Date: 11/22/08 02:53 am Title: Chapter Forty-Five
How DARE Morgan not even give him an explanation for her behviour!!!!!!!!!! She's REALLY pissing me off lately!!!!!!!!!!!!
And what about this chic that keeps being mentioned? Ashley, wasn't it??? What did Kevin do to her & Nick!?!?!?!?
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: *snickers* I love your reviews, Lenni...you crack me up! Baylee will be finding out Morgan's secret soon...I promise! As for Ashley...well...you'll just have to wait and see. That's a bit more complex. I will be working on another update, so keep your eyes open!
Date: 11/22/08 12:49 am Title: Chapter Forty-Five
Poor Baylee!
Morgan needs to stop giving him the cold shoulder! I hope she's okay.
Yay for Alex and Riley! :)
And I'm curious about what happened with this Ashley girl. Sounds like it's gonna be a real tearjerker.
Author's Response: There are a lot of unanswered questions, aren't there? I can tell you that there IS something going on with Morgan and Baylee will be finding it out soon. The whole story of Ashley...well...that's gonna take a bit longer. But yes...YAY for AJ steping up and getting on one knee! *sigh* Nick's the only one left now! Thanks so much for reading and leaving me feedback, I appreciate it!
Date: 11/21/08 08:37 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five
awe poor bay I hope she talks to him soon.
Author's Response: Morgan and Baylee...yeah...they need to talk! Psssst...it's not too far away! *wink* Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/21/08 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five
Poor Bay! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aaaw, Baylee is having a rough time...but it's bound to get better. More soon!
Date: 11/21/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five
It's about time you update but it's about time I FINALLY leave a review! *smiles sheepishly* You had some tough emotions woven throughout this chapter, leaving me feel really bad for Baylee. I know we discussed a little bit about what's going on, but you did great with his emotions. I can't wait to read further and see your plans actually be put into words. Keep up the good work! And please, update soon! [Ashley]
Author's Response: *gasps and faints* She really DOES read this story! Here, all this time, i thought you were just saying that to make me feel better! lol. I was really worried about this chapter, I am glad everyone likes the way it came out. It's hard getting into Baylee's head...seeing as he isn't even close to being thing age yet. I am working on the next update...thanks for FINALLY reviewing! *muah*
Date: 11/21/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five
What did happen with this Ashley girl? I want to know!!! And Bay and Morgan have some serious shit to work out...because the gap is only growing stronger. And good for AJ proposing. I can tell him and his girl are so close. :o)
Author's Response: The gap is, indeed, growing larger. Baylee feels as if he is the only one feeling that gap, because Morgan's ignoring him. Perhaps things will get better soon. YAY...AJ and Riley finally said 'I love you' WHOOT. I am glad to liked that chapter, Ashley. Another one will be coming soon (maybe tonight!)
Date: 11/21/08 06:45 am Title: Chapter Forty-Five
Yay first to review...if no one else is reviewing righ this moment. then of course I've given them time to beat me with all this rambling. Anyways. I really liked the way AJ proposed, very different, he even including Baylee somehow. lol!! Then Riley's reaction was priceless, like we said definately something an AJ girl would respond. So I was so entused that Baylee was going to see Morgan and I know you had told me the outcome, but I was hoping you'd surprise me darn! I felt so bad for him about the tear at the end, he misses Morgan so much. I can imagine how he feels. They spent every freakin moment together. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen, although I kinda told me, but you always give it twists. Update soon!!!!! I mean it!!!!! love ya!
Author's Response: LOL...I tell you too much, woman! You already know what's to come in the next chappie...but you are right about me and my constant twists, so you never know! Thanks for always reading and reviewing, Erika...you know I luv ya!
