Date: 03/20/08 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 18
Omg whats he going to do, i so hope he doesnt listen to his mother, Cant wait for more ;0)
Date: 03/20/08 07:19 am Title: Chapter 18
another great job.... jane should have not come. cant wait for more
Date: 03/20/08 02:50 am Title: Chapter 18
damn it nick..what the hell.dont be like this giver some time..shit damn...ok..please dont make them all fight over this i want them to get together not fight for custody..shit..update!!!
Date: 03/20/08 01:27 am Title: Chapter 18
Update update update asap thanks
Date: 03/20/08 12:50 am Title: Chapter 18
oh the drama Jane is trouble she only thinks about Jane not Nick or any of her children would not surpise me if she know about Matilda anyway oh dear big trouble about the appointment with the attorney it is that Jane putting that in his head x I would love for them to get together b/c of couse it has to be alot of drama frast before that happens x update soon lovin it x
Date: 03/19/08 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 18
why cant they just work it out without attorneys? :(
Date: 03/19/08 09:04 pm Title: Prologue
He's making an appointment..
Great update
Date: 03/19/08 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
His mother?!?! UGH! I really don't like her, why does she have to cause MORE problems?? I swear it's like she wants to blab the story to the media...
Date: 03/19/08 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oye vey. I just knew his mother would cause problems!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 03/19/08 07:01 am Title: Chapter 17
This story is great. Is sad to see what happened to them, but is more sad to now that this kind of stuff happens to women all around the world daily. Hope you update soon. Take Care!
Author's Response: That's why I wanted to write something like this, because it does happen and people do turn a blind eye to it. It's always the kids that end up hurt in the end. Thanks so much for your review.
Date: 03/19/08 07:00 am Title: Chapter 17
that was soooooo good i cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 03/19/08 02:40 am Title: Chapter 17
oh my god!!!!!!! I hope tild's will be okay. I am so glad she is nicks. please update real soon I need to know what happens I could just kick ben in the head. great work
Author's Response: You'll find out if Tild's is going to be okay or not within the next few chapters I promise. Ben i svery hated
Date: 03/19/08 02:18 am Title: Chapter 17
ok..so wat did he hear..oh my freakin god ..udpate.and pl,ease dont take so much time this time..your killin me wit suspense...
Author's Response: That's the whole point I want to keep you in suspense!
Date: 03/19/08 12:56 am Title: Chapter 17
ok it isa a really great chapter please update asap
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/19/08 12:22 am Title: Chapter 17
wow great update Nick is right she should of told him
Author's Response: Yep she definetly should have but because she didn't it makes the story more interesting. Will they be able to get past this and rebuild their friendship?
