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Reviewer: Tantilisinteaser Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/08 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 16: Making Plans

Ohh Nick is telling her exactly what she wats to hear. Why do I feel like this is all going to come crashing down at any moment? It just seems to good to be true!

Author's Response:

True, true...I think he also means what he says but is trying to say it in a way that shows her they are on the same page.  As far as crashing down, I guess we will just have to wait and see what happens...much more to come.  Thanks for the review!!!  :o)

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/08 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 16: Making Plans

hmm. that was darling. that was my favorite column. i loved it. and i especially loved the quote. great job! this story always gets better. : )

Author's Response: Thanks, Mary!  I struggled so much with getting started on this chapter, specifically the column.  I started it once and trashed most of it because it came out too girl power.  I was happy with the rewrite and once I got going on this chapter, it just flew out of me.  I am so glad you are enjoying it...and that you like it more and more with each chapter...I hope I can continue to live up to your expectations!  More to come :o)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/08 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 16: Making Plans

awsome job. cant wait for more. i so love this story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review...so glad you like it!  More to come...

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/08 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 16: Making Plans

Loved this chapter! Nick is such a sweetheart. I like how he's taking such an interest in her life and her writings. It is definitely moving things forward, without being too obvious, you know? Her column really interested me. I really liked how she opened up a little and explained some of her apprehensions of getting into a relationship. Great job hun! Oh, I'm also mucho excited to read about New York, that should be good times. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks for all of your help with it, Steph!  You were definitely my sounding board for reorganizing my outline and getting going on this chapter.  I survived my first big case of writer's block, thanks in part to you!  More to come, friend!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/05/08 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 15: Head to Toe

Really need another update..this is a great story line can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/08 04:14 am Title: Chapter 15: Head to Toe

Sorry...had to have a COLD shower before leaving a review!!!!

Dammit dude, do you like have a Karma Sutra book and flick through it and randomly pick a new position for each time Nick and Quinn get together? LOL

Awesome chapter love it want more soon please!



Author's Response:

Ha!  I wish I could say it comes from Karma Sutra...it is just out of my little mind - maybe I should say it is from there, though :o)

So glad you liked it...more to come soon!!!

Reviewer: Tantilisinteaser Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/08 10:31 am Title: Chapter 15: Head to Toe

Nick is definetly in trouble here! He has fallen hard. I think Quinn is starting to let her gaurd down though, what with all the Mom talk and stuff.

I do think that when the time comes though that she isnt going to recipricate his feelings straight away. I mean if she did where is all the drama in that?

It's not a good Nick story uness he gets his heart trampled on first! LOL!

Author's Response:

Drama...one of the requirements when it comes to fan fiction lol...and there will be plenty of it...maybe not in the way that you think though :o) - stay tuned!!!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/08 07:34 am Title: Chapter 15: Head to Toe

This chapter was pretty hotttt, well everytime they get together is damn hot,lol. She's letting go a little more, not thinking about their situation too much, because she talked about her mom with him, she let her guard down, and that's good. They'r so perfect for one another is crazy. Please update soon, I can't wait,LOL.. Take Care!!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I think it is easier for her to forget when they are together...but she is thinking less about it when she is with him.  She likes to analyze everything so that causes problems for Nick.  She is definitely opening up to him...more to come!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/08 07:31 am Title: Chapter 15: Head to Toe

and the mom this was so sad... same thing happened with my mom, you wrote it perfectly.

Author's Response: Awww...I am so sorry to hear about your mom, I am glad that I wrote it in a way that somewhat accurately reflected what it is like.  I went through it with my grandmother.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/08 07:29 am Title: Chapter 15: Head to Toe

omg such an awsome chapter. i so loved it. hot beginning. i love that she is starting to open up to nick more and more every time. haha getting walked in on way to funny and just going back to what they were doing like nothing happened. cant wait for the next amazing chapter, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks!  I think they both knew that Riley wasn't stupid, and she had to know what is going on.  Remember, Quinn hasn't told her anything about it really, so now that they both know she has seen it with her own eyes it may open up that line of communication.  Court is in Dallas so she can't be on Quinn's ass about it all the time, maybe it is Riley's turn :o)...thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/08 07:09 am Title: Chapter 15: Head to Toe

i love the sound of her house! you did a good job describing her house and the pictures. I could definitely picture it all. very cute chapter. : )

Author's Response: Thank you!  I love bungalow style houses...they have so much character!  So glad that you could visualize it all...my goal was to shed some insight into Quinn's personality through her house, and I wanted to do it through Nick's eyes, since he was learning about her as he walked through her house.  Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/08 05:46 am Title: Chapter 15: Head to Toe

Whew, that was amazing! The beginning was hot hot hot! The thing with the necktie was clever. Nick's pet name for her is super cute :) And I really liked the fact that Quinn opened up to Nick a little, their is definitely some progress being made in their relationship. That's really sad about her mom though. Also, Riley walking in on them was really funny. I really loved this chapter, great job! *muah*

Author's Response: Thanks, girlie!  So glad you liked it...from what you are saying here, sounds like I hit on everything I was trying to do with this chapter!!!  Hugs!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/08 05:46 am Title: Chapter 14: Celebrity Skin

Oh and I forgot to mention that it was sooo sweet how Nick knew exactly how much time they had spent away from eachother, I mean, to the last minute and second. It shows that he's thinking about her all the time.. Awesome story, can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: I had to throw something a little sweet in...glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/08 05:14 am Title: Chapter 14: Celebrity Skin

Nicky got AJ's girl, Yeah right,lol... and they're going to her place? wow, that's a first. I thougth he was gonna ask her for something totally naughty, and what do you know, just to go to her place, he's totally in love with her.. Hope to read more soon. Take Care! 

Author's Response: He may still ask her for something totally naughty, afterall - he does still get a wish. I guess that really depends on what kind of mood I am in later when I start the next chapter. I was wondering if anyone would catch the whole going to her place thing...very strange that he hadn't been there before, especially after 6+ months. Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: moppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/08 12:36 am Title: Chapter 14: Celebrity Skin

Damn....anytime those two get together I need a cold shower LOL poor AJ....she definitely wasn't his type or he wasn't hers *snickers*

Great chapter once again, can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response: Ha...glad to know that I am helping keeping your water-heating bill (or whatever you want to call it) down! Yes, it is for sure that Quinn and AJ are not each other's type, which was part of the fun of writing it. My goal was to show Quinn's universal appeal. I mean, heck - if she was freaked by Nick's little baby tats imagine what she would do if she saw AJ's!! She may run and never come back! Thanks!