Date: 07/19/09 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
House party!! Aw yay that Kevin showed up. Also I had to laugh at Morgan's ramblings about her and Baylee dating and how silly it was. Too cute.
Author's Response: Did you bring balloons, for the party? Morgan is definitely adorable...one day her and Baylee are SURE to hook up.......or are they?!? HUM!
Date: 07/19/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter Fifty
I'm glad they had a good time at the dance, after all the drama that has been happening, they really need it! YAy for Baylee kissing Allison for the first time, but after that whole scene with the dress I am back to thinking he is crushing on Morgan again, even if he doesn't know it lol
Author's Response: The poor boy doesn't even realize his feelings, does he? Now he's with Allison?!? Oh my goodness...where could this lead? *grin* Thanks again, for all the reviews you've left, while catching up! I appreciate every single one!
Date: 07/19/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine
That was an intense chapter! Kevin acted like a major douche.. but at least they were able to get some issues out in the open. And finally Howie blows up, hehe. It only took how many years? :P Great chapter, Kristal!
Author's Response: Oh my goodness...Howie finally *gasp*...the whole world probably heard it, after all those years of keeping quiet.
Date: 07/19/09 07:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Eight
I'm glad they finally talked. Of course Baylee wouldn't want to stop being friends with Morgan, she should trust him more.
Author's Response: Morgan's logic was a little off, wasn't it? Sounds like me, sometimes, LOL.
Date: 07/19/09 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
So Morgan is going to skip 2 grades.. still that's a lame reason of her to cut off Baylee as a friend. The scene at the beginning where Sean didn't realize the "new girl" was Morgan was pretty funny.
Author's Response: Gotta love teenage boys and their "DUH" moments! Sean really did have a big one here, didn't he? I thought it was funny, too, though!
Date: 07/19/09 07:24 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six
Hahaha... loved them playing around with Nick and the toy guns. Too cute. I can understand Mason's concerns, so hopefully things with Kevin continue to get better and he is able to repair his relationship with his Dad.
Author's Response: Oh man, it would have been so much fun to be in on the toy gun fight, don't you think?
Date: 07/18/09 05:26 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five
Ha! I love the scene with them talking to AJ and gushing over how he'll propose. They're such girls LOL. I am interested to know what happened with this Nick and Ashley girl. Great chapter Kristal!
Author's Response: *gasp* Are you implying that they were acting like girls?!? O_O Ha Ha...they kinda were, weren't they?!? LOL> I am so happy that you're still enjoying the story. Thank you, Steph!
Date: 07/18/09 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four
I liked the last part, where Nick walk talking to Kevin with the counselor. It sounds like Kevin is well on his way to getting better, I hope it keeps up.
Author's Response: You know it can't be THAT easy, with Kevin.......or can it? Hmmm.
Date: 07/18/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Three
Um, what the hell, Morgan? Jeez she's acting stupid. At least Baylee is able to talk to Nick now instead of just shutting him out.
Author's Response: Uh oh...Morgan's acting all messed up...what on Earth could make her do that? Hopefully Nick and Baylee will keep the lines of communication open, and not let them get cut off again!
Date: 07/11/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
High School is such a hard time, trying to find yourself and all that. I wonder what's going on with Morgan, if she's really just having a teenage girl identity crisis or if it's something more.
Author's Response: Identity crisis' suck! Hopefully Morgan will figure things out quickly. But could there be something behind her strange behavior?
Date: 07/11/09 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Forty-One
What a way to break her arm haha. It's cute how concerned Baylee was. He's totally crushing on her and doesn't know it yet. Oh yes I also have to make another comment on Nick and the girl going out. Super cute. I love it.
Author's Response: Can you believe what a clutz she was? The poor thing! But hey, she's got the guys to help her out and take good care of her! Thanks for all the feedback, you know I appreciate every word!
Date: 07/11/09 07:09 pm Title: Chapter Forty
The karaoke was pretty great and seemed like a whole lot of fun. Their trip to the farm is definitely going to be interesting. Oh yes and Nick got a date with the girl who found Baylee? Too cute. Of course the romance writer in me is thinking "wow what a great premise for a story" lol. As usual, great chapter.
Author's Response: I've never really done karaoke, but by the sounds of it, it sure is fun! The romance writer in you will surely be satisfied at some point! LOL.
Date: 07/11/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine
LOVE! So much love for this chapter. Ok first of all the critic in me is going to come out and say that I adored the writing in it. It flowed very well and Morgan's metaphor to Baylee about her being late was awesome. Very descriptive and very real. That girl should not become a lawyer she should become a freaking psychologist!! I'm glad Nick did realize he was being kinda harsh, good on him to let up the punishment. Oh oh, I also really liked this line:
half a week for breaking curfew; half for your arguing and bad attitude; and half for sneaking out and scaring me, half to death.”
Very cute.
The journal entry was a great end to this chapter. A very nice tie in to everything that had just happened. Man I love this story. Man oh man lol. Kristal you are a GREAT writer. You have improved so much.
Author's Response: Hasn't Baylee mentioned it before, that she should be a psychologist? LOL. She really does seem to have these things together, doesn't she? Maybe Baylee will come to the realization that Nick really does care, and isn't just out to make life miserable. *muah* You know I love ya, Steph...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/11/09 06:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Ok... really now. Baylee is kind of acting like a major brat. Granted I think being grounded for a week..well two weeks now is kind of steep for 45 minutes, but Nick's the guardian and gets to make those decisions. Plus Baylee running away isn't exactly going to help things. Morgan's speech was right on the ball. He really does whine about Nick all the time. She really is the voice of reason in this story. My God we went from a funny study session to a screaming match in no time, but I guess that's what teen life is like isn't it? I'm interested to read the backlash.. and I won't have to wait cause I have 20 chapters or so left. There is a good thing about being late to the party after all ;)
Author's Response: Don't tell me that you think Baylee is a little on the spoiled side! *gasp* You gotta love morgan for telling him a thing or two, though...she's always the down to earth one, isn't she? Thanks for the awesome feedback!
Date: 07/11/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven
LMAO! Their conversation was just priceless. Also - Baylee getting the talk from Nick? HA! I can only imagine how awkward/amusing that must have been. This chapter was hilarious.
Author's Response: I loved writing this chapter...I was cracking up the whole time!
