Date: 03/26/08 01:16 am Title: Chapter 20
yes please do update asap
Date: 03/26/08 12:08 am Title: Chapter 20
oh what Nick did was wrong will she lied to Nick and her daughter for five years and stoping him form seein his daugther again that what got Nick mad the first place x she better stop thinking about herself x oh yea for Kevin h
Author's Response: Kevin rocks! His big Daddy who comes in and always saves the day, LOL! Maybe that's why he left he was tired of playing superhero! I know what you mean about Shannon, she is very frustrating and it is going to get worse as well.
Date: 03/25/08 03:45 pm Title: Prologue
lol..thats funny i always ahave been a person to speak my mind..lol but reallly this story is great its my fav one that i' readin right now..update soon!!!
Author's Response: Wow one of your fave's? That's great thank you so much
Date: 03/24/08 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 19
well he's only doin it bc she was being a bitch an not wantin to tell matilda that he's her dad..or did she forget that she said that..matilda has every right 2 konw..update sooon!!!
Author's Response: Haha I love it! Your the first person to come at me with that perspective, what more could she expect? She's kept the secret for years so he is retaliating maybe not in the best way but he is doing it do get back at her!
Date: 03/24/08 06:26 am Title: Chapter 19
Great story so far. Is sad to see that it's taking so long for the baby to wake up. Poor thing. Hope you update soon. Can't wait to read what's going to happen with the custody.
Author's Response: Well the past few chapters have really only been like two days real time so in theory it's not that long. But I do see where your coming from but she is a very sick child!rnrnKeep on reading
Date: 03/24/08 04:18 am Title: Chapter 19
Oye vey. Now they're both gonna be Bastards & fight over the poor kid. If his mtoher hadn't put shit in his head, all would be fine! *curses wildly*
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Matilda BETTER get better!!!!!
Author's Response: I knew Jane was going to be hated but I guess that's quite close to real life huh? I'm not sure all would have been fine though. I think sooner or later stuff about custody would have been bought up and because of the whole situation it was never going to be easy to sort out.
Date: 03/23/08 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 19
More of this ASAP, please! I need to read more like now. I'm like literally...it's incredible. I just caught up earlier and just please..post more..now? :D
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for that amazing review it means a lot. I'm glad your enjoying it and i am updating as fast as i can.
Date: 03/23/08 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 19
i think things are about to get really messy i can see it now, update soon
Author's Response: Your not the only one. It's already a bit messy anyway really isn't it? Trust me this is as messy as it's going to get either.
Date: 03/23/08 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
now why did nick have to go and do that? granted its understandable but man. thats going to suck.
Author's Response: Oh yeah it's going to suck big style
Date: 03/23/08 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 19
oh my he just doing it because he mad at her and he listen to his so called mum x hope one of the boys talk to him x
Author's Response: You may get your wish in the next chapter. I couldn't write a story like this without some Jane input could I and trust me she is going to play a big part in something later on down the line!
Date: 03/23/08 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 19
Omg what is he thinking, i hope he comes to his senses, great update :0)
Author's Response: He's very mad right now and who can blame him. People do irrational things when they get mad I am also hoping he comes to his senses!
Date: 03/23/08 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 19
that was so good, i so cant wait for more. i loved it.
Author's Response: Thanksrn
Date: 03/23/08 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oy Vey this sounds like my sister....PLEASE just let them talk!
Author's Response: They are both very angry and sleep deprived at the moment. I am hoping someone who is visiting can talk some sense into both of them so keep reading!
Date: 03/23/08 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
cant wait to see what happens
Author's Response: Trust me there is going to be lots more twists and turns with this story.
Date: 03/21/08 05:21 am Title: Chapter 18
i hope nicks not going to do somthing stupied, update soon