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Reviewer: dolphingirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 04:32 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

wow i really thought that fists were going to fly  update real soon please love it

Author's Response: LOL...they were pretty close to a fist fight, huh? There should be an update soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Cartersbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 03:36 am Title: Prologue

nope hes a man...men are usually stupid like that lol

Author's Response: true...true

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 02:25 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

WTF?? Why's he cutting Brian down??? There's NOTHING wrong with Brian!!!!! And Baylee, if I were you, I'd grab that journal back pretty damn quick if you wish to continue reading it.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: UH OH...looks like Lenni is about to get her trusty stick out of storage! You haven't had to use it, on Kevin, in a long while! You know Baylee won't let Kev keep or do anything to that journal! There's another update, in the works!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 02:15 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight

Yay!!! They're fixed!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Phew...I was worried you forgot all about Bay! lol. I heart you, Lenni!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Wowza...another update, I need to steal some of your writing mojo :o)

What an explosive chapter!  I have to say that this trip to KY really isn't looking like it is a good idea.  I mean, come on, they can't even function in a counseling session with a trained professional there. I am interseted to see what the counselor says and what happens next!  Great update, hun!



Author's Response: I'm pretty addicted to these guys...I can't leave them alone, for too long! Hopefully them getting everything out now, will make the trip easier to handle. There's a lot more coming, so hold on! Thanks for reviewing, Darby, I'm really glad that you like the story!

Reviewer: Cartersbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 09:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

He hit Nick?!? Okay letttt me at him lmao. But wow, that was really touching...i loved how you made him break down and all that....good job =)

Author's Response: Lmao...Go ahead and beat him, if you want! Baylee has to break down, at some point, right? He might be a guy, but he can't keep it bottled forever! Thanks for the reviews, today, Kimby! I appreciate them all!

Reviewer: Cartersbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 09:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

awww Morgan was so sweet....she soooo likes him! That was really sad, but sweet at the same time. It's nice that Baylee has someone like that =)

Author's Response: Morgan is a sweetie, isn't she? Everyone needs a friend like that! Bay is pretty lucky but he doesn't even know the extent of it, does he?

Reviewer: Cartersbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 09:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Oh wow....that was intense. Well at least now I know how she died =( Super sad...butttttttttt MOrgan and Baylee are soo gonna hook up! Lol i had to throw that in =p

Author's Response: Yeah...it was a sad chapter. Damn Kevin and his assholeishness!

Reviewer: Cartersbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

awwwwwww i loved that =) Baylee and Morgan so are gonna hoook up...i think he's the guy she likes =) It's super cute i loved it!

Author's Response: LMAO...everyone thinks Bay and Morg are gonna hook up! But, you'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

LMAO, how flippin' perfect is that? Wait until everyone damn near kills each other and THEN the counselor speaks up. LMAO. I know you gave me a preview of this before you posted it and told me a little about what was going to happen, but the tension I felt while reading the chap multiplied tenfold, more so than when I was reading the preview. The way you allowed things to unfold made it so it was like the reader is there witnessing the argument take place. It was like watching a movie clip in my mind. Hell, even I wanted to step in and tell Kevin to sit his bitch ass down. You did a very good job with this chap Wifey! Keep up the good work and can't wait until you update again! :) [Ashley]

Author's Response: I know...the counselor was dumb! She's no help WHAT so ever! I'm glad that you were able to feel the tension...I wasn't sure if I portrayed that well, or not. Phew. I was really hoping the you guys could see it play in your mind, because I sure was seeing it! You can yell at Kevin, if you want. I'll try pumping out a chapter soon. Thanks, so much, Ashley!

Reviewer: barbyka16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

wow there sure is lots of tension
but as soon as they get everything out i hope kev goes to his oldself.i dont like this mean kev
oh and howie hehe he got sooo mad lol things really have to be bad if he gets so mad
anyway great chap and hope to see more updates soon

Author's Response: Things have definitely reached a breaking point. Even poor Howie can't take it anymore! Things will get better soon, I promise! Thanks for the review...I plan on having a new chapter soon!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 07:18 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

ouch. that got super intense after it seemed like therapy was going well.
but so relieved him and morgan are speaking again.
cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Everything is finally coming out, but hopefully it will help them all settle their differences. You had to know that Morgan and Baylee would patch it up! I couldn't not let them work it out...everyone loves them too much! Thanks for reading, I should have a new chapter soon!

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 06:13 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

Although I had already read it, I had to reread it. I love the confrontation, its crazy how one tries to defend the other and then gets sucked into the quarrel. I'm surprised at how angry AJ is and how much Nick holds back his own anger towards Kevin. Then Howie, I had to snicker again when I read his cursing part, very nice...I have to say that it's weird to read about my kevin as the bad guy. Yay I hope you do update soon since your on a roll. love ya!



Author's Response: Yeah...what a mess, eh? There are a lot more emotions, to come. Don't worry, Nicky won't keep it bottled for much longer...cuz all hell is gonna break loose! I'm so glad that you were able to pre-read, for me, because I was really nervous about this chapter. Thanks for all your encouragement, you know I appreciate every bit of it. *MUAH*

Reviewer: scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 05:58 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

i never really liked confrontations but it's always better to let it out in the open and communicate with others just to be able to let them know what is on your mind. thanks for this chapter. ;) i like it.

have a blessed new year! ;)

 



Author's Response: Yeah...I kind of had a hard time with this chapter, and will with the next, becasue I'm bad at confrontations. But you are right, it's better to get it out in the open, espescially since they'll be stuck in a car, together, lol. I'm glad you liked it, though. Thanks for the review and Happy New Year, to you, as well!

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 05:05 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine

that was so short, I need to know what is the deal between Nick and ashly gorl, and now Howie/kevin

Author's Response: Aw, hun, the Nick Ashley thing is a ways from being fully revealed. The stuff with Howie and Kevin will be described more in the next chapter though...and it should be up soon! I'm thrilled that you are still so into the story. Thanks a bunch, hun!