now and then and telling me your thoughts!
Date: 12/16/07 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Saving Grace
Absolutly loved the update. I'm so in this story. Just like 'under my skin'. I read the whole story in one week!! This is the same, I would love to read more and more! Love your story!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot Heidi! Thankfully this story so far is A LOT shorter than UMS so its a quicker read. I'm glad that you are enjoying. I'm working on the next chapter now and I guess I'm about halfway through.
Date: 12/15/07 02:12 am Title: Chapter 5 - Saving Grace
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Almost made me love Nick again.. Ok, if I wasn't crabby from getting my wisdowm teeth removed I'd probably be rooting for Sheila to be shipped to Europe to cover some kind of story and Sean to leave pretty soon so that Nick and Alyssa are able to be together...
Even the teeth couldn't make me hold back a smile when I saw you throw the American Girl doll in there! Next time I'm in NYC we're definitely checking the store!
Finally, all I have to say is... If I was three I'd probably have a crush on Baylee too...
Good chapter and can't wait to read more of it !
Author's Response:
LOL See last chapter you wanted to kill Nick and now he's on your good side again lol. Nick has that effect on people... Damn him lol LOl and of course I had to do the Anerican Girl doll. I REALLY always wanted one and I feel majorely gypped that I was never allowed to have one. I REALLY REALLY REALLY want to go to that store too. Whenever I'm in the city I always mean to go, but it doesn't work out.
Haha and about the Baylee thing... All I have to say is she's your daughter! LOL Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/14/07 06:07 am Title: Chapter 5 - Saving Grace
excellent chapter curious to see whats going to happen. great job with the chapter and i look forward to updates
Date: 12/13/07 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Saving Grace
I loved the update cant wait for more please update really soon please please please!!!!!
Date: 12/13/07 06:27 am Title: Chapter 4- Hey Jealously
hhhmmm interesting chapter sorry i missed it i guess im blind or something but ill read the other tomorrow
Author's Response: It's okay... I think a lot of people have missed it. Either that or people are just really busy at this time of year.