Date: 11/16/08 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Eight
I got to say that Nick and Baylee in the backseat with their toys is too cute! I'm glad they are talking and getting somewhere and I just can't wait to see what kind of prank those two are going to pull on AJE. (sigh just saying the name)
Author's Response: LOL...you and I are in the same boat *swoons over AJ* that man is too hot, for his own good! Oh wait...about the story...right...lol. Nick and Baylee definitely had a unique relationship...question is, will they ever get it back?
Date: 11/16/08 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Wow those two are in a jumble of emotions there, Nick is being overy protective, cause he doesn't want to screw up. Yet he doesn't know that he's pushing Baylee away doing that. Then Baylee feels like he's a problem to Nick and that Nick doesn't like him. I get the impression that Baylee may be a tad bit jealous that Morgan has a date!
Author's Response: Nick is definately in a tough spot, and there is more than one reason for that! Baylee's perception of things is a bit off. He takes Nick's protectiveness, as a sign that Nick doesn't like him...in reality, Nick just cares. You are correct...it is a big jumble!
Date: 11/16/08 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Six
Ok, now I feel bad for the kid. To think that Nick hates him, now that is some sad shit! (Cringing at the words coming out of my mouth) Nick just feels very overwhelmed with the responsibility of taking care of Baylee. I have to say he's trying hard. Morgan? A girl best friend huh! Oh and now he found a journal that just might give him closure!
Author's Response: There really is a lot going on, isn't there? Nick and Baylee really need to just talk...they both have things that they need to just talk about. The journal will lead to a lot of things...closure just might be one of them! Thanks for all your reviews!
Date: 11/16/08 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Five
Holy Macrol those guys have nothing better to do, going to hunt ghosts. Damn fools! Now the last part of this chapter was plain out funny, they are such dummies and I was laughing along with them about Nick. I love AJ in this, he's such a role model (makes quotes)
Author's Response: Can't you see them wandering in an old rickety building, looking for ghosts? LOL. I am glad you like AJs character...I decided I didn't want him to be a dick in this story, haha.
Date: 11/16/08 10:29 am Title: Chapter Four
Now that was hilarious, Baylee messing up Howie's hair, that man could get run over a car and break a leg, but he'd be worried about his hair more than the leg. That was really nice that they cleaned up (go sexy AJ cleaning house) ok sorry...got sidetracked there. I'm really into this story. Very unique idea, but of course I gots to get some sleep. Erika did a good job in recommending this story.
Author's Response: ROFLMAO...I loved the bit about Howie being run over! Aaaw, I am glad you are really into it. Erika is kind of addicted, lol. I thank you much for all the feedback and hope the story will continue to keep your interest!
Date: 11/16/08 10:26 am Title: Chapter Three
Oh he saw that Nick was not kidding so he apologized and the whole nine yards! I'm surprised Kevin didn't jump at the chance to be the HERO. But they did make up and even said their 'i love U's'
Author's Response: The plot with Kevin is due to thicken...there is a lot going on there. But it was definately good for Baylee and Nick to have that moment. They both needed it!
Date: 11/16/08 10:20 am Title: Chapter Two
Oh shit! He's a bad one, my momma would have slapped me from here to china if I would have said the F word to her. I wonder why he's acting up? Besides being a teen. I was never that bad, but then again I had both my parents. Damn Nick is pissed and so is AJ and now Kevin is coming. I'd be very afraid Baylee!
Author's Response: My momma would have flipped on me, too. Baylee is just plain disrespectful. Being a teenager is only part of his issue, as I am sure you may know already. Anywho...I am glad that you seem to be enjoying the story!
Date: 11/16/08 10:15 am Title: Chapter One
That's my AJ, trying to slap some sense into that Baylee boy who, um...is a very big brat. Is it wise for a bad ass sexy man to even do that? I mean I would listen. Look at him hating (it hurts to say this) poor Nick.
Author's Response: Hey now! You have to share AJ...he can't be just yours! lol. I would listen to AJ, too. Baylee is a bit of a brat, right now...the relationship with Nick is rocky, but it may change over time. Thanks again for reviewing!
