Date: 01/28/09 10:11 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Two
hehehe it's sad but I can see that old lady smacking AJ with her purse and the look on his face at the same time.... PRICELESS!
Author's Response: Yeah...I could see it, too. Poor AJ. You know that something, like that, would only happen to him! I mean, the little old lady called him a 'hoodlum'! LMAO. He won't be wresting, with Baylee, in a parking lot any more! Thanks for reading. I appreciate the review!
Date: 01/28/09 09:17 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Two
just dropping by to say HI. ;) i read the chapter
Author's Response: Well hello, to you, too! ;-)
Date: 01/28/09 08:57 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Two
ahahahaha that old lady scene was hilarious.
hahahah
Author's Response: It could only happen to poor AJ!
Date: 01/25/09 10:38 am Title: Prologue
LMAO! You're right about that. Who cares how it happened? ;) Looking forward to more..
Author's Response: *snickers* Gotta love them, huh? There should be another update soon! :-)
Date: 01/25/09 12:33 am Title: Chapter Ten
I knew I had to have missed a chapter! Okay, now stuff a couple chapters later makes a lot more sense! Can't wait to find out how exactly Kevin became an ass to this extent! Dang! So of course I gotta now mention that you do a really good job of bringing up new questions to keep readers intrigued without just leaving a ton of things unanswered. Nice balance!
Author's Response: OOPS! I hate it, when I accidently skip over a chapter! As for Kevin...I took him WAY out of character here, and I bet you'll be surprised, when you find out why he's such an ass! I really appreciate how you point out what you like about the content AND structure, of the story. I was a bit unsure about the whole thing, when I started and I'm pleased that you find it to be well balanced. As always, thanks for reading and reviewing. *psst...I'm happy to see that you're around a lot, now, too!*
Date: 01/25/09 12:19 am Title: Chapter Eleven
LOL at the "Tickle Me Elmo Brawl". I haven't been caught in *that one* (fortunately none of mine were into Elmo) but I used to work for a store that sold Beanie Babies in the height of their popularity. Yikes!!! And I like that you're doling out only little bits of the journal at a time to let us slooowly get to see Brian's thought process (rather than going the route of having the whole journal as a chapter or spelling it all out too quickly.)
Author's Response: I was never in one of those "TME" brawls, either, but I did witness one. WOW! The things some people do. lol. I'm really happy that you like the way the journal was presented and all. That whole concept came by complete accident, by the way...and it is one of the things everyone has seemed to enjoy the most. LOL, go figure! Thanks, so much, for the nice reviews, Ash!
Date: 01/23/09 02:16 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
OMFG Kevin with a drug problem, I never saw that one coming!! What a nasty character he's turned out to be!
Love the sound of Maine though, wow, it sounds like a lovely place to go for Christmas with all that snow.
I'm enjoying this story so much :)
Author's Response: Who knew?!? I didn't see it coming either! lmao. Seriously...this is where I took Kevin sooooo far out of character. It's kind of odd having him be the ass. Anyways...Maine really is great. I love it there! *hugs you* Thanks for reading and leaving such nice reviews!
Date: 01/23/09 11:58 am Title: Chapter Eleven
That was so much fun at the food court!
Author's Response: Can't you just SEE it happening?!? I totally could and that made it hard to write because I was laughing so hard at the mental images!
Date: 01/23/09 06:31 am Title: Chapter Fifty-One
love it. why did Nick suddenly organized the get-together?
Author's Response: Oh come on...this IS Nick we are talking about here! Does anything he does ever make sense?!? LMAO. Like AJ said...who cares how it happened, the point is that it did! *grin* I'm glad you liked the chapter, hun!
Date: 01/23/09 04:25 am Title: Prologue
ohhh i never thought of that...I LIKE IT EVEN MORE NOW lmao
Author's Response: LMAO...LMAO...LMAO...
Date: 01/23/09 04:13 am Title: Chapter Fifty-One
I want more! I want see the trip, please make it ggooodd long and good
Author's Response: The trip starts, in the next chapter! Their trip is a week long, so you know it will be at least a few chapters! I've already started on it, so hopefully it will be up soon! Thanks for continuing to read, hun.
Date: 01/23/09 01:20 am Title: Chapter Fifty-One
good chapter Kris =) I liked that, haha i can soo see Nick jumping in the pool like that. Very well written
Author's Response: You only think it was a good chapter because you got the mental image of Nick all wet! LMAO!!! :-P
Date: 01/23/09 01:17 am Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Wow! Exciting party!!!! I was waiting for someone to get Kevin wet! Lmao!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you liked it, Lenni! I've already started working on the next chapter, so you shouldn't have to wait TOO long...then again...this IS me, lol. Thanks for being a faithful reader and reviewer!
Date: 01/23/09 12:10 am Title: Chapter Fifty-One
ha...ha...Baylee and his hormones kicking in, that's funny. Plus I liked Morgan and her rambling about them, talk about being obvious. lol!! It made me happy and slightly sad the part of Kevin interacting with everyone. I'm glad that he didn't react all angry, but he actually had fun and smiled...I could imagine him smiling. *Sigh* Very good chapter Kris, it turned out great. The party was a good idea.
Author's Response: I think it's obvious that Bay's hormones are kicking in some...at least he realizes it, LMAO. Oh and no....I don't think Morgan could have possibly been any more obvious!!! Yay for Kevin kinda being normal...but will it hold out? The big trip begins, in the next chapter...I guess we'll see what happens! Hey...thank you for always being there, when I need you. You know I love you, Er!!!
Date: 01/22/09 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Kevin is a complete asshole!!!! I'm so glad Nick stood up to him and threw him out. Also glad Nick is back to being himself instead of a Kevin clone (although in real life I love Kevin lol)
Loving this so much :)
Author's Response: YAY...we're starting to see the old Nicky, come back! Now, all we need to do is dig down, to find the old Kevin! Thanks, as always, for your reviews!
